After Double Cultivating with the Male Protagonist, All the Geniuses Line up to Compete for Favor.

It's very good-looking. It's finally not a whitewash. Why should the heroine please the hero and beg for his favor?

It's very good-looking, but the shortcoming is that it's not finished, and the pace is quite fast. It's good to see that this is the normal way of writing male protagonists in male videos. This is called cool writing. What the hell are those guys who pretend to be cool and abuse the female protagonist as a virgin? [Pout] The male protagonist should serve the female protagonist instead of conquering the relationship. It's no wonder that there are so many bros who watch female protagonists in female videos. [Facepalm]

I really like the heroine's personality. After she transformed into a vicious female supporting character in the book, she didn't follow the system requirements and tried to whitewash herself. Instead, she continued to strengthen the male protagonist. She is a role model for our generation [laughing evilly]. Stealing the opportunity and spiritual pet of the male protagonist, she is still a queen behind the scenes, working hard to cultivate and get a man [like]. Damn, please update it soon, I'm waiting to see it, hahaha

Good reviews, suitable for greedy girls. The male supporting characters are delicious when viewed from the female protagonist's perspective, rather than the female protagonist being seductive. The female protagonist is ambitious, does not hide her desires, and does not have a high sense of morality. She is very suitable for the world of immortality. She will not be coerced by the system to kneel and lick the male protagonist, to conquer and please the male protagonist, but focus on strengthening herself.

Long Aotian feels that in the gender-changing version, the heroine is just looking at a handsome guy [face covering] Visually, it should be the so-called harem story with a big heroine

There are some small plots in it that are a bit off-putting, but overall it's pretty good. The heroine plays a harem story. I like it [shy]

It feels so good, so good. Let the heroine continue to feel good like this, and she will recruit beautiful men to conquer the world of immortality.

The plot is okay and quite enjoyable, but the heroine often licks her lips. She "licks her lips" when she sees the treasure, and "licks her lower lip" when she sees the handsome man. If you ignore this, the overall rhythm of the plot is fast and not draggy, and the heroine becomes stronger very quickly.

The author's writing is very nice, the descriptions are very good, the meat is very fragrant, the characters are also very good, and the plot connection is also very smooth. I would like to give a suggestion to the author. The paragraphs should not be so big. It is easy for people to lose the desire to read a long paragraph. You can divide this large paragraph into several smaller paragraphs. The setting of the heroine is still very good. If you want to attract readers, it is best to change it. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's good, but there are too many people. See previous one. There should be some threshold

The protagonist's route is very good. The emotions are also very complete and the heroine is very happy, and there is a little bit of resentment about the supporting characters. For example, the sect leader [smirking], although the scene was about being seduced by a succubus, he felt sorry for his late wife and felt a little uncomfortable watching it, but because he was a passerby, he was not too touched.

The openness of this novel is comparable to that of the United States. The male protagonist is good-looking and has a feminine feel. Good-looking😄😄The heroine also has a good personality, very casual and free-spirited, and also very strong

It's great that someone finally wrote this kind of plot. The original protagonist was not good to the male protagonist, and then the female protagonist traveled back in time and wanted to please the male protagonist. Why am I saying this? It's a good idea to just kill him before he develops. Can't he kill him? Then grab all the opportunities and benefits

This book is very good, and it is really good for the female protagonist (//∇//), but one bad thing is that the male protagonist knows about the system. Although the female protagonist did not tell him, he still knows it. I think this is the female protagonist's life-saving weapon. How can he let him know?

Female-oriented, very delicious [shy][shy], the plot is also very good, the author, please give it a try [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I was attracted by the cover. I stopped reading after reading dozens of chapters. Then the author changed the cover to a nice one, and I was hooked again. Today I found out that the cover has been changed again. Let me see, can't I read it? [Adore][Adore][Adore]

At first I was in despair and was searching for gold in the sea of ​​excrement, until I came across this book. The writing was smooth and made me feel so comfortable reading it. The character descriptions, action descriptions, dialogues and scenes were all on point. Thinking of the agony of reading Xiaobai's writing style and drooling dialogue throughout, I couldn't help but shed tears [crying] Who understands the pain of literary shortage? Fortunately, I found this book

Very beautiful, the heroine is very happy, she has a harem [admiration]

Damn, the article is very nice, but can the cover be changed? I just took a look at it and thought the one in the middle was the Lord. The heroine seems to be a supporting actress, the harem of the Lord. Her legs are exposed, and the feeling of concentration is too strong @

It's very good-looking. There is no insult in the whole text. Nothing is as important as the thoughts of our heroine's baby. The heroine's baby is the best. Everything the heroine's baby does is right [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] This is a great heroine story. There is no abuse of the heroine [Like][Like][Like]

Hahahahahaha, the heroine is so beautiful and has a handsome man. It's so refreshing and not sloppy at all.

Very interesting (♥∀♥) with an interesting plot U^ｪ^U This novel deserves a full five stars! The rhythm of the story is tight and smooth, and the ups and downs of the plot will not make people feel boring at all. The characters created in the book are vivid and three-dimensional and very contagious. The writing is delicate and moving, with wonderful plot conflicts and thought-provoking hidden elements. After reading it, I have endless aftertaste. I sincerely recommend everyone to read it!

It's so refreshing and beautiful [laughs][laughs][laughs] The protagonist is so mad that he forgets his feelings and eats it happily. The plot is simple and neat, without procrastination, and you can eat it as you say. Moreover, it is not a cliché strategy, it is an opportunity to seize the dragon and proud sky.

It's very good, the female protagonist's feelings come first, and the male is very good at cleaning. The plot is also very good!

Why only less than 7 points? Although there are not many chapters now, I enjoyed reading it

Don't come in just because the ratings are low! ! The real heroine is so cool, the male protagonist Long Aotian has turned into a spoiled brat [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Very good! This is what a heroine should be like

Yes, it's mine, it's mine, the world is me, I am the world

The name is so special and big, it deserves to be remembered

It looks good. Please give me a five-star review to encourage you.