A Mourning Goose Fan Story: Pomegranate Red

I have read the latest chapter 21 so far. I admire the high-energy author who, while taking care of the heavy studies, can devote time to honing his writing and accumulating knowledge. He is indeed a master of science and knows everything. The level of the seven rhymes and lyrics and composition is very familiar, with almost no signs of being a novice. He has practiced blind guessing for at least three years, or at least accumulated the amount of works of an average poetry student for three years. If you have been filling in test papers since middle and high school, it is really rare to have this skill now. I stopped learning poetry halfway and had to learn from the author. The current chapters are rich in rhetoric and full of skill, and the writing style is undoubtedly far superior to Ji's (Ji's Qijue of the law does not need to be said to make the connoisseurs laugh). In addition to Aihong Tongren, it can also be read as a novel about world affairs to get a glimpse of the style of the late Ming Dynasty. However, in my humble opinion, in addition to technical skills, good works also need to have a solid mind, that is, having both form and spirit. The form of this work is beautiful, but the charm always leaves something to be desired. Fortunately, Gu Tinglin expressed the idea behind the work. I hope to enrich the conception, perfect the arc of the characters, and uphold the compassion. I can not only understand the general situation through talking about the situation with pen and paper, but also watch the fireworks of the common people on the streets and alleys. The appearance and difficulties of the scholars, prostitutes, farmers, and merchants in these troubled times are all returned to the workshop in a minute, and turned into the end of the green apple. A family's opinion, a humble opinion, for reference only. Although I have different opinions on some plot arrangements from the author, they are based on my own preferences and have no bearing on the quality of the work. The upper limit of this work is quite high. If the writing power is consistent, it will definitely not be left behind. A bookshelf has been added for further observation. Seeing that the author's reply was so serious, even though I am not talented, I still managed to sit upright. I hope this will be viewed by more readers.

I have been teaching for most of my life, and I have read a lot of articles. Nowadays, on a platform like Tomato, there are not many books that you can read over and over again in your mind for a few days. When modern people write, they tend to write fast food that pursues hot topics and cool writing routines, but rarely write honestly about the big times. This author is indeed different. He left the little feelings between Fang Sulin and the three of them in the war-torn days of the late Ming Dynasty. This is not a romance story about a talented man and a beautiful woman. These three were all dragged back from the edge of the fire pit. If a woman hides her most ugly and weak appearance for the sake of her sweetheart, she really cares about him. After a person has been bullied for a long time, it is really difficult to straighten his back again. The author not only has these few people in his eyes, but also the refugees fleeing along the canal and the coolies squatting on the docks waiting for work. From this book, I can truly feel that "a grain of ashes of the times becomes a mountain when it falls on an individual's head." I have said this to my students many times. I have been a teacher for half my life, and I know how difficult it is to step out of books and lower your head to shoulder the burdens of society. The writing style is good, I guess the author must have read Dream of Red Mansions carefully. With just a few words, the picture is right in front of you. Being able to write down the details in such a way that people will never forget them requires a lot of practice. Reading the comments, I guessed that the author must be young, and it is not easy to have such a calm mind. If given the chance, I plan to recommend this book to the children in my class.

Come on! The body of the words is at ease, the poems with true feelings, and the neat parallel sentences. The most important thing is that Pian Pian and Lao Fang finally lived out their lives as human beings, instead of being regarded as symbols of pain by J0. The author will continue to update! 😄😄

After reading so many secondary novels, this one by the author is the most realistic. I was deeply touched and really wanted to write a review. Other fanfics are either time travel or do-overs, and many of them are sweet for the sake of sweetness, and to relieve regrets. Only this article is a full and rich extension of the background and character of the original work, and successfully breaks out of the original story frame (Yan's death, amnesia, madness, negative Pian, etc.), Especially the change of the ending of Yan's death, so that Yan's character can get out of the barrier of death and white moonlight, and truly live in the eyes of readers with a strong and forbearing attitude. And I think this change is particularly wonderful, fighting poison with fire really shines for me. Secondly, unlike other fanfics that seem to have the flavor of Internet literature, the language of this article is close to ancient prose, with gorgeous diction and full of connotations. There are many poems and essays that I really stopped to appreciate. The more I read, the more interesting it becomes. I have to admire the author's literary talent. At the same time, the plot arrangement is quite excellent, with many foreshadowings and references. The mines laid in the front will explode later, and the small ingenuity buried in the front will turn into tears later. It can be said that the structure is rigorous. Finally, I think this novel has a strong sense of realism. This article is said to be a fanfic, but it gives me the feeling that the author uses the characters of the original work to write about the late Ming Dynasty in his heart. Other fanfics also write about social chaos and suffering at the bottom, but they only write about "social chaos and suffering at the bottom" in a simple and straightforward way. The author is different. Through a series of penetrating group portrait descriptions and the inner monologue of the protagonist, I can sincerely feel the desolation of that era and the frustrations of the protagonist group. In the author's writings, I saw the ugly faces of the villains, heard the stories of the Liuxiang woman who never met her "Fang Zhiyou", and felt the comfort and suffering of the lucky ones who had experienced hardships and gained happiness... All these things show that the author's writing power is profound and can be said to be as broad as a rafter. Finally, I really wonder why not many people seem to read such a good fanfic. 🧐 I wonder if the title of the novel is a little discouraging? "Second creation" is a bit procedural, and "gray red" is confusing. If someone hadn't recommended it in the comment section when I was playing Aihong's Second Creation at Station B, I would have really missed such a masterpiece.

I have never played the game "Aihong", I just picked it up casually. Quite emotional, this is a rare non-routine novel in Tomato. Rather than saying it is a second creation of that game, it is better to say it is a late game. Novels about worldly affairs in Jiangnan during the Ming Dynasty. This book is based on Yangzhou, Suzhou and Hangzhou in the late years of Chongzhen. Taiwan, weaving a chapter that combines the depth of worldly sentiments with the character of a scholar A long story about returning to the body. The core achievement of the novel is to shape Fang Zhi You, Su Lianyan, and Lin Pianpian struggled to overcome their respective predicaments. Characters who struggle to emerge and transcend worldly structures among themselves The emotional bond between the two explores the abnormality and possibility of "emotion" in troubled times. Can. This is not a simple romance narrative, but a story about "three lives". "Stay together to the death" as its core, it writes a story based on sharing weal and woe and sharing the same A life contract of advance and retreat. In terms of style, the work consciously inherits the tradition of worldly love novels in the Ming and Qing Dynasties. The poetry and the text are intertwined, the narrative density is consistent, and the line drawing skills are Husband is particularly outstanding. With just a few strokes, he can outline the canal pier, birthday banquet, etc. Live scene in the hall. What deserves more attention is that the novel does not indulge in the love between children. Instead, personal destiny is closely related to the grand historical process of the dynasty's future. Tightly stitched. Through the skyrocketing price of rice, the loss of money in banks, and the network of refugees Detailed realism such as interpretation, elegant collection of tone changes, etc., Make the "roaring" story The atmosphere of the times penetrates into the texture of daily life, thus completing It has become a calm reflection on Jiangnan society in the late Ming Dynasty from prosperity to collapse. Now that I have seen the latest episode, I know that you have left the study. Out, reaffirming "study" in businessmen's entertainment and realistic frustrations The process of "what do people do" touches on a long-standing issue in Chinese literature. A proposition that continues for hundreds of years: how literati can settle down in troubled times. I hope the author can continue to write this story with the same writing skills in the future. Things until the book is finished. See.

I gave it a rating before, but I don't know why it was deleted by the platform. I checked the book's homepage and found that the five stars were empty 🤦, so I decided to rewrite a paragraph. As for the content of the work, I believe that the public's eyes are sharp, and everyone's heartfelt words in the comment area are already in front of me, so I won't say more about Che Lulu. As a former high school liberal arts student and now a graduate student in social sciences, I really admire the author, not only for his writing skills and knowledge reserves, but also for his humility and tolerance and his drive to delve into difficult problems (as someone of the same age, I have always been called "you" and "your Excellency" by respectful addresses, which also feels very useful 😳). I believe that the author encountered many lapses and inconsistencies in the writing process, as well as problems in character creation and plot development. The main body of Shiqinghua and the 10,000-word chapter are not only difficult to write, but in this impetuous reality and platform, it can be regarded as either a hit or a hit. From April to now, I deeply feel that it is not easy for the author to maintain such high-quality updates after studying, especially the Hangzhou chapter. It is difficult to write down without some real skills and strong core. He is worthy of being a talent in science and engineering. He can not only settle down for a long time to overcome difficulties, but also has rigorous logical ability and the construction of a comprehensive knowledge network. I really admire him. In fact, since the early days of updating, I have developed the habit of reading what the author has to say before reading the updated content. In fact, the author, even if you list all the comments in our comment section, it is not even half of what you can imagine and write 😂, but he still actively shares with us the current writing situation and content ideas, and also solicits suggestions and reading thoughts and patiently replies one by one. It can be said that he is very humble and gentle, and he is the ideal image of an outstanding young literati. The author has always said that he is happy to have met like-minded readers because of this writing. Why am I not? How can I say that it is not my honor and joy to be able to browse the secondary creation area because of this game that is considered a niche and not worthy of being called excellent, and to have the honor to read the author's work. While enjoying it, I can also glimpse the tip of the iceberg of the outstanding qualities of a young talent through the screen? 😄 I wish you smooth writing, good data (score is over 7, a good sign), complete the book, success in your studies, and a happy life!

Among all the second creations, it has the clearest narrative and logic, the most thoughtful plot, and the most colorful characters. Teacher, if you give the order now, we will immediately recommend you as the orthodox

It's been almost a month since I watched "Aihong", and the more I watch it, the more reluctant I am to fast forward. The author's writing style is particularly delicate. He does not use rhetoric, but he writes deeply about the fireworks in the streets of the late Ming Dynasty and the struggles of small people. There is no bloody love triangle, only the warmth of three people supporting each other. Each character is vivid and three-dimensional, not a tool. I will keep chasing it and look forward to the follow-up.

It's rare to see a second-generation fanfiction with such original intention. The author doesn't want to treat Yangzhou 10th and Shave Your Hair and Change Clothing as sparrows. Instead, he writes down his heart to write about everyone's choices in the tide of the times. Lin Pianpian and Su Lianyan are finally no longer tool men.

It is basically a second creation that completely conforms to the character setting of the original work. If I insist on saying that it is inconsistent with the original setting and makes the two world lines separate, I think it is the fifth chapter when Zhiyou saw Pian Pian who had just received a guest. His pity was slightly greater than his disgust, and he chose to approach Pian Pian again. Then there is a setting that is a bit out of touch with reality, but it feels like it is not completely out of touch with reality. The fake acne pill and the people who sell it feel a bit half-human and half-immortal. After all, the effect of this pill was strategic at the time, but this is a compromise made by the author of the book to resist the original author Ji Lingjia's setting of an incurable disease that shows the effect of "ALS". Compared with other articles that talk about gods or the system's consequences, forced and thorough treatment is much more "human". The last and least important thing is that the author is confused in writing. He seems to have adjusted Pianpian's age by two years, and adjusted the time of his first meeting with Zhiyou, but all important event nodes are consistent with the original work (especially before the fifth chapter). If you don't believe the above, you can check it yourself and @me. If it's really something I didn't find that doesn't match the original work, I will change the comment and apologize. The writing is delicate and logical, great book!