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Although there are signs of AI. But the overall outline and story line are okay. Everything is ok except for Duan Ping, a god who always wants to make pornographic remarks about female characters. . . . The ratio of male to female supporting actors is almost one to one. I hope to add some foreign players in the future. After all, there is no country for salary. The driver brother and his wife are both pretty good. They can see the big from the small. The NPC characters are all very detailed and not brainless.

I have caught up with the latest chapter. I haven't seen any poisonous points so far. The logic is rigorous and there are some exciting points. The depiction of "the ancestors marching forward with heavy burdens" is also very contagious. It is a very beautiful book about salvation, which is at the level of fairy grass.

It's so well written. Why do so many people read it? The guys who watched it were so into the drama. They knew clearly that the protagonist made up the story, but they were always moved and it was hard to hold on. It's just too little. Brother, I caught up with the latest chapter in two hours. Who can resist it? I just watched it. Foreigners saw it and thought we were more unworthy. Update it now. Update it immediately. The person who urged me to update it has 10 updates each! [Eat melon]

The new book has just been released. Although I haven't read the author's other books, this one looks pretty good so far. There are just some places where I would like to make some suggestions, so that this book can go further. The first thing to deal with is the problem of expression. Some organizations can use other terms instead, otherwise it may have a bad impact. There are also some logical problems. For example, the character's emotional expression is not very normal and is too intense. The female CEO did not understand the protagonist's fabricated background at that time, so the emotional color is not that great. Shedding tears can be changed to a heavier mood. There is a supernatural influence on emotions, and the female CEO's reaction is quite reasonable. I hope this book will not cause trouble and you can live a normal life.

It looks good, come on, don't collapse, keep maintaining this level! ! ! ! ... There will be too few of this kind after the Shuguang swindle is gone.

I finished reading it in one sitting. There are a few minor flaws, but they are still within my acceptable range. The story is very exciting, and we are looking forward to how the subsequent story will be revealed to us. May the author write when he is tired, write when he is thirsty, write when he is hungry, write when he is asleep, write when he is awake, and write all year round.

All 99 chapters have been read. The overall story frame is well designed and the transitions are natural. The behind-the-scenes flow of the revival of spiritual energy gives people an eye-catching feeling, especially the historical flashback (although the setting is improvised, it can only end with the reincarnation or rebirth of the protagonist's hourly fire soul character.) The creativity of giving all members a sense of participation already has the potential of 8.5 Points. The character portrayal is too deliberate, and the perceptual white text has a sense of sight and a little loveliness. These problems are not big, and it can be improved a little later. I found out that the author is also a 6-book prisoner. Based on the level of performance, this book will eventually get a score of 8.3. If other minor issues can be improved, there is a chance to become a god with 9 points (but changing habits is a double-edged sword and be cautious).

The writing is very good, the protagonist is very strong, and he does not take care of the members. The salvation organization does not belong to any country, but belongs to all mankind. This is worthy of 5 stars, but it is too little. The author insists on it.

It's a pretty good organizational story, but there are a little too many female characters.

After two weeks of reading about AI stories, I finally found one that I can watch. The male protagonist could be a little stronger to be worthy of being a firebender. The update should be faster. I'll give it 4 stars and look forward to it.

So far, the logic is thorough and the rhythm is very well controlled. It is very interesting.

It's basically a text written by AI+human beings. The idea is pretty good, and there are traces of an old book from where I started (I forgot the name but the routine is similar). Overall, it's quite readable (I've read about 100,000 words for now).

This is a rare gem of a behind-the-scenes article about a new product. It is well-written, the protagonist is in character, the layout is large, and the writing is average, but when it comes to writing about knives, it's like a god. Five stars are considered as encouragement points for new authors. I hope they don't die from this.

The AI ​​is fine, so it's okay to pass the time, but don't pay too much attention to the details.

Let me give it a five-star encouragement. Although the AI ​​flavor is too strong in many places, few people have written about this subject. I have the impression that there is a similar book in Qidian. This book is doing well now, I hope I can stick to it

It looks good. I got a system and imagined an organization. Three years later, alien beasts attacked the earth on a large scale and developed the Japanese yen. The first was a chaebol, the second and third were hackers and a doctor. Quite interesting

Catch up on the latest chapter, from the beginning to the present, from layout settings to guidance to completing a series of tests, and finally became a truly qualified Xinhuo. There are no major shortcomings to say. It is very good. Come on and update.

Oh my God, I look good! This world view is really big and I feel so happy! The male protagonist created an organization by himself, pretended to be cool, and actually saved the world. He was so handsome [Adored]

It's very interesting. I finished it by accident. I feel that the score shouldn't be so low. The progress of the plot is okay, but I feel that the distribution of copper coins is too few. According to the protagonist's setting, the descendants who have passed down the fire for thousands of years should be developed everywhere. Although future generations have forgotten or do not know their identities, the number of copper coins handed down should also start to pave the way for more and wider generations.

Progress: 71 Beautiful! The global invasion is not only weird but also has all kinds of strange beasts. The male protagonist is the one who organizes the game. He doesn't look at the borders but only the souls. Currently, he has recruited 3 members and has formed the prototype of teammates. We look forward to the follow-up.

I recently discovered some very simple and pure books, but I don't know why the ratings are relatively low, so I still want to say something. At present, this book is just like the previous monster-killing and upgrading games like Legend or Diablo. You get one experience point with one blow. It is not complicated and a bit boring, but it is very exciting because you can level up in a short time. Moreover, related social and national affairs are basically covered in one sentence, without too much thinking and without too much interference. So, let's take a look and let's return to the world of cool writing that is simple and not brainless.

The subject matter is quite new! The story has a good rhythm! Very logical! The content is really good! Really deserves high marks! It's a good book worth recommending, and it won't be a loss if you read it!

I have only read 10 chapters so far, and it deserves to be rated as a perfect work. The writing skills and emotional shaping are all works with a depth that far exceeds Xiaobai's writing. In fact, this can be regarded as a cool article, but it is not an ordinary cool article. This is a cool article with a high enough quality.

Support the author greatly [adoration][adoration][adoration] The system is pretty good, the world view is pretty good, the character of the protagonist is pretty stable, and the characterization of each character is pretty good. The pace is a bit slow, it is a slow novel. The career creation aspect is inheritance. For ordinary people in the book, they can directly inherit their fighting consciousness and avoid the shortcomings of not being able to fight. However, the system can continue to be improved, and new occupations and new gameplay methods can be continuously developed.

Chapter 46 now, it's not toxic at the moment and it's very enjoyable. The logic is also very clear. The fabricated background is very awesome. It's worth reading.

It is really well written, almost every word gave me goosebumps, and I felt like crying😭. The writing style of the whole text is very smooth, the details are vividly described, and the core ideals are great. I finished it in one go. Everyone, every sentence, and every core point of view are well written. They are definitely not fake.

It looks very good. I want the protagonist to be equipped with a watch that detects space fluctuations and eyes that can display the detailed information and weaknesses of extraterrestrial evil spirits. Finally, I beg the author not to stop updating [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The writing is quite nice, but there are too few words. The author quickly updated it_φ_(..) Writing homework୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭

38.4 Is reading, and there are more than 2,000 online reminders. Your book is bound to be popular. After reading the plot and writing, there is no problem. If you follow it up steadily and burst the update, the author has a chance to squeeze into the top Tomato author, so hurry up and don't wait for the guarantee. Don't waste your chance to become popular. Do you know what level you are reading for a new book with more than 200,000 words and 400,000 words? There are only so many opportunities in life. Seize it. You have every chance to enter the honor list.

This book reminds me of a book I read a long time ago. It was called The Natives of This World Are Too Fierce and was later renamed Alien Impact... It is also a fictional ancient salvation organization with a very grand structure. There was no AI creation at that time and it all relied on imagination... If the author is not good at writing, he will not be able to control the entire plot. This book has not yet passed a hundred chapters, and it has a bit of that flavor. I hope it is better than that one...