How a cold man found warmth in a strange time and space - an orphan who had never had a home found his true home in ancient times. The gangster's ruthlessness is the outer shell, and the protection of his family is the core. When readers finish laughing and feeling happy, and they can leave a trace of the warmth of "It's a good home" in their hearts, the story will be successful.
Reader comments
There is a little problem. Many detailed descriptions are repeated. Some actions or appearance descriptions are also written repeatedly. They are exactly the same. I don't know if it was created by AI, but this subject matter is very special. Keep reading.
I think it was written by AI. There are too many repetitions. The sentence "If the conscious body has pupils" can be found if you search for information in space! Some paragraphs are written repeatedly, which makes me a little annoyed.
There is a little problem. Many detailed descriptions are repeated. Some actions or appearance descriptions are also written repeatedly. They are exactly the same. I don't know if it was created by AI, but this subject matter is very special. Keep reading. I think it was written by AI. There are too many repetitions. The sentence "If the conscious body has pupils" can be found if you search for information in space! Some paragraphs are written repeatedly, which makes me a little annoyed.