Villain: the Yanderes Don't Want Me to Retire

It can be seen that the author put his heart into it, two points for the text frame and one point for the writing. There are still two points left. One is that the wording and sentence construction are rough, and there are even some sick sentences. Second, the pacing is a bit draggy, giving up coherence for description. However, this is the author's preference. In fact, there is no need to worry too much about what the readers think. Therefore, it is obviously a four-point score, but in fact I only give it a three-point score. Reading this article is like a bowl of chicken soup without skimming off the oil. The base taste is good and the ingredients are well matched. However, the oil is not skimmed off, which affects the taste somewhat. In my opinion, I could skim off more oil and make the soup clearer. Guaranteed to have both color and flavor.

I'm back, hope you like it

Give the author 5 stars to encourage you, but let me tell you about the problem. First of all, the dialogue characters in the article are a bit vague, and sometimes I don't know who is speaking. Secondly, I feel that the Riddler is a bit too much. Maybe the author wants to slow down the pace, but I also hope that the pace is faster, and subsequent chapters should be written faster.

Very delicious! The causes and consequences of the story, including the setting background, are very detailed, and the plot arrangement is also very logical, but why is there so little "text"? [Crying] I want to be sick🥰🥰🥰

I went to live, and the new books are still good, so is there any possibility of the old books being revived?

I finally saw that the IQs of both parties were online and I learned how to analyze them. I like this kind of yandere article.

Five stars for encouragement. I feel there is potential. The author wants to write in a weird direction, but there is too little information at the moment. It's a bit confusing. Please save more.

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Fine. The male protagonist is flexible in thinking and responds quickly. The female protagonist's character is also well created [laughs] (first time storytelling)

. . . Oops, I barely give it five stars. Because writing about time travel in yandere novels is also a poisonous point.

Haokan loves to see more

It looks okay from the front

The IQ of the heroes and villains online

Super invincible and beautiful

Good books need no words

Call me brother, hurry up, this is my order

A good book would be nice if it could be updated quickly.

It looks pretty good so far.

It's okay for me. I'll give it my support first. After all, there's a lot of foreshadowing. Let's see how the follow-up plot goes. My head hurts from watching it, could it be less suspenseful? Add more emotional descriptions, and keep writing suspense. There are very few about yandere, and it was never interesting. I felt like sleeping while watching it. It was so boring that it even made me quit.

So far, it looks pretty good. Come on, author.