#Transmigration #System #InfrastructureBuilding #Farming #Lord #Comedy #AlternateWorld
My name is Lin Hua. I was a corporate drone in the twenty-first century, but after dying from working overtime, I transmigrated into a border baron in another world.
The good news: I have land, a castle, serfs, and a beautiful wife from one of the capital’s most powerful noble families.
The bad news: My land is in the kingdom’s most remote, impoverished backwater. The castle is so drafty you could play it like a whistle, and the serfs are so hungry they can barely walk.
The worse news: My wife was part of a political marriage arranged before my family fell. The day after she married me, I was exiled.
The way she looks at me now is exactly the way her father looks at the lame old horse in the stable.
[Ding,]
[The Lord’s Development Guide has successfully bound itself!]
[Host has taken control of the territory. Current territory rating: F (a complete disaster)]
[Beginner’s quest: Repair the roof of the lord’s castle and make sure it stops leaking when it rains]
[Penalty for failure: The System will play “Turtle Congee and Factory West” on repeat every time it rains until the roof is fixed]
I looked at the System panel, then out the window at the wheat field so barren it could be used to film a post-apocalyptic movie. Then I looked at Vera upstairs, fretting over a half-altered curtain.
Fine. I’ll fix the roof first, then pay off the debt and get this place on its feet.
Empty talk harms the country; hard work makes it prosper.
It's okay, just average. The author's writing style is very refreshing and gentle. The front part is very gentle and flowing, and the love between him and his wife is also very touching. It warms the heart of a pure lover like me. But when I started to form the guard team later, the impression was not good. The description of the Red Army is really weird from time to time. Does the author remember that the setting is the European Middle Ages? But the writing is still good, and the plot is well paced, but it's just not to my liking. Objectively speaking, this book is still highly recommended, but it is really not suitable for people like me who like quiet farming and infrastructure construction.
So far I have read that the writing is very good. This is the first time I have seen a down-to-earth article. I really like the feeling of developing step by step. Good luck, author.
Take it step by step, be practical
Very life-like daily life, the author should have experience There are "a few" everywhere, and there is no approximate amount. In the first chapter, he went to sell goods for a few silver coins, and in the next chapter, he directly paid back the 300 gold coins he owed. The progression of the plot is very abrupt, especially when it comes to the design of personnel, it is still the same old "several", which is very dramatic. , From beginning to end, it is all about the number, the population, the weapons, the personnel, the gold coins, the children, the men, the women, the guards, the squad leaders, the platoon leaders. It is obviously a farming culture, and the monetary system and the economic system are about zero.
Very nice, a bit unique
Warmth, daily life, farming, pure love, a perfect Western fantasy novel, so good-looking!
It can be seen that this is an AI article. It is very difficult to find a good hand-written book on Tomato this year😫 But at least the author will listen to opinions. Please give it a five-star review.
The writing is very good. I have never liked reading system articles, but this one is really good. The development is very practical, the system is very considerate, and the relationship develops steadily. I am optimistic about the author 👍👍👍
Added a bookshelf, great potential for writing
Great style, I like it very much, keep it up