A Rough Guy with Scars, He Pretends to Be Stupid!

What about this article. It is very thin and has a long flow of water, but one of its shortcomings is that it is not detailed enough. The author should want to write about the more delicate emotions and express those emotions through the surrounding scenery and actions, but it feels like every action is written in too much detail, and it will be really tiring to read the whole story. Everything that should happen in an instant is broken down into several steps. Writing in this way can indeed appear delicate and at the same time highlight some emotional expressions. But there are too many moments like this, and it seems very procrastinating to write down, and it makes the reader very tired. It's when you read a long paragraph that you realize that it only took a few minutes to do a few actions. This means that the writing is too detailed. For me, the style of the whole novel is quiet, that is, very boring, like one step at a time, down-to-earth kind of stability, even though the expression of emotions in it is relatively obvious, such as sentences like "I like so and so" very much. But it's very strange, just read the whole article. On the contrary, you will feel that his emotions are very obscure, and this is about writing those emotions in special detail, integrating them into the descriptions of the environment, actions, and expressions. This can be regarded as a kind of author's style. If the author wants to change his style, maybe he can try to be more detailed. Overly detailed descriptions can be shortened. Another point is that the sentences are slightly repetitive. For example, if the same emotion is expressed repeatedly, it feels like it comes to an end. It's still the same question that's not detailed enough. This is the biggest problem. Maybe the author can try using line drawing. It is to use a few short sentences to describe some big scenes, or to talk about a person's complex mood. It can be summarized in one sentence, but that sentence is very profound. For example, he just looked at him deeply. Then put this sentence in different contexts and it will have different meanings. And the emotion seems more layered. Some are directly laid out by describing the environment and actions in sentences, and some are deeper and full of profound meanings that need to be interpreted by our readers. It's just that I'm not sure if the author is afraid that readers won't be able to interpret the emotions in the words he wrote. I had this problem when writing novels before. I was afraid that readers wouldn't be able to interpret the emotions in them, so I would write very long sentences to express some of the emotional changes between them in a very delicate way. But in fact, some of this kind of thing can appear, but writing it like this all the time seems very procrastinating. Of course, the above comments are based on my personal understanding. Different people have different experiences and psychological processes, so their sensitivity to text and the style requirements of the article are also different. Only represents my personal opinion.

It is a very heart-warming article. It is not so much about the mutual redemption between the protagonists, but more about the brilliance of human nature. Most of the people in the article are kind people. They will lend a hand if they can be helped. They will always consider and take care of others. The overall environment is comfortable, safe and comfortable, so that people can get used to the warmth and coldness of human beings in the last days. The protagonist gradually lets go of his guard and tries to accept and integrate. The people of Stone Village cover Yunlin's heart. Yunlin rewards everyone with a richer and safer life. Everyone is moving towards a better future step by step. The days are dull and warm, and there are occasional bumps in the middle, but they are always properly handled. In short, it makes the hearts of those who watch it warm. Finally, Brother Huzi and Liner are a perfect match! A match made in heaven! Each other's destined treasures! It's so beautiful, I highly recommend it——

In fact, the plot or the characters of this article did not particularly attract me, but the uncles and aunts in the article really made people feel warm in their hearts. Apart from a few top-notch ones, I kept sighing that it is so good, so good, everyone is a very good person.

Among the pile of Geer literature, this is a rare article that is not written by Geer. The characters are very lifelike and humane, and the characters are three-dimensional. After reading so many articles, I can see that this clan truly protects the people in the clan, and the elders in the clan really consider the younger ones. The villagers also get along very well with each other, and they are independent thinkers, unlike other NPCs who just follow what others say. There are some top quality, but her appearance is reasonable. Unlike other articles written with the best quality, this one is purely designed to irritate the readers. One thing I personally don't like is that the clan affairs and relatives are written in such detail, even the inner thoughts of the little animals are written out. After Yun Lin's stupidity, there weren't many scenes with Yan Hu. Yun Lin made soap, gadgets, and Yan Hu's work were not written in detail. Yan Hu and Yun Lin's shadow could only be seen when Yun Lin came out. I'm exaggerating a little, but when I was watching, I kept thinking about when Yun Lin and Yan Hu would come out? What are they doing? So I personally prefer stories that unfold from the perspective of the protagonist. This article is written in the direction of group portraits! Compared with the same template farming articles, this article is already very good.

This book is very well written. The author has strong writing skills, perfect logic, is unconventional, and the story is smooth. The readers feel warm in their hearts. First of all, what attracts me most is that the protagonist is very smart. He traveled to ancient times and knew how to disguise himself and use everything around him to survive smoothly without giving up his feelings easily. The most important thing is that Aunt Fang is really smart. In her, I saw what a village chief's wife who can afford a clan should be like. She is very good at testing outsiders and decisively handling things. Secondly, the people in the village have a down-to-earth character. I think this is what a better village should have. There are no bad intentions or shrewd calculations, but some small flaws can also be seen in people. This is a normal person. Furthermore, although the protagonist has traveled through time, there is currently no design in which the protagonist is omnipotent and can only rely on the protagonist to solve problems. This is particularly good. The relationship between Brother Huzi and Lin'er has been flowing for a long time. Just like what is written in the article, the calluses on their hands are in different locations, but they are all in the palms of their hands. It made me cry all of a sudden. This subtle sense of fate sprouted little by little as the story unfolded. There are also those very delicate descriptions, from seeds to details of handicrafts. I can feel that the pines of Daqingshan are really coming from a distance, wave after wave. After thinking about it, I feel that this is rural China. Although the technical level is not as good as it is now, people are still human beings, and people in that era also had the ability to live a good life. At last! The author is so awesome! ! The average length of a chapter is eight to nine thousand words. It is really a very high-quality article. You must keep writing it! I found another treasure in Little Tomato, hahaha! (I see a lot of novels that state in the introduction that the ratings will increase after the book is launched. Sometimes when I see this, I am more willing to click in and take a look. The author should consider this method hehe)

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I decided to give it a perfect score. I have read a lot of books recently, and I couldn't finish many of them, but this one is very good. This is like a person who has traveled through the apocalypse. He is wary of people and does not trust others easily. Although the rough guy's love at first sight is a bit cliche, the author writes some small things very touchingly, and the chapter is very long [laughing and crying] I haven't encountered a chapter with more than 10,000 words in a long time. I will continue to read slowly after finishing the article. The current development is quite to my liking. I don't know why the rating is not high.

It's been a long time since I've seen such bland writing on Tomato, without intense character conflicts (at the moment I'm reading the plot of Lin Wanwan). And it not only portrays the image of the protagonists, but also portrays the simple and friendly side of the villagers through the lives of the protagonists, which makes me feel like reading a border town. If I have to talk about shortcomings, I think the plot of Overwatch is a bit hard on the protagonist's character developed in the end of the world, which is a bit disconnected from the plot. But despite its flaws, it is a good book. Come on, author [please update]

The writing is very good, the writing style is perfect, I read the whole content carefully. Although the author's final ending is sudden, it is not abrupt. Just like the author said, their relationship has become perfect. There is no need to add more details. The author stopped the loss in time. It is very good. I look forward to the author's future works [Sending Hearts]

It looks good, it looks good, why is the rating so low? There aren't many readers, just over a hundred comments, so I recommend it! A bright future for all! I hope the old man will strive to be a hundred years old! Li'er will also become a Jinshi in the future! If you don't want to go to the capital, then don't go. There's no point in it. Just develop the village. [Sending my heart] By the way, I have to find a wife for Yi'er. [Laughing][Laughing][Laughing]

It's been a long time since I've seen such a delicate novel. It doesn't have the explosive conflicting excitement of Shuang's novels. It's just a long-running family story, warm and emotionally delicate and three-dimensional. Although some of the protagonist's plots have some surreal and cool elements, it makes people feel that the people in the village are extremely vivid and real. Although the plot of the latest three chapters is not over, Liu Wanwan's character is very emotional. She is not a pure bad person. Once upon a time, she was also a simple and innocent girl who was loved by her elders. But unknowingly, maybe because of selfishness, maybe because of pride, maybe because of inferiority, she gave up her original identity for a better life. Simple, a person with weak willpower. After experiencing the blow of having no children, her life was confused and she saw a life of drunken dreams and death, and all kinds of ghosts and monsters, her psychology became twisted and paranoid, and she even did not hesitate to imitate the worst in order to destroy the happiness of others. In the end, she became completely different and lost her original self. A few childhood memories of the village chief turned a flat villain into a person who lost herself in life, but it is undeniable that the selfishness in her bones is fatal, both to herself and those around her. (Actually, there is a lot more I want to write but I don't want to think about it anymore, so I abbreviated it a bit) I just thought it was very heart-warming, a story about two little bitter gourds redeeming each other. After reading the latest three chapters, I thought it was just a story about a villain acting like a monster and then getting slapped in the face. A childhood memory made me, a poisonous woman, burst into tears. I don't pity anyone. People are bad when they are bad. (I don't believe in reforming evil. As long as you succeed in doing bad things, you can do it countless times once. Damn it, why don't you be so world-weary?) I was just moved by a relatively three-dimensional and real character, and with such a patriarch, why should this clan have a bad life? Okay, no more nonsense. In the end, the two-way redemption couple will always be together like this, always sweet, okay? Although I may forget this book if I keep reading, I wish the author better and better [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The author's writing style is online, and his words are simple and down-to-earth. It can be seen that the author has carefully prepared the materials. The relationship between Yan Hu and Yun Lin is very sweet and down-to-earth. They live a better life bit by bit. This is more important than anything else. This is what attracts me the most about this article. Furthermore, the relationship between the emperor's family in the imperial capital line, especially the passage where the emperor lectures his sons and tells them not to kill each other, gave me an enlightening understanding. The Pei family fights but does not kill. The Pei family is high, but not so cold. But there is definitely a feeling that I haven't read enough (by the way, what kind of octopus is the author's 5,000-word chapter? I'm so envious. When I first started reading it, I read because the number of chapters was relatively small. After reading it for a long time, I realized why I had only read twenty chapters. I opened the table of contents and looked at it – oh! Good guy! You mean a chapter with 6,000 or 7,000 words and a chapter with more than 10,000 words? Please give me a tutorial.

It's really a lot of work, I feel like I've been reading it for a long time and I can't even get half of it. If I look carefully, it turns out that one chapter has 6,000+ words! It's very carefully written, and everyone has their own actions/feelings at the same moment. I really like this feeling of everyone helping each other, and there is no intrigue. This kind of relationship is worthy of "loving each other and being a family" [Chigua] [Chigua]

It's light and comfortable. The author describes it very well. It feels like you are on the scene. The emotional description is also very slow, just like the kind of slow water. If you like the emotional line to be slower, you can read it. The writing style is also very good. It feels like the best one in Tomato. Great support for the author! Moreover, each chapter has quite a lot of words. It took me a long time to read more than ten chapters. This is really praiseworthy.

The author's writing style is really delicate, and the descriptions are very vivid. Reading the book will not feel boring. I usually listen to books at 1.5 Times, but I really couldn't bear to listen to this book. It seems that this is the way to read it, instead of just passing it by listening to it and not even being able to remember the plot afterwards. The writing in it comes naturally and naturally, the changes are not too abrupt, and the plot is not exaggerated. Many times, I feel very touched. However, I am a person who has not finished reading the book in the first grade of junior high school. I really can't describe my feelings. It is really beautiful.

Many people say they don't understand why the rating is so low. There is only one reason: I am too tired to read it. It is a novel that I want to read but feel uncomfortable after reading it. I like the characters of the two male protagonists very much. The people in the village are also very good. The author is very similar to me when I was with others Amway Shiqin. Everyone kept talking next to each other in every period and every word. But reading the novel this way is very tiring. The same thing has already been finished before and there is another inner monologue behavioral annotation. It is okay to do it once in a while. Every paragraph is very tiring to read. I read it all day and all night before reading Chapter 17. I'm exhausted. I'll give up now. I'll read it later.

This book gave me the feeling of bitter melon stuffed with meat. Two little bitter gourds, each has its own bitterness, but together they can make life easier. I have never eaten bitter melon stuffed with meat, because I am afraid of the bitterness, hahaha, but my mother said it is slightly bitter, with juicy meat, and it is a refreshing and refreshing bite. I think this book is like that. "The fire is warm and the family is sitting around." I like (๓´˘`๓)

Finished reading! ! ! The author's writing is great! It's so comfortable to watch ~ [Bookshelf plus one] The characters of the two male protagonists are very three-dimensional. They are not perfect characters. Each has its own highlights and quirks. Watching the daily life in Stone Village makes my heart warm. The addition of Xiaoyi adds a very interesting highlight to the whole work [laughing] I look forward to the author's subsequent works [sending my heart]

The writing style is very delicate, and the characters in the book are fully fleshed out. The plot arrangement is very reasonable, with lightness and severity, urgency and slowness. This book is the most touching one I have ever read. I will read it again. I also wish Yunlin and Huzi happiness and good health [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's super beautiful, but this rating is unreasonable. The characters are good, the writing is good, and the pace is good. Although it is idealistic, it is also very reasonable. I finished it without skipping a chapter. Everyone is doing well. It's good to read [Adoration]

It looks good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. It's very delicate. Although the author emphasizes that the two protagonists are not perfect, the character creation is very three-dimensional. Cleaning is not the boring kind of career. I like it.

The author worked hard to write the book, so I give it five stars, emmmmm, I actually quite like this kind of warm and gentle book, but. . . You are too meticulous, seeing how detailed it is to build a house. . . It's a bit mind-numbing. But the book is well received, so I'm leaving

It's a good read. I didn't skip a chapter. I like it the most. Each chapter has a lot of words. Also, will Lin Yi, who traveled through time and became a tiger cub, remain in tiger form or will he turn back into a human? Hope it can change back, looking forward to it.

The author's writing is very good, the storyline is smooth and the characters are interesting. I read the latest chapter in one sitting. The setting of the two protagonists of hh really touched my xp. I especially like Yun Lin's reply to others. ˶>ᗜ<˶ It's just that I'm not used to some of the names in it, but they are all the author's novel settings. Reading novels is just for entertainment. I thought about it and adjusted it myself hh|･з･)｡

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Xiao Lin'er needs to be good-looking, good-tempered, and strong. It's so enjoyable to watch. The author is also great. He's very generous and well-written. The writing is super good! ! ! !

The gold in the gold rush, the author's writing is very good, it's equal. I really like this kind of filial piety, there is no intrigue or conspiracy, it is very relaxing and stress-free, come on~(￣▽￣~)~

It's been a long, long time since I've seen such a beautiful time-travel farming story [crying], it's really amazing! It's just that it's not finished yet. I don't want to miss any word in every chapter, every paragraph, every sentence. I listened to some pages several times and made sure I didn't miss anything before continuing to listen/read. When I saw the last few chapters, I was even more reluctant to read too fast (it was already very slow, this is the slowest one I have read in recent years). I even adjusted the listening speed to a low speed that I had never used before. I changed from 2.5X speed to 1.5X. The articles I have been reading all the time are serials, but almost all of them are "to be continued after reading" without "to be continued", so I changed to another one without any nostalgia for the follow-up of any one. But this delicate article, I can't bear to finish it, not enough, big, rice, hungry It's big when you turn it up, it's big when you fall down, it's faster and faster [lick the screen]

Companionship is the longest confession of love. It does not require false sweet words. It is the true companionship every day. Every question and answer, every sound and response. Harmony with neighbors and sincerity in dealing with others are all valuable.

Oh my god, it's so awesome. I've already read half of it and I feel very quiet and at ease. The young couple is so happy [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] Damn, I finished writing a book in more than a month. It's the first time I've seen such an amazing update speed. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] When I think that the author has finished reading it before me, I get upset [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's very interesting. I especially like how the emotions are handled very delicately and how everyone in the village is very nice. The writing is excellent. It is a very good healing article. There is not much description of the evil of human nature. It does not make people feel uncomfortable to read. It is a very healing and warm article. I feel that the rating of 7 points is not worthy of this book at all. This book really deserves more people to read it. I really like this book. I will come back to read it again in the future.

Mainly the emotional line of the protagonist's husband, a little bit of the imperial examination path of the cousin of the same clan, and a little bit of business management. Yun's XP is quite reasonable for a post-apocalyptic person, who likes the warm smell of living people (including the smell of feet). Reasonable! So reasonable! The highlight is Xiaoyi, who is also a time traveler but was born into a big cat fetus. He talks a lot, and the pet communication board can even hang his neck. It feels like there are so many words that can fill a room.