Lin Bei, captain of the modern criminal police, died in an arrest operation and woke up as Shen Lanzhou, a sickly scholar in an ancient Jiangnan town. He had a unique physique and was born with the scent of wild roses.
Reader comments
Isn't this inner monologue too much?
I feel like many words and phrases are repeated over and over again, which makes me a little tired. It is recommended to reduce the number of monologues, and there is no need to analyze monologues. Sometimes it is better to leave readers with space to think. It is absolutely necessary to repeat words and phrases in dialogues. Just copy poems and repeat dialogues no less than five times. Sometimes it is the same object, and other plots are still okay. Come on.
This book really attracted me. I haven't read such a hearty novel on Tomato for a long time.
Clear structure, rich content, worth reading
The story is wonderful. The author writes well. Come on [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
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Good, good, good, good
The beginning is very attractive
It looks pretty good so far, I have the desire to read more
The story is very interesting, let's see how the male protagonist breaks through the predicament and successfully counterattacks.
Time travel + solving crimes, it's good to watch, the narrative is really attractive, and it's well written.
Why did the update suddenly stop? [Aggrieved] I wanted to update more chapters and read them together, otherwise it would be too painful to follow up every day, so the update was stopped immediately [Working on the draft]
Isn't this inner monologue too much? I feel like many words and phrases are repeated over and over again, which makes me a little tired. It is recommended to reduce the number of monologues, and there is no need to analyze monologues. Sometimes it is better to leave readers with space to think. It is absolutely necessary to repeat words and phrases in dialogues. Just copy poems and repeat dialogues no less than five times. Sometimes it is the same object, and other plots are still okay. Come on.
This book really attracted me. I haven't read such a hearty novel on Tomato for a long time.
Clear structure, rich content, worth reading
The story is wonderful. The author writes well. Come on [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
Have a look and comment again [smile]
Good, good, good, good
The beginning is very attractive
It looks pretty good so far, I have the desire to read more
The story is very interesting, let's see how the male protagonist breaks through the predicament and successfully counterattacks.
Time travel + solving crimes, it's good to watch, the narrative is really attractive, and it's well written.
Why did the update suddenly stop? [Aggrieved] I wanted to update more chapters and read them together, otherwise it would be too painful to follow up every day, so the update was stopped immediately [Working on the draft]