边缘行者：大卫，我真得控制你了

Five-star praise for the plot of Night City I'll give you an extra star to change the heart of reality into a plot. You're welcome to give me a total of 6 stars.

It's a pretty good novel, and overall very interesting. The protagonist kills decisively and fearlessly in the game, which is quite enjoyable to watch. However, the plot in real life seriously delays the plot of the game. Instead of giving him a heart disease, it is better to write the protagonist as a normal person from the beginning. I came to watch the protagonist kill four people in the game. Fang, destroyed the original plot and led V Zhentian to the peak of his life, instead of seeing how he treated his illness, seeing a doctor, and setting up a company. In the future, you can consider reducing the real-life plot, otherwise it will affect the perception. Of course, the author's writing is also very good, at least it does not feel boring when reading, come on

It's really well written and there's no problem with the logic at all. Let's talk about the shortcomings. This book is a two-line narrative, but at present, most people, including myself, would rather watch the plot of Night City. The real-life plot is indeed a bit boring, if not more exciting, it is still large. In comparison, I would rather see the protagonist control David to do whatever he wants, as he pleases, with a little pretense and slaps in the face.

The writing is okay, but the plot is actually a variation of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It's nothing more than David's body getting into trouble due to various variables. It's not pleasant to watch. It's very cool to kill the protagonist with his body. Although I have only played 2077 and never seen Edgewalker, this treatment is just to prevent the plot from being completely lost. From the framework of Edgewalker, after all, if the protagonist spends most of the time with his body on the body, and even calls in the game to eliminate wanted, and uses the prosthetic body without burden, all these will take effect. The protagonist is basically invincible as long as he has foresight. Many of the original plot protagonists of Edgewalker do not need to follow at all. However, this treatment also greatly weakens the sense of fun and makes it very frustrating to watch. This is okay on other platforms, but it is difficult to watch a platform like Tomato where the fun is greater than logic. Not to mention that the main character's upper body nodes are completely controlled by the author, and there is no time comparison relationship. It is difficult to say that this treatment is more logical. In my impression, the good writing in this kind of second creation is still very enjoyable without deviating from the original framework and the logic is not broken. You can learn from it. The writing style at the beginning is natural, the logic is basically smooth, and there are also plots from the original work. The foundation is still very good. It seems that there are no plans to change it in the future. Some people say that the real-life plot is not good. In fact, the plot of the game is average. If the flaws are not covered up, it is a yes. The basic tone of this kind of Goldfinger is that it is a cool article. The writing level is not good enough, so I want to maintain the original plot framework but I am completely unhappy. Who would want to read a story with a sad core ending in an online article again? No matter how many patches are added to make up for the rationality of the protagonist's random time, it will not change the fact that the reader knows that the author deliberately designed certain time points before the protagonist is listed in the game.

The author's writing feels quite smooth so far. The protagonist gets to play the game and then controls David to fight for it and then manifest the game items. The two lines of game and reality currently have main goals. The combination is also very precise and has realistic logic. Regardless of whether it is realistic or not, it is at least logically feasible. Then the edges are patched. The Pilgrim's Regret may be played with V in the future, and it is more comfortable to read. Judging from the current events, at least there is a sense of hope in reality, such as mutual goodwill between patients. Overall, I think it is a book that can be read. I will see how it is written later. Come on, author, you can still read a book about cyberpunk.

Be less realistic. People mainly watch Night City instead of reality. The problem has not improved or even gotten worse. It's a bit improved now

The logic is good and the plot of the game is very interesting. The real-life plot is too lame. The emotional lines are as good as Lord Buddha. Five stars for the game plot, but two stars for the real-life plot.

It's a good read, an excellent and refreshing article, but I wish there were less plots in the real world.

The book is quite nice. Although the title of the book is a cyberpunk edgewalker's book, the real-life plot and the cyberpunk plot develop simultaneously. There are also some clever ideas in the cyber plot. For example, Tanaka was not caught in JK step by step, and David's growth was also described. (Tanaka did not follow the plot.) Mann also used another way to induce cyberpunk psychosis. The real-life plot is the motivation of the protagonist. Because he has a heart problem, he has to find a way to climb the realistic technological tree in cyberpunk, because the protagonist is not just addicted to playing games. Later, the protagonist's company can become a prosthetic arm in the real world, the leader of AI (reality can be streamlined here), and make money. The heart problem has been solved. I hope the protagonist can play more cyberpunk. The plot should still focus on the cyber world.

So far, it seems to be a good dual reality line. I am not satisfied with it. I don't really want to watch it. I can skip this point. It is well written. As long as you don't look at reality and watch the cyber chapter directly, it will be like watching another world. You will miss a large amount of information.

The cyberpunk part looks very good. After a few plots that are the same as the original work at the beginning, there are enough new plots and changes, as well as a relatively reasonable story development. The protagonist's hands are invincible enough, and David himself has grown up, which is good. Looking forward to the follow-up. The realistic part can only be said to give the protagonist motivation for action. It requires realistic needs to obtain goals in the game. It is indeed not as interesting as the game part. Overall, it seems to be okay. Later, I also absorbed the evaluation to reduce the length of reality, and the senses have improved a bit. Although there are some minor bugs in some plots, the flaws outweigh the flaws and I highly recommend it. I also hope that the author can provide more specific reports on the protagonist's deeds, popular people and advertisements, and some small scenes of Night City's "outstanding people" from different news channels. Come on [Like]

Say the important things again! Just skip reality and you can get a perfect legendary David and wandering AI protagonist😋 One point will be deducted for the description of female appearance below [laughs]

The writing is quite good, and the plot is also remarkable. It feels great to see the fourth natural disaster overturning the plot step by step. The protagonist is killing everyone, and at the same time, the "automatic trusteeship" David has also grown up, which is good. Regarding the real-life physical condition of the protagonist, the description is just right, giving the protagonist a reason to operate in the cyberpunk world, but I hope it will not overwhelm the protagonist. After seeing the protagonist kill Faraday and reveal his identity to his teammates, it feels hard to feel that the protagonist of the game is acting recklessly and just cooperates blindly.

It's a good book, and I'm immersed in the game part. The possession of the game perfectly solves the problem that other 2077, especially Edgewalker fandoms, are too similar and boring, or have changed too much and are not like each other. It gives people the experience of personally controlling V Zhentian's version of David to change his destiny, while retaining the emotional line between David's own ignorant boy and Lucy. The main reason why the reality part is not good is that the sense of fragmentation is too strong. Simplifying the reality part and strengthening the possession game part will give you a higher score.

I'm not interested in the real-life plot. Those who click in want to watch players killing everyone in Night City. The protagonist's trivial matters in reality are of no interest. But the plot of the game is okay, just skip it if you are not interested.

5⭐ Is to support the author, the actual score should be 4⭐ (because the score is already very low [laughing awkwardly]) 2077 world score 85, real world score 15 The description of the world of 2077 is very specific and vivid. I, who only play games and do tasks, can also understand the causes and consequences. The protagonist is also decisive in killing. It is not a pure novel, but it is very comfortable to read. The author has a very deep and detailed control of the information about the cyber world. The criticism is that the description of the real world has many flaws and loopholes. The description of the real world is more like a virtual dream. It feels to me like the protagonist's dream before his body collapsed. It is unreasonable and unreal. No one the protagonist knows has selfish motives. When the protagonist brought out the technology, no one asked why. Even though the technology did not exist in the world, a group of researchers did not ask. The materials used in the things the protagonist takes out are simply not compatible with the real world, and some of the materials used can only be achieved by replacing them. After the launch of the technology researched by the protagonist, no one came to trouble the protagonist, as if the protagonist had not touched anyone else's cake. The protagonist got a group of such scientific researchers without much effort, as if these researchers were prepared for the protagonist. The summary is that the logic of 2077 is very smooth and realistic, while the logic of the real world is very virtual and dreamy. The description of the real world can be virtual or dreamy, but for this kind of story that is too smooth and has no highlights, there should be fewer chapters. Readers generally will not like this kind of chapter.

Reality is boring, but Cyber's writing is pretty good

I really like this kind of article about the fourth natural disaster.

Write less about daily life and more about games. I really want to skip the daily life, and I hope there won't be a female protagonist [crying]

The writing of Cyber ​​is exciting, but the reality is boring. I originally wanted to give it one star, but the author said in the comment area that he would change it, so I will give it five stars to support it, read it for a few days, and then change the rating based on the situation.

In line with V Zhentian's character, he kills without any scruples. It's just that the reality is a bit low, and you still have to enter characters. It is better to invade David directly with consciousness, and then return to the body when exiting, so that you can still experience sensory stimulation in the game.

Although I don't want to read about Jiang Qi, David's story is really good.

The real-life plot is too cliched, but the quality of the cyber world is surprisingly high. It is one of the few good books in Tomato. The author can interact more with book friends. Anyway, I will continue to follow it. I hope it doesn't end like a bad book or run away like Infinite Murder.

The game part is pretty good, but no one likes to watch reality, especially me It's really boring. It's like the network card is stuck halfway through takeoff. At first, I could be patient and wait, but later on, the network is still stuck. My patience and enthusiasm have been exhausted, and I really have no interest in continuing.

I think this book is quite good. The realistic plot that others said does affect the plot a bit, but this is a positive, and the characters are also introduced through the realistic plot. And because of the protagonist's control method, a certain amount of real time is needed to advance the relationship between David and Lucy. If there is no realistic plot, wouldn't it be that the protagonist controls David all the time? Then the conflict between the protagonist and David will become bigger and bigger until they cannot reconcile. Isn't the most important thing for a protagonist like David to grow? With this plot, the author writes David's growth instead of being manipulated like a doll. I believe the author also knows that the realistic plot has shortcomings, so the amount of subsequent realistic plots is also less. Finally, I hope the author will not stop updating

I don't understand why the rating is so low, in this fanfic called Edgewalker. This book is a relatively high-level one with a reasonable main plot and a clear storyline. It is not cliché. Personally, I feel that even if it does not score 9 points, it should be above 8.5. The interweaving of reality and plot is also a plot requirement. After all, the setting requires reasonable arrangements for the protagonist, and the first protagonist is not David. I hope the author will write well and give each character a good ending. I hope this book will reach 9 points soon [Love]

This book is really good to read, and to a large extent it makes up for the dissatisfaction of players who want to get started with David after reading the plot of Edgewalker. That is, there are more descriptions of the protagonist's branch plots to heal himself, and the differences in reality. My suggestion is that this book is mainly about Edgewalker, and it is best to have less realistic descriptions of the protagonist, because few people want to read realistic descriptions.

The plot is quite good. The encounter between David Lucy and many of the protagonists he gets along with does not interfere too much. At the same time, the physical problems of the protagonist in the real world become the motivation for his actions in Night City. I think it is quite interesting. It is similar to V who originally just wanted to find a way to survive, but ended up becoming a legend. I have read some books on similar topics before, and they were just for game review or testing. To be honest, even if I had a test job, I wouldn't be able to run in the game every day.

It's nice to watch, the rhythm is smooth and not draggy, and it kills people without mercy. It's quite subversive at times, but it's not too nonsensical. It's just that the transaction with Cannon was a bit flimsy, and it didn't feel worth it to have Cannon pay so much money every month just for one method. But considering the protagonist's combat power, it's like hiring a gold-medal thug who may not necessarily help. It's just that the reality doesn't look very good.

I have seen the latest chapter. It is quite interesting, but the realistic part is a little annoying. The realistic content can be skipped in a few strokes. Just describe it. I feel that it is okay if I don't want this. The other parts are quite good. Skipping the realistic part will not affect it. It is still highly recommended.