Transmigrated to Another World: I Became Superman

I am a superman, but I was treated to a meal and treated like a dog😏😏😏, slip away.

It's one of the best stories about Superman's abilities. It's well written and the protagonist has a good character. Keep up the good work. You can be cruel to your enemies and be kind to your own people. Don't become a psychopath like a native of the motherland. The character I'm writing now is pretty good. When you need to be angry, be funny when you need to be angry. Cruelty and kindness never conflict. Be more humane. Don't be like Azu, who always makes speeches and says that you are the hero. That's too hypocritical and boring.

Good-looking, invincible writing, and the protagonist is not aggrieved. He can do whatever he wants. He doesn't hide his strength. The male protagonist is only responsible for his own thoughts. He doesn't need to read other people's rules. [I understand] And some people say nannies. Look at them. If they don't obey, the protagonist is not stupid.

I like the author's ability to express tension in the fight scenes, but other than that, things are a bit abstract, especially the plot. But maybe it's because my resistance to toxicity is relatively high. In my opinion, it's actually pretty good. It's not as exaggerated as the reviews say. It's just that some parts are illogical and some are conservative. Your introduction may seem like a purely entertaining article to readers, but when readers actually read it and find that it is not what they thought, they will definitely be criticized. If you still want this book to perform better, the most important thing at the moment is to change the introduction. According to my habits, it is not easy to write with four stars.

There is nothing deliberately hidden, and the killing is very fast. There is no such kind of superficial talk. Isn't it normal for someone to repay kindness at the beginning? Why do everyone in the comment area say licking. Except that when I first met the woman, I really couldn't write it. Later, I also wrote in the direction of control. The overall pace is also very fast. I don't feel that there is any big problem. To be honest, it is much more reasonable and smooth than the long-form novels that score eight or nine points.

Looking back, I found that my soul had already left before I turned 18, and what was left was just that insignificant body that was trying to fill up the washing of life. My soul seemed to only be able to possess my body when I was happy. What a family. Damn it. Where was the girl at the beginning? She was useless.

I finally got the money out, but the number of words is too few.

Yes, come on, the author, come on⛽

It's okay, please update quickly

I think it's okay. The fighting is pretty fun anyway, but the updates are too slow.