Wu Ma from Variety Film and Television

Love the first world! ! ! ! I look forward to writing more stories about Liang Kun. I also like the setting of the heroine. It's really weird for someone who always thinks Liang Kun's identity is problematic and is pretentious. There are also those who tend to favor Chen Haonan and the others. This heroine is completely considerate of Liang Kun! ! ! !

The writing style of DaDa is very good. I feel that there are few articles written about Liangkun. DaDa, is your emotional line a he or a be? I want to read he.

Five points for Sam's article. Liang Kun's article also has a lot of very problematic descriptions. The third article is really much better. It is the most beautiful Sam's article I have seen so far. I can't tell the difference between AI and non-AI. Compared with many articles that don't use AI but have poor writing skills. I can't stand it at all. This article is already a very delicious food. I really can feel that the author really loves Wu Ma and writes it with great care. I would rather eat something that shows love. Come on, author, there are 10,000 Wu Ma characters waiting for you [blowing kiss] ps. I'm really squatting like crazy, sir. I'm squatting, squatting, squatting, squatting.

The teacher can write Negotiation Expert – Xie Jiajun and Assassination Storm – Han Hao and Misjudgment – ​​Yang Tieli, Neimu – Ke Dingbang Rushing into the Sky – Tang Yichen is really handsome and has temperament

The first Liangkun is the most special Liangkun I have ever seen. He is very calm and has his own unique gentleness, but he is also very delicious. Some people complain that the Cantonese dialogue is incomprehensible, but it will be more immersive and not OOC. [Although there are some things that I can't understand and don't translate, I secretly find a translator...] In fact, my favorite is Ni Yongxiao's story, which is the shortest. The author said that the writing is not quite right. I really like it. This kind of mutual support, mutual respect, and support is really delicious. It completely matches the best ending of Ah Xiao in my heart... Giving your favorite characters a happy ending is the charm of variety film and television fandom... I am also lucky to find a fanfic that suits my taste! ! ! In general, AI is really a bit shit. The plot of the first part is not bad, but it may always feel awkward and disharmonious due to relying too much on AI, and there will be some dumbfounding adjectives and overly repetitive psychological descriptions. It's much better in the second and third chapters! The author's own writing skills are strong, and he also has a good grasp of the development of the plot and the characters. In the author's writing, the characters played by Wu Ma have added a gentle quality, which is very different, but I like it very much. The emotional line and the plot line are both very good. I hope I can continue writing. Too many fan stories have been abandoned halfway. If you are busy, you can update it slowly. It would be a pity to abandon it. It is really great and I will keep up with it. In addition, I would like to highly recommend to the author Uncle Guai from "Once Upon a Time on the Edge of Water" and Ah Le from "O Ji Triad He Club". I think this character is really quite miserable, and I desperately hope that Wang Qing can wear it🥲

The writing is very good. There are often Cantonese words in the text, which is very easy to substitute. I hope that the role of Xie Jiajun will be added in the future. I feel that there are so few people writing [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It's really a fairy tale. I think people who don't understand Cantonese at all can understand it and take it into heart. It's really well written! ! Looking forward to daily updates! Hey-hey! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Four stars are given to Tang Yichen. It's very sweet, but the AI ​​feeling is very strong. Liangkun is obvious in the first chapter. There are a little less in the back, but not much. The sense of life is low. There are often some fragmentary details that can't be explained. It's very stiff and gives people the feeling of eating a cold prepared dish.

Objective! It looks great! ! ! The most important thing is that although the protagonists in each story have the same name, they have different personalities and backgrounds. They are all adapted to the current role. They are not aggrieved or overly exaggerated. This setting is very good. Some books with overly exaggerated settings feel like fantasy. This one is just right~~ and it is very popular. The first story feels like the heroine's character is a bit pretentious, but from the second one the story becomes more interesting~ Some people say that it has a strong AI flavor, but I feel that this is much better than other similar fanfics I've read. I don't feel AI at all, it feels really good! This score is indeed too low!

Steamed Fish himself said: He has acted in bad scripts, but never in bad roles. It's a pity that his acting skills are on the line, but there are really not many characters with good endings, especially those with good scripts and good characters, so it's good to come and read these stories to make up for the difficulty.

Nominated Gunfire Alai, explosive detective Mike, Liang Shanbo and Juliet's Jordan.

It's very interesting. Most of the characters played by Wu Zhenyu don't end well. Please give him a good ending.

The characters are portrayed and transformed very naturally. The addition of Cantonese makes the article more accessible. The emotions are delicate and the writing is good. It is a rare good article.

A very nice book! ! ! I've finished reading all the articles you've written so far, so I'm here to comment. I started reading them last night, and I've just finished them now. First of all, only the sentences in Liangkun's article are not fluent in some places, but the other articles don't have this problem. I like the plots of all the chapters and they are very exciting! ! ! You said that I will write a collection of Liangkun later, so I will definitely continue to follow you! ! Moreover, this is a rare collection of characters played by Wu Ma. If you like Wu Ma, you must not miss it! ! Personally, I don't mind using AI to polish the text at all. AI is just a tool. All the plots and ideas are your own. And except for the Liangkun chapter, there is basically no trace of AI in the rest. You are making progress in writing books for adults! ! I'm super looking forward to Uncle Guai and other characters in the future. I will always follow you! ! ! Then there are some problems in other comments. One is that the Cantonese language is incomprehensible. Now adults have translated most of the Cantonese. I personally have been watching Hong Kong TV series recently, and I can even guess all the translations, so it is not a big problem for me. Then many teachers gave up after reading the first few chapters because of the AI ​​taste. I actually didn't read half of it at first. I continued reading after a few days. If teachers really can't stand the AI ​​taste, they can start from the second chapter! ! ! Starting from the second article, both the sentence expressions and the heroine's character description are much better than the first one. The heroine's character is much more vivid.

The subject matter is particularly interesting, the plot develops smoothly, and overall it's good. It's just that the love flavor is a bit strong in some places. It would be better if the author refines it.

For the time being, I have only watched the Liang Kun and Ni Yongxiao chapters, and I will watch the rest after I finish the movie. This book is quite good. The heroine did not change the original plot too much, but used her own skills to provide answers to Liangkun and Ni Yongxiao. I have read a lot of Hong Kong film fanfiction, and this one rarely creates a heroine with the "sister-in-law" style in traditional Hong Kong film narratives.

Why is the rating so low? It's so beautiful. I'm a little obsessed with flying into the sky. I especially bought an airplane ring. This part is a bit too much about the delicate relationship between the male and female protagonists, but overall it is very comfortable. Personally, I don't like love that is too complicated and the plot too confusing. I'm not here to decipher it, I'm here to relax. This book is just right. Although the heroine's love comes at a moment's notice, the first world is well laid out and I can tolerate the rest of the world.

The author's first article is well written. . Totally pretty. . The intimate scenes are also well written, and I really like the storyline. Maybe I have a bit of white knight syndrome, haha. I like the feeling of saving others. I like it so much. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh why have I just finished watching Boss! ! Will the boss start a comprehensive Hong Kong novel for newcomers in the future? ! ! The characters are so well written! ! I have read a lot of articles. There are very few good authors who can write a sense of scene and different characters. Many of them are pure diaries. This author's book is a complete delicacy [crying][crying][crying]

It's good-looking, but I can't read Cantonese, and a lot of it is just guesswork, which is a bit regretful.

It's AI, but it's written very smoothly, without the blocking feeling of ordinary AI.

Can you please write the nominations for Ji Wushuang and Xie Yuan? There are very few writers for these two characters.

I really like the second world. Can you write about Brother Zato in "The Betrayal of Laughing Gor"? Can you write it? [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] I hope you can write it. I really like his appearance in that movie and the line with his sister. I hope they can have a good ending as brother and sister.

What a treasure trove of articles. The author should really consider writing articles full-time. The character background of each person is very well written, and it is not the kind that conforms to the plot. The emotions are also written in a very delicate way. It is really a very good article. Be sure not to stop updating it!

Very good, the writing is very good, but the dialogue is not very clear, I hope there is a translation

The writing is very good, but there are a lot of dialogues in Cantonese. It is very difficult to convert it into Mandarin to read, but Mandarin is better.

It's so beautiful, here's a side story:

This book changed my view on Liangkun

If you like Liangkun, you will get rich if you listen to your wife!

OK! ! I fell in love with Liangkun only after watching a Hong Kong TV series. In fact, to say that I like Liangkun is better to say that I like the soul in the author's writing.

Liangkun's article was so well written, I especially like Liangkun