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This book is really good to read, not OOC at all. While the plot is full of tasks, the silent car is tactful and orderly. It conforms to the logic of the characters without being forced. It is for the sake of being a fan of all people. In short, it is very good to read \(//∇//)\ The voice input was wrong, it should be error-free and the transition is tactful and interesting.

Cool! ! ! I immediately fell in love with it when I saw the introduction. After opening it, I found that I was right. It was so delicious. Woohoo, finally I saw a normal relationship between brothers.

It's very beautiful, and the writing is particularly delicate. I didn't expect to see such delicate and gentle writing in a fan. It feels like it's completely covered by the moonlight. Snape's character is also described very appropriately. There is no obvious eccentricity or consideration, only the expression in the unconsciously extended eyes and unconscious movements. Inexhaustible love and tenderness, Draco was aloof and possessed the arrogance and complacency of pure blood, but he was keenly aware of Ori's insomnia at night but pretended not to see the dim tears in the corners of his eyes, pulling up his quilt and quietly revealing the silent tenderness inside. Harry was still so brave, but lost a bit of the recklessness and recklessness in other articles. Rude, a little more tolerant and caring for his brother, as if he has discovered another Harry, but inexplicably feels that this is Harry. Ori is like a kitten, smart, beautiful, perfect, elegant but sensitive and willful and full of dependence on his brother. Externally he is a flawless jade, but to his brother he is inherently fragile, emotional and persistent. Oh, they are all very three-dimensional characters. Each character shows his or her multi-faceted personality and heart. They are no longer a single and silent paper person. They are injected with real and vivid colors. It seems that in a place we don't know, these wizards with different personalities really exist, living and socializing like ordinary people.

It looks good. The character of Oriel is well portrayed. The author's writing is also good. Maybe the plot is biased toward all? () The author has written a lot in each chapter, but it seems that no one has read this book, which is a pity.

It's very beautiful. The writing style is delicate and a little sour, like a trickle flowing slowly. The characters are not OOc at all. I hope the author will stick to it. Such a beautiful book should not be buried.

The best HP novel I have read so far. The author's writing style is so delicate, the words are particularly deep, and the images created are also very three-dimensional. There are rich emotions flowing between the lines, and the eyes of those who read it will be sore. Author, if you persist, the rating will be 9.5 Or higher [Like] [Like]

The last time I saw someone so sensitive was Lin Daiyu.

I feel that this article can be regarded as a group favorite. Of course, the protagonist is very good and worthy, and the various descriptions are also very warm and cute. Reading this article is like reading a narrative article and writes out everything I have seen and experienced. The author's writing style is very good, and the description is also very delicate. It has a sense of picture when I read it. The tone of this article is a touch of warmth, a touch of sadness and a touch of happiness.

This book controls the character's personality very well [like it] Oriel is like a tsundere kitten, and the physical contact scenes are so cool...

It's easy to find good articles in the evening. The author's writing is very touching, he likes to prefer, treats the protagonist differently, and has ambiguous tendencies. Just read this book.

I just say that you can discover good things if you stay up late! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's delicious. This little Aurel is also very cute, and the interaction with little Harry is very cute🥺

Everyone, feel it! Be obsessed with Ori!

It's good to watch, not a noob, the writing is very delicate, and the plot is not boring either. It's very good.

Awesome 👍 A really great person, the characters are also portrayed very delicately, and really every scene and every picture is very good [Love][Love][Love]

It's well worth watching and it completely opened up a whole new world of Harry Potter to me.

It's super cute😍Harry looks very young in this book, and Oriel is super cute too! My favorite is the heartthrob! The author needs to work hard and update!

Very nice boss, can you join Gemini?

Wow, oh, oh, oh

Very nice to look at. Special recommendation!

It looks good, I like it. Come on [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

The writing is very delicate and full of emotions.

The arrogant and poisonous tongue is so delicious! ! !

I can't believe that Tomato can write high-quality articles. The author is so awesome.

I don't know how to put it, it's plain but touching.

The author, please do more updates. I don't mind updating 2 chapters in one day.

How can one fall in love with books written by the same author over and over again? I swear I picked it randomly, but my emotions recognized this gentle writing before my brain.

Very interesting, very interesting, very exciting Harry Potter fanfic. The plot is very interesting.

My mother, she is really very beautiful and her writing is very good. I hope our brother can give Draco a good look.

It looks good, but I don't know if it will be updated steadily (I would be really heartbroken if updates are interrupted)