Heavy Armored Sword, Sweeping Across the World

Medieval novels. There aren't many elements of Western fantasy. The power system is just a supplement. Closer to medieval life in nature. The protagonist seems to have lost the ability to reproduce. Since it is a game world, cheats are rationalized and not obtrusive. It took me a few hours to read it straight through. As for the characters, the shaping is okay. The main line is closer to the farming stream. There are some poisonous spots. It's just a matter of worldview. There are some flaws in these books. First is the question of the author. Unable to meet readers' needs. Although it will be changed if there are poisonous spots. But essentially this exposes the author's perspective. And I observed the last book. The protagonist is a turtle man. Looking back on the interactions and personality of the male protagonist with other people in this book, he is a bit of a loser. Forcibly add definitions to justify yourself to satisfy your own psychological comfort. No growth. There are poisonous points, except for worldview issues. There is also the author's own quirks. The same thing happened with the last book. Poison spots will be changed if they appear. It can only be said that there is something wrong with the author. The protagonist's strength is forcibly developed. Although she is a lolicon and has no reproductive capacity. And. I have a great relationship with the heroine in the game. Affiliations have not been confirmed. The male protagonist has no personality charm, he is really just a little girl who only knows how to cheat. Utilitarianism. And updates are very slow. The data is not very good either, tail docking is very possible. All I can say is that the author should practice more.

Personal evaluation (immortal, good, ordinary, miscellaneous): good The worldview structure is clear, the writing is acceptable, and the character descriptions are pretty good. Each has its own characteristics, and basically there is no obvious poisonous point. Well, let me talk about a girl who was rescued by the male protagonist from the Goblin Cave. Do you think she can control her sphincter, even if she is in a coma? I can only give credit to the author who can say he has special powers, her hips are different, or these goblins only like the ones who are awake... The reason is too far-fetched Starting from receiving the escort mission, the adventures along the way are very interesting. From the article, I learned that it may turn into farming, lord competition, etc. It is still in the early development stage. What I really complain about is that the rewards of this escort mission are a bit too low. The difficulties and consumption faced during the escort far exceed the mission rewards. All in all, it looks okay. I recommend you give it a look.

It is a rare Western fantasy masterpiece narrated on Tomato. The text is smooth and the rhythm is moderate. The author refers to the dark world view of the Legend of Jianfeng and the content of traditional DND and Western fantasy games. It is a very interesting story.

A very good adventure and travel novel, with a very novel concept. A dad takes a group of children on a big adventure with an unknown future. The combat power level of the protagonist and the enemy is in a state of dynamic balance, and the line between life and death is very adventurous. The setting of biological level and professional level. I have only seen similar (non-human race) racial level and professional level once in overload. This level setting is very interesting. Although it seems that the combat power will greatly increase in the future and the novel will be turned into a farming novel, which may lose the novelty of the current adventure novel, the plot so far is still worth reading.

It's delicious😋. It feels like I'm playing a large-scale RPG game from another world. The only drawback is that the pace is a bit slow, the world view is quite small, and the protagonist's character is not fleshed out enough, but there are seven mature women [I learned it]

Ah! What a wonderful novel. In the novel, everyone communicates with each other, contacts each other, and understands each other, as if there are no barriers and differences. Isn't this the shape of love? Thank you, your gentleness touches everyone. The tenderness felt by the audience will be passed on to you, and the tenderness you feel will be doubled again and passed on to the audience. Love does exist! What a wonderful world! I'm sorry, thank you, the author, you are such a gentle person. Every update makes me feel this, as if I am filled with tenderness and love, able to forgive and tolerate each other - that's why I say thank you and sorry again and again. It is precisely because of incomprehension that there will be estrangement, it is precisely because of inability to understand that there will be opposition, and it is just because you refuse to think that we are different that we will not be able to build relationships. Thank you, thank you, there is still some, love does exist! Just as everyone's hearts are united now - please give us a round of applause -

It feels okay, but I feel like the author is trying something out and likes to describe mining cards.

Book review: good-looking, good for brain waves Reading time: 10+ hours, 20 chapters saved Poison point: Collect Goblin Mine Cards? (Although I wrote an explanation to deal with it, but I feel a little uncomfortable) Expansion of combat power? (Save the chapter and watch it again after a long section of the plot) Bunny girl! (Although, but! This rabbit rose to the top too quickly, and is a bit vegetarian) Advantages: Fox Girl likes it very much, cute. If you really play the game, dark blue adds points. 8.10: The plot enters a new chapter, which feels good, and the new plot is very exciting. The rabbit girl doesn't like it, the fox girl has no plot recently, the little nun is cute, the other girls are passersby~, the panda man is a surprise (seen in very old Western fantasy novels), and the betrayal of the black knight is a bit unexpected. The follow-up should be to manage the territory, spawn monsters and level up, maybe. The only problem is that one chapter a day is not satisfying at all. I read the previous 30 chapters in one go and will save more for the future.

A very good novel! But does the protagonist really want to develop in Black Rock City? The only knight commander who came to seek refuge suddenly rebelled again, leaving no manpower to control the city! It feels like it would be better to reap the benefits and try to recruit people to return to Xiaoxi Village to develop the territory!

The writing style is above average, the setting is good, and a large number of characters appear in the 300,000-word story, but the character arcs are still relatively substantial and can be given an advantage. The power system is relatively reasonable, but upgrading without experience penalties does not seem to be as difficult as the book wants to express. The worldview is deep and can support a long plot. The seven lolita settings at the beginning are novel. The villains' motivations are clear and they are all for their own benefit, there are no brainless villains. The emotional line is good, things come naturally, and things go smoothly, without any rigid wolf pairing. (I found that I can't seem to pronounce this word, it can only be pronounced as a homophone) The emotional appeal is poor, and the overall writing style tends to be drawn in white, which does not have any impact. The combat graphics are better, but they didn't leave a deep impression on me. The characters have their own thoughts and actions and do not rely on the author to advance the story.

The writing is smooth, the transitions are reasonable, the logic is self-consistent, the writing is delicate, the frame is complete, the emotions are appropriate, the combat is rich, the words are good, the ideas are a bit clumsy, the ideas are novel, the subject matter is niche, there are very few poisonous points, the work is normal, the characters are three-dimensional, the combat power is reasonable, there is love and justice, neither holy nor violent, vivid and three-dimensional

It's quite exciting. There are many characters, but it's not cluttered. Each one has a shining point that makes people remember it. The protagonist also thinks about the problem more comprehensively. It won't be said that the Minotaur situation happened because of a brain defect.

Nice. I just finished playing the works of FS, Ring of Magic, Black Ring, Dark Soul, and Bloodline, and I prepared them in the middle of the night. I went to bed and found that this soul-like work was really enjoyable to watch.

Very good loli, it keeps my battery full [cool]

A harem novel about a male protagonist who is reincarnated into the world of a soul-based game. This is one of my favorite genres. In recent years, due to the rampage of Cthulhu, various problems have arisen at every turn in this type of novels. Now it is too difficult to find novels that suit my taste on Tomato, but it also shows that some male writers have come to their senses. Looking forward to the ending of the true harem [Like]

The writing is good, in a classic European and Western fantasy style, but boss, do we really not want to make some fun of the pig's feet? After all, he is a player who has cleared the game and has memories of past lives. Another past life, such as proficiency in swordsmanship or understanding of magic, can better reflect this identity (a bit of high-level play to shock). Otherwise, the pure plot flow will make some readers (such as me) feel that the game Pig's Knuckle is in vain. Of course, if Pig's Feet is a purely plot-based streaming game, then I won't say that.

Grain Grass ~ Immortal Grass has a grand world view, rigorous plot, and the power system does not collapse. This level is already higher than most novels. The protagonist's pull with lolita and nuns in the early stage will make some people disgusted, but it is understandable to accept them all in order to increase the favorability. Even some people are stunned. Seeing the protagonist giving gifts and protecting the lolitas along the way to kill monsters, they think the protagonist is a laborer. I am also drunk. Why would others follow you if you don't improve your favorability? You are stunned when you punch the demon, right?

The plot and setting are very attractive to me. I hate harems very much, but I can still accept these little lolita. Although I am a little disgusted, they are all children, and their future is too miserable. It's okay for the protagonist to accept it. I can't deceive myself anymore. I gradually began to accept the harem. Am I going to become a villain? [Crying] [Crying]

The advantage is that there is no shortage of female protagonists, and all the useful ones have been collected. The disadvantage is that the combat power is a bit confusing, and it can't be used with brains. It's just fun. The review is a cool article, but I think it suits my taste. I give it five stars. Fight! Cool! Wait It doesn't work. I'm going to update it later, and the shortcomings are magnified. Because I read it chapter by chapter, it's average, but the combat power problem is obvious.

All in all, it's still good news. The flaws don't hide the good points. The author of those high praise points in the comment area has already made changes. I feel that the author's settings are relatively consistent, and it feels like a real game. The writing is also okay, but it doesn't feel like AI hydrology. Also, you guys, I like loli! ! ! Visually, many female protagonists have not run away [please ask for more explosive updates][please ask for explosive updates][please ask for explosive updates][please seek explosive updates][please seek explosive updates][please seek explosive updates][please seek explosive updates]

The step-by-step introduction and some casual descriptions allowed me to see the world that the author carefully constructed. The protagonist does not advance the plot from task to task like a puppet, but constantly adapts his goals as the changes change. The sentences are fluent, the logic is reasonable, the three concepts are normal, and the plot is excellent. I give this book a thumbs up! Hope to see the ending of this book Besides, I like loli.

Unfortunately, it has only been updated to about a hundred chapters today. The knights from another world are the mainstream. The plot of the first hundred chapters is to randomly improve personal strength on the way to receive tasks and accept various servants. It is similar to DND levels. The plot is reasonable. The world view has not yet been developed. The protagonist is a normal person, lawful and neutral, and has a harem.

The writing is very good, and I also feel like watching the Legend of Sword and Wind. It's a pity that so few people read it, maybe it's too obscure. Author, please don't stop updating. I watch ads every day to support you. I just showed you three ads. You must work hard! Although this is nothing. I see that the reward you did accept was relatively small. Maybe it's just out of interest, but I sincerely support you. There are too few books like this.

As long as there are updates, I will keep watching.

This is pretty good in terms of Western fantasy. At present, it seems to be second to none and has great potential.

The male protagonist's character is neutral and good, not too poisonous, and not too censorious. It's worth a try at the moment.

I finished it in one go, and so far it seems to be a pure cool novel. Although there are problems with the logic and the plot is confusing, the battles are fun and the lolita is fun [Adore][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

It is actually rare for a Western fantasy novel in the game time-travel genre to be written to this level. The different characters have distinct personalities, and the author has put in a lot of effort. The battle scenes are exciting, each battle has different highlights, and the designs of mobs and bosses are also outstanding.

I love watching it, but the plot suddenly becomes very fast [awkward laugh]

It's really good-looking, although there are some parts that I can't understand, but I think it looks good. After chasing it straight away, in terms of plot, it is not overwhelming, but I just feel that the strength is still not enough. Of course, it is just that I feel that in terms of plot, the protagonist's strength can be said to be very strong. I hope there will be a wave of additions. The experience gained from subsequent light kills feels a bit less.