The Villain Master Is Also Escaping from Death Today

This is the will of hegemony. The protagonist is the son of a mafia boss. As a result, he has been ridiculed at school and called trash to his face. Before the protagonist traveled through time, the original owner would beat anyone who was unhappy. Others I feel are okay.

Not bad, but I hope the protagonist's efforts will be rewarded. The underworld with 'truth, goodness and beauty' still needs to be spread out Even now there are some inexplicable mysteries, so-called pits dug. We'll see if we change the rating then.

In my personal opinion, the character setting is not wild enough, and there is no point in preparing to become a good citizen (from my personal point of view, I just read a few chapters and it doesn't mean that I am leading the way). Come on, the author, we have a lot of mountains and rivers, and we will see you again when we are destined...

It's quite good-looking. It's considered a relatively niche time-traveling novel, a daily leisurely light novel. The description of the interaction between the characters is quite good, but the relationship between the characters is a bit slow to advance. The plot of the incident is appropriate but too fast, but the relationship is a bit slow to warm up, so it feels very daily life but not very romantic. It's not that slow heating is not good, I feel scared [I'm about to cry] in the foreign persimmons. Come on, it's quite beautiful. It is worth mentioning that in the first ten chapters, the protagonist walks through the plot from the perspective of the protagonist, and then there is a chapter that inserts the first-person autobiography of the male protagonist of the original Gala. There are many repetitions. I thought the chapters were repeated at the time. I felt that the word count was too redundant, but it was okay. After all, it seemed to be written directly from the most recent one, which might be abrupt.

Personally, it looks pretty good. The characters are very similar to anime. It has that flavor. It would be nice if the dialogues were in double quotation marks, framed, and the inner words are framed. It looks a little worse, but it's okay. I currently rate this book at 8.1, 8.2 Or above.

Can't characters use double quotes when speaking? Use square brackets inside the characters again. From Chapter 52 onwards, double quotes have been used in the dialogue, and square brackets have been used internally. I didn't realize it until I read it.

Um, okay? Well, I think it's okay. I've finished Chapter 73. Except for the straight-ball Yui, the other heroines' emotional lines are far behind. Haruna has become a brother. Hina is still stuck in the relationship with the male partner and is giving up. The president hasn't started yet. I read the comments and it seems that the author has changed it. Anyway, I haven't seen it. The current sense is okay. The article is a slow-burn [eating melon] [eating melon]

Holy shit, I'm resurrected! She looked so good before she was resurrected

It's very well written. Don't stop updating it. Please let me do whatever you want.

All I can say is that we are all buddies.

Update soon brother

It's very interesting to read, the characters are vividly drawn, and the article overall doesn't have many flaws. Come on, author, you will definitely write the best novel

The writing is interesting, the characters are okay, the plot is on point, the writing is smooth, and the storyline is quite attractive. But what is regrettable is that the language style is like ordinary Chinese online writing rather than Japanese works, which causes the character image to collapse during dialogue (such as the part about helping the old lady). Of course, it may be that I have preconceived ideas and assumed that co-governance of modern cities with Yakuza and the police is a unique attribute of Japan. I do not rule out the possibility of integrating Chinese characters and Japanese environments into an imaginary world.

It's not enough to read. Come on, boss. After the last book was blocked, I have been eating meal replacement for a long time. I must write it down [cry][cry][cry]

The overall feeling is okay, but the dialogue and inner monologue are a bit uncomfortable to watch. Sometimes the dialogue is completely wrong. I don't know if it's been corrected or something.

It's quite interesting, come on!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's super beautiful. Author, please don't stop talking [blowing kisses]

Personally, I think it's good, the characters are well-drawn and each has its own characteristics.

It's okay, but the square brackets are easy to read.

To be honest, if the author didn't add those dialog boxes, the reading would be smoother.

It's pretty good so far, fifty chapters ago It's a slow-burning one, so it's easy to watch. The only drawback is that it's not enough to watch.

Very good, but I still hope that the protagonist can inherit his family's underworld industry

I'm Chaowei. Please update it faster.

I am looking forward to how the protagonist will deal with his younger brother It is inevitable for the protagonist to inherit his father's underworld, unless he wants to be unable to protect the people around him

Looks pretty good

Quite to my liking

Looks good, boss

Come on, author, it's very interesting.

Good looking, good looking, good looking