[Multiple heroines + pseudo game world]
"The continent of Delan is a vast and fertile land where the eyes of the gods gather.
Light, darkness, wind, water, fire... Countless elements flow and inhabit this continent, turning into beliefs, gathering into the Holy See, splitting the earth and sealing borders..."
The holographic online game "Delan Continent" is very popular on Yunxing. Li Beifeng, who has been withdrawn since he was a child, also chose to open this game in order to build a good relationship with his roommates.
But the world is completely different from what my roommate said; an oriental sword that should never appear in a Western fantasy game; a disappearing game system, and a player's identity that no one knows...
Unbelievable things happened one after another, but before guessing whether it was a game bug or his own time travel, surviving seemed to be the first thing Li Beifeng needed to consider.
Reader comments
Highly recommended by a 10-year-old bookworm, it doesn't have any major drawbacks.
1. As far as emotional scenes are concerned, the current relationship is slowly advancing. There is no particularly big sense of fragmentation. The overall storyline is pretty good.
2. Combat power system and monster types. Although there are some flaws, they are not too big of a problem, and the overall combat power build is pretty good.
3. The protagonist's golden finger and the development of his combat power are both pretty good and not particularly outrageous. As of now, there are no signs of collapse in combat strength.
4. In terms of plot, in Tomato, I haven't seen this kind of plot advancement for a long time, with emotional drama and character stories interjected. From the perspective of describing the story, the author's skills are very good.
In summary, I like to read Western fantasy protagonists with a sense of chivalry and classical adventure, or I have read too many novels such as No-brainer and Killer and I want to read some other types of novels to change my mood. I recommend this one. Overall, it feels like food, or even a higher level. Very good for those with an appetite.
Personally, I think it's okay. It's still quite to my liking. It brings some Eastern power to Western fantasy, but I still have to mention one point, that is, you can add some off-site explanations or psychological descriptions, otherwise it will be a little confusing. It shows that you can't clearly see the protagonist's motivation to save a family with all the effort and even almost death (although it will be said later). The second one is that the emotional line between the protagonist and other heroines is a bit blurry (anyway, I don't understand why Serviya's attitude has changed so much. Maybe it's because I haven't been in love)
Not bad, pretty good-looking. Don't have appendicitis.
The plot is compact and exciting, with fierce conflicts and battles interspersed with the protagonist's encounters with various supporting characters and reflections on his own character.
The protagonist is a non-believer who wanders in a continent of faith. He has a passive personality and originally had no connection with the world. In the process of improving his strength, he got involved in a prison robbery, and then went to the next stop while meddling in other people's business, establishing connections with more people, and thus getting involved in new conflicts.
It's good to watch, the plot is interesting, and the characters are likeable. But the writing style and language don't match well with Western fantasy. It's a minor flaw, acceptable.
Good looking [laughs] Come on, author
It's beautiful and emotionally well written.
The setting of traveling to the game world and trying your best to survive is also good, but the protagonist has become stronger too quickly recently and the plot before and after the gender change is a bit boring. If I hadn't seen the plot of Servia, I would have quit. Recommended for those who want to watch Western fantasy and emotional dramas
Highly recommended by a 10-year-old bookworm, it doesn't have any major drawbacks. 1. As far as emotional scenes are concerned, the current relationship is slowly advancing. There is no particularly big sense of fragmentation. The overall storyline is pretty good. 2. Combat power system and monster types. Although there are some flaws, they are not too big of a problem, and the overall combat power build is pretty good. 3. The protagonist's golden finger and the development of his combat power are both pretty good and not particularly outrageous. As of now, there are no signs of collapse in combat strength. 4. In terms of plot, in Tomato, I haven't seen this kind of plot advancement for a long time, with emotional drama and character stories interjected. From the perspective of describing the story, the author's skills are very good. In summary, I like to read Western fantasy protagonists with a sense of chivalry and classical adventure, or I have read too many novels such as No-brainer and Killer and I want to read some other types of novels to change my mood. I recommend this one. Overall, it feels like food, or even a higher level. Very good for those with an appetite.
Personally, I think it's okay. It's still quite to my liking. It brings some Eastern power to Western fantasy, but I still have to mention one point, that is, you can add some off-site explanations or psychological descriptions, otherwise it will be a little confusing. It shows that you can't clearly see the protagonist's motivation to save a family with all the effort and even almost death (although it will be said later). The second one is that the emotional line between the protagonist and other heroines is a bit blurry (anyway, I don't understand why Serviya's attitude has changed so much. Maybe it's because I haven't been in love)
Not bad, pretty good-looking. Don't have appendicitis.
The plot is compact and exciting, with fierce conflicts and battles interspersed with the protagonist's encounters with various supporting characters and reflections on his own character. The protagonist is a non-believer who wanders in a continent of faith. He has a passive personality and originally had no connection with the world. In the process of improving his strength, he got involved in a prison robbery, and then went to the next stop while meddling in other people's business, establishing connections with more people, and thus getting involved in new conflicts.
It's good to watch, the plot is interesting, and the characters are likeable. But the writing style and language don't match well with Western fantasy. It's a minor flaw, acceptable.
Good looking [laughs] Come on, author
It's beautiful and emotionally well written. The setting of traveling to the game world and trying your best to survive is also good, but the protagonist has become stronger too quickly recently and the plot before and after the gender change is a bit boring. If I hadn't seen the plot of Servia, I would have quit. Recommended for those who want to watch Western fantasy and emotional dramas
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Hao Kan, I read books very carefully, but this book is very comfortable from beginning to end. Keep it up, I will become your fan [laughs]
The emotions are handled relatively well, but the combat power is a bit weak, but the flaws are not covered up. Recommended
Frog fun, the emotional drama is so delicious
It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author
Silver Dragon is not the heroine, what should I do with the missing Dragon Lady😎
From the previous work, the author's writing is good
Not bad, does it suit my taste? I hope to continue
It's very beautiful. It's a rare protagonist with chivalry or chivalrous spirit. I hope the author can continue writing.
It's really beautiful, [like] [like] [like], I hope the author will keep writing
Very nice, feels like traveling
Very interesting, I look forward to the follow-up.