Hong Kong Island: My First Pot of Gold Came from Gambling

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The content of the article is not smooth

There are them in every chapter. There are a few missing words in the sentences that are very incoherent and uncomfortable to read. They are also a bit false and empty. They are too exaggerated and will easily end up unfinished later in the writing.

The commercial unrealistic narrative is too literary, the novel story is too boring and monotonous, too interesting and too trivial, and the main line positioning is not lacking. I've read more than thirty chapters and I still haven't figured out what route the protagonist takes and what style he takes. Why not call your book Tiangong Game?