A Bad Start, the School Beauty Was Scared to Tears by My Piece of Rubber
开局咸鱼，校花被我一块橡皮吓哭
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 5d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
1.9kReads
5.5Score
267Shelves
412Chapters
218Listens
84.7kReads · all time
Let me give the author a little encouragement first. I think the subject matter is still interesting. But there are a lot of problems. One is that the article has repeated content. There are two places. One of them I forgot, and the other is about the school distributing resources. The protagonist took it and put it on the ground, and was swallowed up by the desk and books. There is a slight difference in this paragraph after I wrote it twice, but overall it is the same thing. I don't know why. In addition, I hope the pace can be a little faster. I am really impatient to know the content behind it. However, everyone thought that the contents recorded in the Holy Court, Empress, School Beauty, and Broken Engagement Templates were almost homogeneous, and they were getting tired of reading them. Although it was easy to write like this, it was very boring to read. Finally, I hope the author can continue writing [laughs] (5 stars is expectation, 4 stars is too cruel for a new book. When the time comes, no one will read it)
I give him five-star praise, and he has indeed written so many thousand words, but this book. Either it was written by AI, or it was polished by AI. I can't tell the specifics, but so far I have seen two places where I should have gone down, but there were duplicates of the previous chapter. A glance at AI, but aside from AI, it is indeed a refreshing article, and there is nothing frustrating about it.
It's beautiful, the writing is interesting, and the main character is entertaining all the way to the end.
The idea is very good, but I just want to know when the protagonist will know that he is strong, otherwise it will make me feel uncomfortable watching it.
Come on, author, strive for ten updates a day [Chigua]
Can you update 10 times a day?
Very good, the author should work hard
It feels very interesting [laughing]
It didn't feel good enough in the early stage, but it was okay in the later stage.
It just looks good, there are so many reasons!