Why Don't the Protagonists Let Me Commit Suicide?

OK, next I will use the words that are the most straightforward, the simplest, the most understandable, the most practical, the most down-to-earth, the least roundabout, the least fake, the least fancy, the most to the point, the cleanest, the most frank, the most simple and simple, the closest to daily life, the least airs, and the least piling up of fancy words. It does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout ideas, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be profound, and does not add unnecessary and cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, every sentence is sincere and true, the whole process is in plain language, there is no subtlety or concealment, every sentence goes straight to the core point, and the writing style is simple and unpretentious. , The expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that there is no empty words, so neat that there is no nonsense, so frank that no reservations are hidden, and so popular that it is popular. People of all ages can understand it. It is hard-core and frank without being tactful. It is refreshing and direct without procrastination. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being profound. It goes straight to the point without paving the way. It tells the truth without hiding. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being ostentatious. It is clear and clear without being vague. It is frank and candid without going around in circles. I tell you: it looks good.

The protagonist is beautiful and strong, with long black hair and red eyes, and the representative animal is a raven, the crow king! (Ahem, cough, cross-talk) Very good🌹🌹 The plot is also very interesting. The protagonist actually looks like a guy who pretends to be strong, tough-talking and soft-hearted. The system is a very good baby (currently, I believe it will be in the future too! 😘) The small knife is happy, the big knife is happy~ (I don't have a knife at the moment, I just feel sorry for the protagonists of the world line in the previous scene) Everyone is a good baby The villain is well created and he is very annoying from the beginning. He is worthy of being the biggest boss in the original work (first world line). Come on, author, don't stop updating (I hope silently, because there are many books on the shelf that have been interrupted, and there are also those who have something to do or can't persist [blowing kiss]) It's a little bit of a knife at the moment, but it didn't hurt me, I just feel bad. Some people say that AI smells very strong. I don't know about this. I think it looks pretty. You can judge by yourself. I came to read this article because of the sentence "King Crow!". Please don't say anything bad because of that article or this article. I just wrote it out of my head at the time. Some riddles are embarrassing, but actually I think it's okay? If you write in vernacular, you won't be qualified at all. If you write in a complete way, it will run counter to the setting. It depends on your personal feelings. To sum up, these are all my personal thoughts (don't scold me)

It's so delicious😋 I read the introduction and it was so attractive. After reading a book review, I jumped straight into it. Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing a that the bonding of bonding bond that bonded bonding bonding bonding bonding bonding bond that bonded bond that bonding and bonding direction and bonded these five little bitter melons (uh uh, Qiqi is also included, hahahaha, the balsam pear in my head is also a bitter melon 🌚) is that the team bond is great! ! Delicious, delicious and refreshing! ! ! Qiqi's character is also very high, everyone is thinking about this/. She also has the beautiful and powerful buff, I don't care about Qiqi in this setting, who cares about Qiqi😋 Even if she is with the tsundere Maine Coon cat, Miss Wen Zhaoxue, she is still a super good mother. Uh uh uh... It's just such a big mess of CP. It's not hard for me to eat at all. Please have more of this😋 I hope that in the later stage, Qiqi will still have the means (ability) to protect themselves in addition to the spirit of speech. Teacher Qin, you must train the five of them well🌚 Now in my mind, in addition to "delicious, delicious and refreshing", the only thing that comes to my mind is "www, five little bitter gourds". It's so beautiful. I don't want anyone to miss this book😋 It's a pity that I'm still a child and I don't dare to read this book. I hope you won't stop updating it. I will continue to follow up on it💋

It's okay. The writing is very good, the protagonist is beautiful and strong, and the interaction between the team is also very warm. However, the protagonist's role and highlights are a bit missing... I personally hope there will be more highlights and battle damage... (Hehe)

This book is so sexy💔🤯It's so beautiful🥺Men get menstruation after reading it🙄Women get crazy after reading it💪This is the nemesis of depression pictures😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱It's so handsome😍It's a god🙏It's my rose🌹It lights up my dark skin The life of darkness ⚡️makes my world meaningful🤩I ran🏃I jumped🤸I danced the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😁💃made me realize that God does exist😇I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying🫰From now on, the world will no longer be short of water🥲The goddess will update soon🥹The evil god will give me a step back, a step back🤺🤺🤺

Just watch it without saying a word. I will win over everyone who has read the introduction but not read the content to achieve the purpose of watching it again. Having said that, the writing must be excellent, the plot is not subtle, and the characters have distinct personalities. Especially if you like Di Hua (micro) and Meiqiang Pei (the protagonist is half fake, the kind that leads to misunderstandings, but does not separate them), go directly. Ps: The character arcs and the friendship between them are also very interesting. In addition, the lines and some descriptions of the characters may make some readers think that it is "second-rate", but as someone who likes to appreciate novels from all over the world, I still think that it is worth tasting for those who read my review, because after combining the plot, setting, atmosphere rendering and the exaggeration of the first few chapters, the above points are not "thunder", but features. However, this differs from person to person. You have to try a special dish to know how delicious it is (￣∇￣)

The most moving part of the story is never the highlight of a single person, but the power of a group of people trapped in a tragic script to redeem each other and protect each other. The protagonist Yan Qi is sober and tenacious. With the foreknowledge of the ending of BE, he does not passively wait for a chess piece, but actively takes up the banner of "tearing up the script" - he understands that every character in the original work is involuntarily, and feels sorry for the tragic fate they have been set for, so his resistance is never just a simple one. Fight alone, but pull every soul that should have fallen to change their destiny together. There is no absolute tool man here. Each character is three-dimensional and vivid, with their own scars and obsessions, but in breaking the game side by side, they shine with their own light (I made it up randomly, don't comment if you don't like it) -Look, the core setting is pretty cool anyway. I think it's beautiful. Hehe, the protagonist Yan Qi travels into a manga with depressing supernatural powers where everyone died tragically. He awakens the "Golden Words" that can tamper with cause and effect, but it comes with fatal side effects - the more straightforward it is, the more severe the backlash of heaven is. In order to save his companions who are destined to die (albeit with a little knife), he can only use the ambiguous "Quotations of the God Stick" to survive. The whole defense zone accidentally regarded him as the unfathomable "The Riddler" (the setting of the Riddler is still very popular). In the eyes of others, he became a god who controls life and death (pseudo-humanization), but he silently endured the severe pain of blood oozing from his seven orifices. What a contrast! And the design of this beautiful and powerful character also hit my mark. The protagonist has a special effect of black feathers like a raven. To the outside world, he is a cold-eyed chess player who controls the field and reverses life and death. But privately, he bites the quilt in pain at night. Every time he maintains a decent posture, he has to rely on willpower. This contrasting setting makes people feel distressed... [Cry] (Don't complain if you don't like it)

Yanqi, a beauty with long black hair and red eyes, shaped like a crow, likes to be sparkly. Come and take a look if you pass by ✌︎ ॑꒳ ॑✌︎. Not only Yanqi, but also the rest of the protagonist group have animal sculptures (fox sculptures, puppy sculptures...). All in all, it is a loving zoo! The second highlight is the daily interactions, which are very warm. Everyone loves each other. The pigtails for Yan team are so cute ᗜⰙᗜ, and the birthday part is even more heartwarming. Welcome to read more details about how to get along with each other. The third highlight is that not only the protagonist group has highlights, but also other characters have their own charm and highlights. If you want to see a group portrait, choose this book. After reading the author's big article, you will be shocked. Everyone should have their own feelings about other highlights! And for those of you who think the book is still short, don't worry, it's basically two chapters a day. Okay, enough recommendations. Dear author, please be sure to pay attention to rest. You are very attentive to every character. I pray that there is no need to say more. It is authoritative! Each character has its own characteristics and charm. To be honest, I quite disliked the character Lu Fenxing at first, but later I realized that he was just an awkward guy with a hard mouth and a soft heart. Everyone is very good, including the story you are writing about the genius of Lao Qin's generation fifteen years ago. They are all very, very good. I look forward to your unfinished stories, including Wantianqing, the Seventh Academy, and other academies. I hope that you will all find perfection in that world. Finally, Yan Qi, Yan Team, the author writes that you are so gentle and reliable. You said that when you become the captain, you must take on the responsibility of the captain, and you did it. You made the world stronger. It was a tacit understanding that grew silently in the silence of getting along. It was not the original kind of "hitting the wall" or "forced". You have protected everyone well, but I hope you can love yourself well. When you see everyone celebrating your birthday, will your sense of belonging become stronger? Your background is gentleness. You are really like a raven, descending into this world, taking away their misfortune and opening a new chapter. It's a bit long-winded, because I have read so many books and finally found a book that suits my taste. I hope my review can be a reference for everyone. I really recommend it ⌯ᵔᗜᵔ⌯ಣ. Finally, Crow Sculpture is really invincible! Praise the crow sculpture! Supplementary comment: One thing that may make some treasures more shocking is that because of the limitations of the Yan team's abilities, some of Yan Qi's words are a bit out of place, hahaha (but I personally think they are very handsome ៷>ᴗ<៷) Then there is a very cool point about Yan Qi's system. When Yan Qi asked if there would be any punishment mechanism, the system's original answer was as follows: [My full name is 'Yinanping Branch Resident Intervention System', but my underlying core code only has one piece of code – 'Protect the host's life and will at all costs'. I am not the overseer of the original work, nor am I the defender of the world. I am your exclusive assistant. This really pokes me, so when Yan Qi protects his teammates and gets injured, 996 will still be angry. I hope the host can consider himself more [send heart][send heart][send heart]

This setting is really good, it's so fun to watch😋 That's right, the protagonists are strong, but why do they feel like they haven't done any real harm to the villains? Maybe it's because the plot hasn't arrived yet or for other reasons, but when I see the protagonist group getting seriously injured from time to time, my God, I feel so uncomfortable╯╰, and I feel very aggrieved. However, all aspects of the character creation are very successful, just like each living person, and the plot connection is very natural, which is very addictive👍. Secondly, the cool thing is that it's really cool😋 Finally, I would like to remind everyone, don't be too obsessed with the text😇 Otherwise, after about 10 chapters, you will get a little bit confused while reading it. In fact, I am now particularly afraid that the protagonist group in this book will be like the one written by "Early Spring". Don't forget that in the end, the protagonist group is dead and injured, but in the end, the villain has nothing to do (abandoned the book)😱😱😱It's really ptsd

This setting is so delicious and the characters are so good. It's almost unique in comics! ! ... But can you use less AI? It's very obvious in the text and it's so fragmented and awkward to read () but I really like this setting and I can't give it up because I really like it so much. The setting is really to my liking. Everyone's characters really poked at me and really made me cry. TT. Goddess, can you use less AI polish on the content? I want to see some authentic QAQ of living beings, please, Goddess...

The setting really impressed me. In fact, I have read several books with similar settings, but none of them are as high-level as the main characters in this book (basically they start with the lowest level of superpower XX and then squeeze into the group of comic protagonists to improve their own abilities by relying on the brainstorming ideas from forum comic readers who have the highest response, such as the Trickster). This kind of setting is a bit tired, and then I saw this treasure. The protagonist's control is over! ! At first, I couldn't help but click in and take a look because the cover looked so good. Unexpectedly, I tied it all of a sudden (because I am an office worker, so my reading time is relatively short and I mostly listen to books) But as for the shortcomings, I personally think that the transition between the first trouble-making event and the second major trouble-making event is a bit too hasty. When I read the article, I felt that the protagonist was not given a chance to breathe. Just after the first wave of things happened, the second wave came again. This villain is really a villain, and the portrayal is actually quite good. I appreciate your villain's ability to cause trouble! ! (Looking forward to jpg) And the system is also very cute! I have read many other types of texts with systems. The system either squeezes the host or does not listen to the instructions. On the surface, it seems to be siding with the host. In fact, it is either secretly cheating the host or just likes to give random orders and give the host a new life. I am really speechless after reading this. (However, there are many good systems, but in the novels I read, few systems sincerely help the host/sigh jpg) Exception: There are five very cute animals in the five-person group, and their daily interactions with each other are very heartwarming! It warms my heart to see it! ! O(╥╥)o! As a friendly tribute to the readers of the manga forum, I will appreciate the CPs one by one! My mama, my mama, my mama, come on (bushi)🤤🤤 Wife, please update me (making a living) However, I still want to mention one thing. I hope Yanyan will gradually develop self-protection methods under Teacher Qin's training when he is unable to use his abilities (I don't expect to have the skills of a special soldier, but I don't want to be too weak... It will be a bit out of character,), otherwise this may be a fatal weakness. If a monster rushes in front of Yanyan, Yanyan's inability to fight at close quarters will somewhat reduce my interest in reading the article later... Hiss😳😳

Very few. . The main characters each have their own charms, Xiaoqi is beautiful and strong, and all7 is delicious. Eh. . I feel like the protagonist's presence is a bit low It's very annoying to see the forums that always write about CP. I'm here because I don't have CP and I have to mention CP. The AI tastes so strong that I didn't use the AI to help me eat. I'll try it again after a while. When chatting with AI (deepseek), I only need to talk about one setting and it will be discussed later. It is obviously mentioned in the article. The protagonist gives the supporting character a bracelet, and he keeps mentioning it after that. It smells too strong of AI.

This book is quite innovative in character design. At first, I thought Yan Qi was the kind of person who endured pain without explanation. Tan Fox's thoughts are too delicate. I quite like Tan Fox and Yan Qi's CP. [Admiration] Every time I see Lin can notice those small details that I can't find, I am particularly shocked. There is also the tsundere young lady who is hard-spoken and soft-hearted, and there is also the big sunshine dog, which seems to be Beagle. He is very noisy and at the same time very careful. I can't help it. Although he discovered the time much slower than others, it also shocked me. Also, Little Xingxing, I thought he was a pure villain at first, but turned out to be such a multi-faceted villain? I love you hard, but I also have a hard mouth and a soft heart. There are also many characters that I particularly like. Their names are a bit difficult to write, so I won't write them. And every time Yanqi prepares to open the game, I feel excited and distressed at the same time. And those sentences are also very beautiful. Let me give you an example: "The shadow of death does not belong to today's sun" "The family from the night buries tonight's misfortune" This time, the hearing loss among the five senses of Yanqi was discovered by Dan Fox first, so I just ate it. They were all delicious to me. Wuwuwu, I saw that almost all the geniuses of the previous generation had fallen, 25... There were no more than five left (actually I forgot a few), those heroes... Some of them I can't even remember their names, they died, why so many people died in just a few pictures, I really wanted to cry fainting, [crying] And I also clearly understood that their death was destined, seeing them turn from living teenagers into cold corpses. And the way they died was so shocking to me. Pledge to die for the country. I really can't stand it anymore, my eyes are swollen like walnuts. [Crying] Heroes, may you be safe, healthy, and worry-free in the next life. There is no need to be a hero anymore, I just want you to be healthy. [Crying] I saw a lot of people talking about this AI problem. I would like to ask, apart from the forum, are there any other places where AI can be discussed? If it is true, I can't accept it. I have zero contact or communication with AI other than asking questions, so I don't know much about it. Woohoo, I also like this novel very much, but I can't accept AI.

Who knows? I have read more than a dozen or twenty books, both finished and unfinished. This is my favorite among all the comic strips with vests and supernatural powers that can travel through groups! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! It's really the group portrait I want to see! I don't know how many books I've read, but in the end they all became the story of the time-traveling protagonist. What I want to see is such a lively group portrait! ! This is a group portrait that will not erase the brilliance of the main characters in the original book! ! Oh my gosh, who knew how much I liked this book! ! Show them all to me, my God, this is a real team! ! This kind of comic with crying and laughter, flesh and blood, and knives is what I want to read. It's really good! ! There is no plot of knife-for-sense, and no vulgar taste. The whole story has a compact rhythm, smooth graphics, and a fascinating plot. It's simply great! ! And the plots that I found enjoyable are all written on it! ! There is nothing wrong with it except that it was not finished when I watched it. Teacher, can you write more? It's not much, just 100 pictures a day

I've finished reading this one. It's also very delicious. The taste of the second dimension is very strong. The passion and bond of young people are simply delicious. The spirit of youth is a rare thing. Alas, the savior must succeed in saving the world. Anyway, take a look The first impression that gave me was that life is so hard, and there is not much good food to eat. Oh my God, life is still so hard every day, so hard, there must be a good ending. Oh my God, the protagonist, you must not die, everyone in the protagonist team must live. The writing is very good, and the feeling of depression is created very well. The writing is also very interesting, such as the little quarrels between the team and so on. It is very delicious, very delicious.

It's normal to like Xiaoyan because he is good-looking and good-looking. The whole world likes Xiaoyan. After all, Xiaoyan is the most perfect. He has a well-developed mind, logical thinking, good at observation, strong creativity, and extremely high quality. He is not panicked, calm and composed, good at solving problems, can think of many good ideas, thirsts for knowledge, and his mind is full of thoughts about human beings and the universe. He does not blindly follow the trend. , Is at the forefront of trends, a fashion niche, has his own unique insights into interpersonal relationships and social phenomena, is upright, not greedy for small gains, looks cold but is actually full of love and care in his heart, loves animals, is very popular, has an extraordinary temperament, is extremely handsome and super cute and cold attributes, I say these are just facts, after all, I am a very fair person So far, I personally think it's pretty good, and the plot settings are also very interesting, but the updates are too slow and I always want to save up.

Overall it's okay, the plot is smooth, the characters are well created, each person has their own characteristics, and the dialogue between the system and the protagonist is also very interesting. 1 The writing style is relatively stiff, with a lot of repeated emphasis, which can be a bit boring. For example, black bracelets are mentioned almost whenever Xie Linzhou is mentioned. I hope it can be improved. 2 I hope the author will stop using slender teenagers to describe characters that are very weak. It is understandable that the protagonist said slender at the beginning, after all, it is fragile, but it should not be the case later when the physical skills are practiced. Or maybe I have misunderstood. Maybe the author wants to express the feeling of being thin? Another example is Pei Zhaoxue, she is a sniper, the recoil of the gun is very big, and the author also said in the skiing photos that her physical skills are very good, her core is strong, it is impossible to have no muscles. So when describing thinness, it gives people a feeling of left and right brains fighting each other. 3. When describing female characters, the author always uses the term "girl", while the male characters use the term "boy". Please return the neutral words, please return the neutral words, please return the neutral words! I hope the author can see that this comment is either a boy or a girl, or both boys. 4 With special abilities, the gap in physical strength between men and women should have been evened out, but female characters are very rare. It should be hoped that the ratio of female to male characters can be adjusted again. Overall, it is a good article with great potential, I would like to encourage you.

It's really beautiful : P! The group portraits of the Superpower Academy are excellent. Everyone in the protagonist group has a unique personality, and the way they interact with each other is very cute! The plot is atypical, with a smooth journey to save the world, and the social background is quite dark, which makes people look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. Uh-huh! Moreover, the author is very good at writing, the plot is rigorous but not literal, and there is a light sense of humor. I fell in love with it immediately! Come on, the author, look forward to the next plot! O(^▽^)o Mmmmm... Grandma is very happy to see it.

It's so pretty🥺 Men are menstruating when they see it 🙄 Women are going crazy when they see it 💪 This is the nemesis of depression 😎 It's the alarm clock for vegetative people 😭 It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😱 So handsome 😘 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😊 I run, I jump, I'm on the 20th floor The tango danced on the balcony😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people😨It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It sounded so good🥰It is God, my rose, which illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. I hope this class of students will live well [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I came here to read the introduction without CP. It's a pretty good book. The story is interesting and interesting. The main character is a beautiful, strong and miserable person. The author's selling of C and P is very serious. It's basically all words. I can't do it anymore. I was tricked by Wu CP and I found out that selling C and P is very serious. But the whole book is still very good.

Very fragrant setting! ! The male protagonist is a crow figure with long hair. He speaks freely but has backlash. After the backlash, he is worried by his teammates. It is really heartwarming that several people care about each other! ! The group portraits and character designs are all good. And I personally don't like the chapters related to comics and forums. (I came here because I wanted to have no cp, and the comments about cp in the forum are a bit off-putting to me personally.) But they are separated from the main text, so it is easy to skip. Some of the descriptions are a bit strange, the connection between chapters is a bit stiff and the end of the previous chapter is repeated too much (a loss!) Overall it is worth reading!

This book is really interesting, especially because the protagonist did not come into contact with the protagonist group because he was kidnapped by the system in a sudden accident in order to survive, but because he wanted the protagonist group to survive. This kind of preference that is completely on the side of the protagonist is so delicious ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧. The key point is also to explain why it is the readers who save and not the author. The author of this comic is still amazing ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ (scratching his head). Especially the system, which is not a fan of any kidnapping, just hopes that Xiao Yan Qi can do well. There are no tasks and no punishments. What he wants to do depends entirely on Yan Qi's personal wishes. Then there is our team, oh ~ we are all very good kids ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა. Long live friendship at last! Group portrait competition is high!

It's very capable, but... One thing, the protagonists are a bit too familiar. I mean, the transition is not natural, like going from strangers directly to good friends (this is my personal feeling). Of course, this novel is still very interesting and very exciting. The beautiful, strong and miserable characters will never go out of style. Good luck to the author.

I will use the most direct, truthful, thorough, naked, harshest, sharpest, most profound, most realistic, least modified, least roundabout, least roundabout, least circuitous, most heart-piercing, and hardest Core, the crispest, the neatest, the most straightforward, the most decisive, the least ink-stained, the least procrastinating, the least sloppy, the most painful, the most ruthless, the least humane, the least showy, the least concerned about dignity, the most to the point, the most Straight to the point, the most straightforward, the most straightforward, the most direct to the core, the most superficial, the least disguised, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least greeting, the least flattering, the least hypocritical, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least The language that is the least pretentious, the least internal, the least nonsense, the least verbose, the least redundant, the least empty, the least detour, the least detour, the least grinding, the least coy, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least artificial language tells you very nice

It's very interesting. Although some people in the comment area said that the author can use AI, I think that the author actually has a lot of his own ideas, and he mainly has a little polishing element in it. The author's writing style has been improving especially after entering the 100th chapter. The writing is beautiful, the characters each have their own characteristics, and the sour and sadistic scenes are also delicious. I have seen the most unified comment area where all kinds of cp messes are made, and then all are directed at the protagonist, and then the author takes the lead. It's so cool, I can only say. Come on, boss, come on, boss, do you dare to update 100 chapters suddenly one day? It scares me to death. ◤•͈ᴥ•͈◥ ୭

The protagonist is beautiful and strong, with long black hair and red eyes. Represents the animal raven. Superpowers have backlash. This book gave me a sense of contrast. This kind of time-traveling into comics has become a template. At first, I thought it was the usual time-travel and then it was loved by comic readers alone. As a result, I didn't expect that the protagonist is not the kind that is loved by all readers, like a group portrait. Also, the protagonist starts off showing off and has a strong personality, which is quite cool. This book is fast-paced, but there are small farces in the middle and reading comics to slow down the pace. The system of this book is humane and the main character comes first. He doesn't appear too many times, but important things are covered by him. It's very fun. The characters also have some ingenuity and know how to create contrasts. Although the gentle tone of the comic readers' comments weakens the sense of reality, the rich content saves the functionality. Overall, it was a pleasure to watch. 😋

It looks good. I haven't seen such an article for a long time. My eyes light up. This one star is because the AI ​​feeling is a bit too strong. I hope the author can add some of his own writing style in the future. I believe the article will be better.

1. The author portrays the characters and abilities of the five protagonists very well, and the characters are also very prominent, and the details are appropriate. 2. The highlight moments of the protagonist are also very passionate, and the foreshadowing is quite deep. 3. The author is also very diligent, updating almost twice a day. 4. The author's writing style is also very beautiful. 5. The description of the forum is appropriately detailed, and the discussion content is also very rich, such as CP, plot, character, and highlights. 6. There are no typos, the whole article reads very smoothly, and my ability to choose words and form sentences is also very good.

The subject matter of the book itself is okay, the characters are vivid and lively, not just one-sided but vivid. I think this is a very praiseworthy point of the whole book [Blow kiss] However, there are still some small shortcomings. I feel that the world view and settings of the entire book have not been completed yet. Sometimes it seems hazy, but it may be more complete later. The writing seems to be very good, but the vocabulary seems to be too gorgeous, especially the detailed description of the environment. I would mind describing more about the stadium, environment, etc. The pictures are not rich enough and I can't imagine it. [Thinking] These may be my own problems, but I feel better if I talk about it, and there are other things. I have always been skeptical about the identity of the protagonist. I suggest that the author improve it. I really want to know the identity of the protagonist in this world. If there is no identity, forget it. There are other identities. I hope to write them all in the later stage. [Blow kiss] Also. Please introduce some members from other five schools, I really want to know! Finally, I would like to say that I really, really like Yan Qi, the protagonist of this book. A very cute, very cute little baby. I have always thought that he and the system are very good [blowing kiss] This little system is also very cute and I am one of my fans (os: same as me). My biggest wish at the moment is that the author can write more chapters [shy] hehehehehhh Also, I feel that there are too many seconds to understand the plot, which makes a stupid person like me seem particularly ignorant. I hope to add some plots where the protagonist is injured and then everyone around him knows. This kind of plot makes me very happy (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

Needless to say, it's very interesting. I really like this book, especially when 25 people work together [Adore][Adore]. Now I'm waiting for the update. As for the issues mentioned in the comment area? I didn't notice it myself, maybe because I haven't used this software before. Each character is very three-dimensional, which makes people want to read another chapter after reading one chapter. There are no bloody plots. The friendship lines make people feel warm and have a strong sense of group portrait. (I rarely write reviews, and I rarely follow unfinished stories. The above are just my personal thoughts, don't scold me [crying]) I think the only shortcoming of watching it now is that it is not finished yet. I want to watch the subsequent plot. (Big cheers for the author!! Great work, don't stop updating) [Love] [Love]