Even though he is a fan of Red Dead Redemption, he is not considered a fan of him. Nineteenth-century America was not the end of the road for outlaws. This is the starting point of capital. Desperadoes stand in the way of capital. So they reached the end.
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A nice cousin fanfic, the main character has brains and abilities, but his personality is a bit arrogant [laughter]
It didn't work out later. The protagonist helped plan so many plans to make a lot of money, but he still felt dispensable in the gang. Now we are about to enter the third chapter of the main plot. The character of King Plan has not changed. This gang that is destined to be tragic can no longer stop. Unless the deus ex machina comes later, I can't think of any way to get to a good ending. At most, I can die decently [eating melon]
It looks good, and the writing is good. The protagonist is a nanny, but I think the protagonist is a flesh-and-blood person. He just lacks love. Dutch has such a charm. What impresses the protagonist is the other people in the gang and the atmosphere of this gang. He has been in the gang for more than ten years. Pai said he didn't care, but he was lonely after all. The Fan Gang just made up for this, but Daji in the later period was too stupid and crazy, and destroyed the gang, so I hope the protagonist will not follow suit, like Arthur, until the gang is completely destroyed. When it fell, we started to make some repairs. After rescuing the river shrimp, we should start to kill the legendary mouse. I believe your protagonist's intelligence must be able to see that Micah is an undercover agent. To put it bluntly, in the original book, it is mainly about gangs, and few have brains. Damn it, Dutch went crazy again after River Shrimp died. No one can tell that Micah is an undercover agent. As long as River Shrimp is still alive, he will be able to detect after one or two failures. If something is wrong, he can identify who the undercover is. And as long as River Shrimp is not dead, Dutch shouldn't be that crazy.
As a player of Big Cousin 2000h, I highly recommend this book. The IQ is online. The protagonist does not just follow the main plot. He has his own ideas. No one who deserves to die will die. The plot is online and the writing is online.
However, there are also some flaws, such as Mike becoming David's eldest brother, but this was later corrected, so it is just a writing error. Of course, four years are added in the front and three years are added in the back. These small mistakes are insignificant. Does not affect the main reading.
The character of the protagonist is also well portrayed. As an "old" gangster who has survived for more than 30 years, his caution and IQ are all online. His martial arts skills are not bad but he is not brainless. He has a cautious personality, cold on the outside and hot on the inside. He knows the wind before many storms come, makes a lot of preparations, and helps the Fan Gang through every difficult moment.
According to the direction of the text, it should be that everyone except the Dachi sect received the pardon at the end, and the pardon did not come unexpectedly. The protagonist solved the mining capitalist who was rescued by the highway robbers during his gangster career.
It is already one of the best second creations now, come on
:)
The plot and emotional descriptions are delicate. The plot fits the original plot but is very reasonable on this basis. The personalities of each character are obvious and not abrupt. The only worry is that the author wants to go out of the original story frame. After all, the introduction has also mentioned it, but so far it is deeper and harder to escape. If Jack's plot changes are made well, he can start a new story based on his own imagination. Of course, this will test the author's ability to coordinate the character's personality characteristics to create a new story after the original story line is cut;
In conclusion, if you are still reading, give the author some encouragement, otherwise you will have no choice but to read it. It is not easy to find a book that suits your appetite.
The rating shouldn't be so low. It's really rare to have such a protagonist in this era where the average person is dominated by protagonists who make no sense and can only make fun of time travel. The regrets of the characters have basically been made up. Those who have played the game are very pleased to see this.
For similar books, I didn't expect that the quality of Tomato's book in the past two years is still very good. At least I can read it after clicking it. I didn't want to eat a lot and clicked on it. The main thing was that I had to jump out and couldn't read it. The story was reasonable and there were no surprises. It was a very good book. At least it was very comfortable to read.
Mainly for the sake of the plot, it is a slightly forced design to keep Arthur and his gang together, but everything else is good, because the protagonist is so capable of carrying that he can be the boss himself. Trust is always the most rare thing, so we can understand weaknesses that are not weaknesses.
The writing is quite interesting. The protagonist is arrogant and has a poisonous tongue. He is not the perfect protagonist who cheats and slaps people in the face. From the perspective of others, he may think that the protagonist is an old nanny. I was also very depressed at first. Is this a gangster that must be controlled? But the protagonist is a flesh-and-blood person who struggles and hesitates. He has been wandering for many years before feeling the few kindnesses in the gang. He knows what is best for himself, but he also knows that he cannot let go of those people, so he chooses to actively fight for, protect, and hold his destiny in his own hands instead of just walking away. Fortunately, he was strong enough to drag everyone out of their destined fate.
The writing is quite good, and for someone like me who doesn't play games, it's quite relatable. In the early and middle stages, the protagonist always gives them the scoop, but is squeezed out by Dutch. I always feel a little aggrieved. I hope it won't stop updating.
It's refreshing and well written. I haven't played much of Red Dead Redemption, so I can say I don't understand it at all. I can easily get into the novel written by the author. The characters are well established and there is no "I don't know what you are talking about" feeling like in other fan novels. This is my first time popping rice since watching tomatoes.
In the west, the protagonist and his family (the Van der Linde gang) survive, fight, and battle of wits and courage. I won't go into spoilers. It's good to watch.
PS: The author is as productive as a sow at this stage.
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I really like this novel. Although I didn't have any foresight, it was very comfortable to read. It feels very immersive to that era. Forgive me for my low cultural level, I can't describe that feeling. Anyway, it just feels right. It looks much more interesting than the time-travel one.
1. The rhythm is very appropriate and the character description is in place (the protagonist becomes three-dimensional)
2. The plot description is not confusing and makes people feel comfortable (at least that's how I feel)
3. The writing is good, and the narrative style fits the background very well (very immersive, which makes me happy)
Generally speaking, it is more than a masterpiece but not a masterpiece. It is worth reading. I hope the author will work hard [learned]
It's great and has great potential, the kind of potential I envy. The group portrait, character psychology and character creation can be understood by you. I suggest you try other themes. It will definitely become a hit. Red Dead Redemption is still a niche.
This Red Dead Redemption fanfic is cleverly conceived, has a logical narrative, and is written smoothly. It is one of the few treasures in the Wilderness Cousin fanfic. It is ranked first in the recommendation list with Dutch I Want to Be President.
The writing is very good, the author's description of the characters' personalities is relatively clear, and the story is also interesting hahaha. But I don't know how to rewrite their fate in the future. Now it seems that the world's understanding of gang missions is slowly changing.
I casually clicked in to take a look, and unexpectedly it looked pretty good. The male protagonist has brains and a good character. The original plot is also very interesting, and the timeline is before the original plot, which is generally reasonable. Keep looking forward to the follow-up [blowing kiss]
The plot is almost over, and I just remembered to give it a five-star review. It was actually quite frustrating to watch at first, and I kept thinking why Micah wasn't killed earlier? But I particularly liked the protagonist's way of living, so I kept watching. After watching it, I suddenly thought that the protagonist actually does not know from our God's perspective what kind of person Micah is and what his purpose is. He can only judge it through one incident after another, and it has changed the fate of many people while constantly hiding the truth. Now that I have seen the separation from the gang and roughly know the future development, it can be regarded as getting what I wanted, and it seems that the ending is very close. Overall, I think it is a good book. The protagonist seems contradictory, but in fact, he fits the character of a person who experienced a lot of hardships and life-and-death crises in that era, felt the warmth of the gang, but is also very rational. It was quite enjoyable to watch, and I hope everyone has a good ending (Micah dies).
Very good, very good, but I personally have doubts about the character of the David and Mike brothers. Is the ability of the two brothers written down too low? They are basically sharpshooters. The most important thing is Mike's melee ability. It's a bit ridiculous for Charles to defeat Mike. Except that these two brothers have personal problems with their abilities. In other respects, it is impeccable. Except for the Daqi book, this is the best Big Dart article I found on Tomato [][][]
One less star is because the borrowed worldview has no memory and does not meet the expectations of clicking into the book. Four stars is because the writing is good, but not exciting enough. It is difficult to read a book patiently in this era. Zhu Xianfang is probably tepid now.
If it was just about giving Fan Bang a good result, it would be just an ordinary story, but the author added more personal settings later and was writing the story behind Fan Bang. When would it be written? What will happen after the eldest lady escapes? The story now has left Red Dead Redemption and moved towards the uncontrollable unknown.
I heard that this book is written in AI, but as far as I am a 15-year-old bookworm, this book is at least better than 70% of the authors. Although it is not a sacred book, it is indeed a fine book. High scores are encouraged.
Very good novel. Arthur can now become a civilized person and start a family [face covering]. I mean, will there be some linkage with Sihai Brothers in the future? After all, I think my current development requires me to be a gangster.
I don't understand why this book has such a low rating. It is obviously the best Red Dead fan work I have seen on Yangpersimmon. Even if it does not have Red Dead elements, it is still a great American western novel.
It's okay. Most of the fanfics of Big Bodyguard give people the impression that they are bland, and this one is no exception. It's like Liang Baikai.
It's very interesting. It's an extremely rare book among the Big Cousin fanfics with excellent writing, reasonable logic, and extremely accurate character analysis. Come on.
One of the best fanfics of Big Cousin. Don't give up on this book because of its low rating. This second creation task is unfortunately absolutely rational. Worth a look
The writing is quite good. The low score is due to the fact that in the early stage it was too boring and forced to follow the plot, and it felt a bit fatal. However, in the later stage, it gradually got better and broke the plot, describing the roughness of the economy and people's livelihood in the United States after the Civil War.
There is a pretty good Cousin fanfic in Tomato, but the writing style is biased toward daily life. There are no particularly exciting highlights or impressive points. Some plots are not logical enough, and the transition of Valentine's plot is not smooth. But it is indeed worth watching. It satisfies my regrets as a gamer. It is the first time I give a gift to the author on Tomato. Come on, keep writing.
The plot is smooth and there are no unacceptable poisonous points. The only flaw is that it does not write an impressive plot. Again, in my opinion, it is a novel that is biased towards daily life (daily life of a desperado).
The latest volume is very well written, with tension, memorable points, and a logical plot. The author is really awesome, and I would like to remind you to update it by the way.
It can be seen that it is assisted by AI, but it is still a good fanfic if placed here.
In the early stages of this book, it was considered a fanfiction, but in the later stages, it really became eye-catching and created its own plot line.
A nice cousin fanfic, the main character has brains and abilities, but his personality is a bit arrogant [laughter] It didn't work out later. The protagonist helped plan so many plans to make a lot of money, but he still felt dispensable in the gang. Now we are about to enter the third chapter of the main plot. The character of King Plan has not changed. This gang that is destined to be tragic can no longer stop. Unless the deus ex machina comes later, I can't think of any way to get to a good ending. At most, I can die decently [eating melon]
It looks good, and the writing is good. The protagonist is a nanny, but I think the protagonist is a flesh-and-blood person. He just lacks love. Dutch has such a charm. What impresses the protagonist is the other people in the gang and the atmosphere of this gang. He has been in the gang for more than ten years. Pai said he didn't care, but he was lonely after all. The Fan Gang just made up for this, but Daji in the later period was too stupid and crazy, and destroyed the gang, so I hope the protagonist will not follow suit, like Arthur, until the gang is completely destroyed. When it fell, we started to make some repairs. After rescuing the river shrimp, we should start to kill the legendary mouse. I believe your protagonist's intelligence must be able to see that Micah is an undercover agent. To put it bluntly, in the original book, it is mainly about gangs, and few have brains. Damn it, Dutch went crazy again after River Shrimp died. No one can tell that Micah is an undercover agent. As long as River Shrimp is still alive, he will be able to detect after one or two failures. If something is wrong, he can identify who the undercover is. And as long as River Shrimp is not dead, Dutch shouldn't be that crazy.
As a player of Big Cousin 2000h, I highly recommend this book. The IQ is online. The protagonist does not just follow the main plot. He has his own ideas. No one who deserves to die will die. The plot is online and the writing is online. However, there are also some flaws, such as Mike becoming David's eldest brother, but this was later corrected, so it is just a writing error. Of course, four years are added in the front and three years are added in the back. These small mistakes are insignificant. Does not affect the main reading. The character of the protagonist is also well portrayed. As an "old" gangster who has survived for more than 30 years, his caution and IQ are all online. His martial arts skills are not bad but he is not brainless. He has a cautious personality, cold on the outside and hot on the inside. He knows the wind before many storms come, makes a lot of preparations, and helps the Fan Gang through every difficult moment. According to the direction of the text, it should be that everyone except the Dachi sect received the pardon at the end, and the pardon did not come unexpectedly. The protagonist solved the mining capitalist who was rescued by the highway robbers during his gangster career. It is already one of the best second creations now, come on :)
The plot and emotional descriptions are delicate. The plot fits the original plot but is very reasonable on this basis. The personalities of each character are obvious and not abrupt. The only worry is that the author wants to go out of the original story frame. After all, the introduction has also mentioned it, but so far it is deeper and harder to escape. If Jack's plot changes are made well, he can start a new story based on his own imagination. Of course, this will test the author's ability to coordinate the character's personality characteristics to create a new story after the original story line is cut; In conclusion, if you are still reading, give the author some encouragement, otherwise you will have no choice but to read it. It is not easy to find a book that suits your appetite.
The rating shouldn't be so low. It's really rare to have such a protagonist in this era where the average person is dominated by protagonists who make no sense and can only make fun of time travel. The regrets of the characters have basically been made up. Those who have played the game are very pleased to see this.
For similar books, I didn't expect that the quality of Tomato's book in the past two years is still very good. At least I can read it after clicking it. I didn't want to eat a lot and clicked on it. The main thing was that I had to jump out and couldn't read it. The story was reasonable and there were no surprises. It was a very good book. At least it was very comfortable to read. Mainly for the sake of the plot, it is a slightly forced design to keep Arthur and his gang together, but everything else is good, because the protagonist is so capable of carrying that he can be the boss himself. Trust is always the most rare thing, so we can understand weaknesses that are not weaknesses.
The writing is quite interesting. The protagonist is arrogant and has a poisonous tongue. He is not the perfect protagonist who cheats and slaps people in the face. From the perspective of others, he may think that the protagonist is an old nanny. I was also very depressed at first. Is this a gangster that must be controlled? But the protagonist is a flesh-and-blood person who struggles and hesitates. He has been wandering for many years before feeling the few kindnesses in the gang. He knows what is best for himself, but he also knows that he cannot let go of those people, so he chooses to actively fight for, protect, and hold his destiny in his own hands instead of just walking away. Fortunately, he was strong enough to drag everyone out of their destined fate.
The writing is quite good, and for someone like me who doesn't play games, it's quite relatable. In the early and middle stages, the protagonist always gives them the scoop, but is squeezed out by Dutch. I always feel a little aggrieved. I hope it won't stop updating.
It's refreshing and well written. I haven't played much of Red Dead Redemption, so I can say I don't understand it at all. I can easily get into the novel written by the author. The characters are well established and there is no "I don't know what you are talking about" feeling like in other fan novels. This is my first time popping rice since watching tomatoes. In the west, the protagonist and his family (the Van der Linde gang) survive, fight, and battle of wits and courage. I won't go into spoilers. It's good to watch. PS: The author is as productive as a sow at this stage. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
I really like this novel. Although I didn't have any foresight, it was very comfortable to read. It feels very immersive to that era. Forgive me for my low cultural level, I can't describe that feeling. Anyway, it just feels right. It looks much more interesting than the time-travel one.
1. The rhythm is very appropriate and the character description is in place (the protagonist becomes three-dimensional) 2. The plot description is not confusing and makes people feel comfortable (at least that's how I feel) 3. The writing is good, and the narrative style fits the background very well (very immersive, which makes me happy) Generally speaking, it is more than a masterpiece but not a masterpiece. It is worth reading. I hope the author will work hard [learned]
It's great and has great potential, the kind of potential I envy. The group portrait, character psychology and character creation can be understood by you. I suggest you try other themes. It will definitely become a hit. Red Dead Redemption is still a niche.
This Red Dead Redemption fanfic is cleverly conceived, has a logical narrative, and is written smoothly. It is one of the few treasures in the Wilderness Cousin fanfic. It is ranked first in the recommendation list with Dutch I Want to Be President.
The writing is very good, the author's description of the characters' personalities is relatively clear, and the story is also interesting hahaha. But I don't know how to rewrite their fate in the future. Now it seems that the world's understanding of gang missions is slowly changing.
I casually clicked in to take a look, and unexpectedly it looked pretty good. The male protagonist has brains and a good character. The original plot is also very interesting, and the timeline is before the original plot, which is generally reasonable. Keep looking forward to the follow-up [blowing kiss]
The plot is almost over, and I just remembered to give it a five-star review. It was actually quite frustrating to watch at first, and I kept thinking why Micah wasn't killed earlier? But I particularly liked the protagonist's way of living, so I kept watching. After watching it, I suddenly thought that the protagonist actually does not know from our God's perspective what kind of person Micah is and what his purpose is. He can only judge it through one incident after another, and it has changed the fate of many people while constantly hiding the truth. Now that I have seen the separation from the gang and roughly know the future development, it can be regarded as getting what I wanted, and it seems that the ending is very close. Overall, I think it is a good book. The protagonist seems contradictory, but in fact, he fits the character of a person who experienced a lot of hardships and life-and-death crises in that era, felt the warmth of the gang, but is also very rational. It was quite enjoyable to watch, and I hope everyone has a good ending (Micah dies).
Very good, very good, but I personally have doubts about the character of the David and Mike brothers. Is the ability of the two brothers written down too low? They are basically sharpshooters. The most important thing is Mike's melee ability. It's a bit ridiculous for Charles to defeat Mike. Except that these two brothers have personal problems with their abilities. In other respects, it is impeccable. Except for the Daqi book, this is the best Big Dart article I found on Tomato [][][]
One less star is because the borrowed worldview has no memory and does not meet the expectations of clicking into the book. Four stars is because the writing is good, but not exciting enough. It is difficult to read a book patiently in this era. Zhu Xianfang is probably tepid now.
If it was just about giving Fan Bang a good result, it would be just an ordinary story, but the author added more personal settings later and was writing the story behind Fan Bang. When would it be written? What will happen after the eldest lady escapes? The story now has left Red Dead Redemption and moved towards the uncontrollable unknown.
I heard that this book is written in AI, but as far as I am a 15-year-old bookworm, this book is at least better than 70% of the authors. Although it is not a sacred book, it is indeed a fine book. High scores are encouraged.
Very good novel. Arthur can now become a civilized person and start a family [face covering]. I mean, will there be some linkage with Sihai Brothers in the future? After all, I think my current development requires me to be a gangster.
I don't understand why this book has such a low rating. It is obviously the best Red Dead fan work I have seen on Yangpersimmon. Even if it does not have Red Dead elements, it is still a great American western novel.
It's okay. Most of the fanfics of Big Bodyguard give people the impression that they are bland, and this one is no exception. It's like Liang Baikai.
It's very interesting. It's an extremely rare book among the Big Cousin fanfics with excellent writing, reasonable logic, and extremely accurate character analysis. Come on.
One of the best fanfics of Big Cousin. Don't give up on this book because of its low rating. This second creation task is unfortunately absolutely rational. Worth a look
The writing is quite good. The low score is due to the fact that in the early stage it was too boring and forced to follow the plot, and it felt a bit fatal. However, in the later stage, it gradually got better and broke the plot, describing the roughness of the economy and people's livelihood in the United States after the Civil War.
There is a pretty good Cousin fanfic in Tomato, but the writing style is biased toward daily life. There are no particularly exciting highlights or impressive points. Some plots are not logical enough, and the transition of Valentine's plot is not smooth. But it is indeed worth watching. It satisfies my regrets as a gamer. It is the first time I give a gift to the author on Tomato. Come on, keep writing. The plot is smooth and there are no unacceptable poisonous points. The only flaw is that it does not write an impressive plot. Again, in my opinion, it is a novel that is biased towards daily life (daily life of a desperado). The latest volume is very well written, with tension, memorable points, and a logical plot. The author is really awesome, and I would like to remind you to update it by the way.
It can be seen that it is assisted by AI, but it is still a good fanfic if placed here.
In the early stages of this book, it was considered a fanfiction, but in the later stages, it really became eye-catching and created its own plot line.
The best cousin-like fanfic I've ever read