Yu Yin Reborn: A Guide to Becoming Empress

The overall content is good, the author is very thoughtful, and the story is particularly attractive, which is why I can continue reading. The author's ingenuity can be seen in many small details. But after the computer writes the big framework, it needs to be polished by the author. Many of the languages ​​​​are too artificial, and they are published without any modification at all. Although it can be read, it is very awkward. In addition, the corpus needs to be fed more, otherwise all the women in the palace will only have red gold hairpins, An Lingrong will only have lake blue clothes, Cao Qinmo will always be quiet and won't talk to others, and Nian Shilan will always wear rose red bras. The rest is nothing, because the AI ​​is very capable of talking nonsense. In order to enrich the content, Jeju tunes and other things are spouted without any connection to the context. I won't talk about the small details. For example, Meizhuang can pass a sign to the palace at will to see the heroine, or a third-grade official marries his legitimate daughter directly to a market doctor. These plots are not consistent with common sense. However, the author wrote several palace fight scenes very well and was not vulgar. I also particularly liked the way the heroine was portrayed, and he also handled the relationships between the characters well. Hope it gets better and better!

Damn it, do you know how good it is? The writing style is very good. It is restrained and unambiguous. The description is delicate and vivid, and it is very meaningful. Why are there so few comments? The writing is among my top three. After reading the whole story, emmm, I have nothing to say about the writing. Even the first part I read was so happy that I felt like I found gold in tomatoes, but the plot really doesn't correspond to the front and back. Author, there is a limit to how you can use technology. The AI feeling in the middle and the back is too strong, but I have the habit of reading books to the end. I kept complaining while reading at the end. Maybe the author wants to use it to cast comics. . .

I borrowed technology. I thought it was good when I first read it. After reading it for a while, I found that there were a lot of "It's not..., But...". It was really a lot, not because of the writing style, but because it was borrowing technology. . .

In the previous life, they were Concubine Guan, Concubine Xi, Concubine Hui, Concubine Huanbi, and Prince Fujin of Guojun. In this life, they are Princess Guojun, Mrs. Wen, and Princess Xi. It's good to watch, but the plot is a bit abrupt at times. It seems like everyone knows she is a reborn person, and no one even suspects her if she takes the initiative to mention it (referring to writing a letter)

The author's writing is very good, focusing mainly on the characters' demeanor, faces, movements, psychological activities and language, but with a strong visual sense. However, the plot, world view, settings, and logic are not consistent with mine. It's a slow-paced article, but I'm still too impatient 😂 I can't read it So I put it down after not reading a few chapters. Thank you to the author for introducing us to a different Huanbi.

It was a little hard to watch when I first opened it, but the more I watched, the better it became. The part about Concubine Hua knowing the truth about Huan Yixiang almost made me cry. How can I put it, I feel that this book saved the emotions in The Legend of Zhen Huan and it was very heart-warming.

Good,

The personality traits of each character are vividly described, and I was really fascinated by them.

I have only read a few chapters so far. The author's writing style is very delicate and the characters' inner thoughts are well explored. I feel a sour feeling inside when I read it. The author's scenery is beautiful in prose 😄😄

The writing style is as delicate as water, and there are no superfluous affixes added to express the "ancient meaning" in other novels I have read recently. It is the best among all the fanfictions I have read. The little girl is very happy to read it.