I Became an Immortal by Killing Raiders

The plot is okay for the time being, but the fighting scenes are either roughly summarized or relatively simple, with one sword sweep and then one kick, and then the step down. The more difficult ones are the one sword aura. Personally, I feel that the fighting scenes in Xiuxianwen are quite important, otherwise it will be easy to cause drama (personal opinion) After the evaluation, the plots are not that good. Maybe it's because Jiang Wenyu has been alive for too long. I changed it to three and a half stars.

The protagonist is very smart and careful, not a virgin, the pace is fast and not draggy, and the supporting characters are also quite three-dimensional. The only drawback is that the author cannot update a hundred chapters a day

The subject matter is novel and the setting is quite interesting. The author may be a novice and the writing skills are not strong enough to hold it up. The heroine is too anxious, but it is understandable. The fast traveler feels that it is quite good. It gives people a feeling that the system is not much more than this. I still support it. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Originally, I didn't want the heroine to have cp before, but now I'm a little bit annoyed with the heroine and Yue (please don't criticize me for my personal opinion, I will get a tenfold rebound if you criticize me) [Chigua] It seems that there is no particularly big surprise at the moment, it's the Raider Ye Zhenfan [smiles] Yes Mrs. Ye looks like that, she is unhappy, she wants to go in and give her a slap [smile] I hope the Ye family couple will find a heroine as soon as possible [rolls eyes] and the last sentence: The attacker slaps twice, the Lord God even slaps the dragon with eighteen palms [angry] [angry] [angry]

The heroine is very strong, but there are a lot of typos in many places. But it is still very interesting. I would have waited until it was finished before watching it. I hope the heroine won't keep putting pressure on cultivation. It's frustrating to watch.

Author, you must stick with it. This book is very interesting and innovative. I highly recommend everyone to read it. However, this opinion is my own and you need to evaluate it after reading it. But to be honest, this book is really interesting. I thought this book was just like that at first, so I read it with the mentality of giving it a try. I didn't expect that I stayed up for several hours while reading it. It was quite good after reading it. Author, you must persevere, you must (ლ(´ ❥ `ლ)!

The subject matter is still good, and the plot is quite attractive. After the heroine was reborn, she carefully dealt with the attackers and found companions. I hope the author will add more updates. I want to see how to trouble them after the world is stabilized with the Lord God.

The author's writing is very nice, and I am following the updates every day. This is a very new subject matter, one that I have never seen before. So I still like it, but rather than expecting the author to update a few more chapters every day, I hope the author can do it at his own pace and maintain the quality.

The subject matter is novel and has a certain degree of visibility. Thunder point🌩: There is a setting that says that the heroine can gain his (her) cultivation by killing the attacker. Whether this setting feels the same or not, it is all deliberately suppressed by the heroine and she just doesn't try to break through. The heroine was in the late stage of foundation building when she was 9 or 10 years old. At that time, she killed a raider who was in the golden elixir stage. At that time, she said that this spiritual power could directly allow her to break through to the late stage of the golden elixir. However, she deliberately suppressed the realm and did not break through the golden elixir until she was 15 years old.

I feel like this book will be popular in the future😱The writing pace is very good. The writing is also very mature

The subject matter is quite good, and there are no obvious traces of AI (polishing or generation). At least 80% of it is handwritten by the author, and it is very beautiful! Really recommended. It also allowed me to find gold.

Overall it's good, the plot is novel and the characters are okay. However, I hope that the author can reduce the language of "but this is all for another day" in the subsequent plot. This sentence will reduce the perception of this article to a certain extent.

The plot is very novel, but the author's pace is too fast. It could be slower.

It seems to be okay so far. There are no obvious shortcomings. It has been a long time since I finally got a novel about cultivating immortals that I can read.

It's very interesting. It's the best novel about cultivating immortals that I've ever read😘😘😘

This subject matter is really interesting and the heroine is really powerful [Adoration] [Adoration] This is my first time watching this subject matter.

The subject matter is very novel, the protagonist is not a virgin, and the counterattack is very powerful.

I've reached page 600. It's very interesting and the plot is very compact. It's not the kind of mindless and exciting novel.

Very good, a different kind of fairy tale.

Very pretty, the heroine is smart

It's a very novel book. It's good to read, but the author is not very good at writing fighting stories.

It's very well written, keep up the good work and don't give up, your hard work will pay off! ! !

Come on, author, the writing is so beautiful [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's a good watch. It's a genre I haven't seen before. The heroine is pretty good and the plot isn't boring. I don't know why the rating isn't high.

A very novel theme! The author will update soon!

The writing is awesome, Krass, come and read sis, it's almost equal [crying]

It feels okay, please give me a lot of support from the author (＾v＾)

Not bad, very interesting

Very nice, quite novel

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking