Hp+Gryffindor+change regret+warm daily life
Bai Hua traveled through time and came to the world of Harry Potter. While thinking about how to save his life, the golden finger arrived.
So as a senior Harry Potter fan, he wanted to take a hard look at the scenery, and also wanted to change the people and things that made him regretful.
Twin Weasleys: "You can trust Bai Hua when there is danger, but be careful of him when there is no danger."
Harry: "Senior Bai Hua is really reliable. It would be better if you don't trick me."
Hermione: "I really don't know how Senior Bai Hua's brain grew and why he can hold so many things? It would be better if he didn't bully my stupid boyfriend."
Ron: "I'm really, woo woo." Harry said to Ron whose mouth was covered: "Stop talking, he's looking over!"
Bai Hua turned to look at everyone and said grimly: "I see who is talking bad about me."
(The protagonist is set to be 2 years older than Harry Potter, and enters school two years earlier. The protagonist is more serious at the beginning, but gradually reveals his fun-loving nature.)
Reader comments
It looks good, the writing flow is a bit bland but there is a sense of crisis underneath.
The setting is novel and overall consistent with the original work, without making anyone feel out of place.
It looks good, the writing flow is a bit bland but there is a sense of crisis underneath.
The setting is novel and overall consistent with the original work, without making anyone feel out of place.
Five stars, I hope I can work harder