On a Rainy Night, I Picked Up a Walking Disaster

The Ring gives it an... A+! Your... Your work is simply a new life in the city. I am extremely shocked by this kind of work and feel that I am worthy of the name of the Ring. Your creation is undoubtedly a star in the city! Well, to put it simply, it is well written, especially Su Ye's sense of empathy. Keep up the good work and look forward to the follow-up ❤️

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The writing is okay, and the daily writing in the early days is pretty good, but I was a bit underwhelmed when I saw the imprisonment scene, and the prisoner felt a bit like a white-eyed wolf, and I personally feel that Liu Zhuangyu is more suitable for the female protagonist.

Ending at Chapter 139. It would have been better if either Liu or Lu were deleted. The party struggle made me feel sick to my stomach. The emotional changes of the characters were well written, and the relationship was gradually advanced. However, there was too much space for Liu to be the catalyst or bridge. Liu was well portrayed, but it was just the big hand of God's will. The deer is also well portrayed, with enough growth and progress, and the character undergoes transformation. On the contrary, the back part feels a bit like two high-end players attacking a "young master" boss. The heroine is not created enough, and the subsequent charm is too low, almost passive.

One of the few that suits my taste, the deer is yandere but not that crazy. This is very nice. I also hope that the protagonist can accept the love of the deer as soon as possible. The final ending must be a happy ending. Come on, come on

I still like Liu Zhuangyu better. I came here for Shen Lu in the early stage, but after seeing half of the second female lead, I am more attracted to her, because Shen Lu's actions are indeed revenge for the original protagonist. I thought she would slowly develop with the heroine and maintain it for a long time, but she chose the most extreme way. To say it at best is her own problem, to say it is terrible The point is that this is not love, this is just possession. However, this book is yandere-like, so there is no problem. She just wants someone she can catch at any time. She will care about what the other person thinks, but not much. The heroine has reached this point, which is also caused by her own personality. However, I still prefer the slow redemption of the heroine and Liu Zhuangyu.

I feel that this book is more everyday, not as depressing as other yandere novels, overall light, the writing style is more natural, not so stiff, and the author is very active. However, I haven't reached the 100th chapter yet, so I won't comment on it casually. I will add comments after the 100th chapter. Good-looking. Rare first-person version. Good-looking.

Yandere... Of course, it's okay, it's great, but don't cause any trouble But it's worth noting that you guys in front of the screen didn't stop this.

Those who don't code or not can't use it. As long as I bite the bullet and publish all the manuscripts I have gathered so far, I can rest even if there is no coding! Why does it feel like the heroine feels like an outsider?

I love watching it. The setting of the heroine is also very delicious. 👍