Use the Favored Concubine System to Become Yongzheng's Biological Son Through Time Travel

Very good idea. 1-The protagonist always has an unpleasant temperament of Gu Dong and Gu Xi. I hope there won't be too many scenes of him struggling [Blow kiss] 2-The protagonist cares too much about his brother. Every time he is mentioned, he writes about his mother. The author wants to write about the deep love between brothers and the love between parents and children, but he writes too hard. I hope I can write about him and his mother separately. [Blowing kiss] 3-The plot is too slow. I hope to show the protagonist slowly unraveling his heart knot and growing into an emperor, and at the same time add some highlights [blowing kiss] to the protagonist. Overall it's okay, these are just my thoughts [blowing kiss]

This feels great! One's own life is never as good as one's own. The article captures this feeling very well, it's really wonderful, and it completely hits the point of interest. Yinzhen's wonderful loving mother is so sentimental hahahaha

The writing is very delicate, and the overall story is about the relationship and emotional development between the child and his father, interspersed with historical development. While watching it, I oscillated between being very moved and very embarrassed, because the protagonist is an adult in body and a child in behavior, and being a child makes me moved. Once the topic changes, the psychological fragmentation of adults is very embarrassing. The adult soul behind it is a bit pretentious. Many chapters of the pretentiousness have not yet come to an end. Then there are other people's roles, Li Shi's, Fujin's, the same core and different plots are tossed back and forth. It is a bit boring, and the overall development is relatively slow. Every plot development is described in detail. The advantages are obvious. The writing style is exquisite, the emotional development is slow but smooth and logical, the group portraits are well described, the characters of each character in the article are reasonable, and the literary absurdity can be seen.

It's very well written. The father-son relationship between Yongzheng and the protagonist is mixed with some conspiracy. It's a thoroughly enjoyable story. It's very well written.

It's nice and nice to watch. There aren't a lot of embarrassing slaps in the face, just very warm scenes. I hope the author can come up with a parallel world sky scene comparison in the future, haha, it will be fun then [laughs]

It's quite interesting, but the protagonist has a lot of inner drama. Also, it's not quite the same as the title. It will take a long time to become emperor.

I really like the relationship between Hongli and Ama, I feel warm every time I watch it But I don't like my brother's mother very much. There are too many scenes, and she is swaying from side to side. It would be better to write it as the mastermind behind the scenes than the tangled one now (it's a small opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

The rating is low, but it is good-looking. Although there is no highlight, it is more in line with the actual situation and there is no too outrageous plot. There is a saying that is true. If two people who lack love collide, they will cherish each other more. I strongly recommend that a parallel world can be created... It will be more exciting.

Fuhui, grow up well and safely... I think this article is indeed a doting literature for the father and son. When my nephew had a fever that couldn't be brought down, I didn't dare to sleep because I was afraid. I couldn't sleep while hugging the hot little man for fear that the temperature would not drop down. I knew that the child was uncomfortable but there was no way to really feel the same as the fourth child in the article. But for other people in the article, I think this article is very sour. There are those who are unwilling to accept the death of their children, those who have children who are not as good as a "concubine", those who have their own Amma, who are confused and envious as they do not love their own brothers, and as a "mother" who are helpless when their children are plotted by others and almost lose their treasures. Overall, the article is very good, but if it is repeated many times in the article, for example, the psychological activities of Concubine Li are mentioned too much, which makes it boring. Then after the fourth child gave the fourth child a nickname, it seems that the fourth child was not called in the rest of the article🤔🤔? The plot is still a little delayed. I know it will take a long time to defeat Lao Ba and the others, but from the first time he was poisoned to the age of four, there are only a few sporadic things that have caused Lao Ba and the others to suffer🤔🤔Now it is tied and I am looking forward to the next development, so please update soon! ! !

The writing is quite good and the emotions are delicate, but it's a bit annoying to have the same thing repeated too many times in different chapters. It mainly writes about the relationship between father and son, the plot to seize the legitimate son, and the plot to control the family.

Very, very well written! I kept crying after watching Yong Zheng. The bond between father and son can no longer be separated by life or death. He is the beloved son of his parents and has far-reaching plans. Even if he is burdened with infamy, he has to clear the way for the protagonist. Even if there is controversy, the two hearts are still for each other. It is really well written! Come on

The plot concept is very good, the protagonists and his son are likable, but it's too convoluted, and there is a lot of AI. A simpler colloquial language may be more smooth.

The ex-wife is very warm, and the following is the classic plot trend of this type of article. I am quite helpless, but if I don't write like this, I can't write anything.

Oh my god [I'm about to cry], the interaction between the protagonist and Amma, Amma's love for the protagonist makes me cry [I'm about to cry], love is really embodied, the love is so full that it overflows, and the love is solidified [I'm about to cry]. I have never seen such delicate love between parents for their children. I cried when I saw it [crying]

I rarely give five-star reviews, but this one really moved me. Although it was a bit outrageous to have an ancient prince personally conceive and give birth to a child, I almost gave it two stars, but the writing in the back is very, very good, so good that people can understand why it is written like this.

I like this book very much. The main characters and the fourth brother are pretty good, but what attracts me are the bland and emotionless women. Their plainness is not that they are weak. On the contrary, you can touch a small part of them, which is a different kind of excitement.

I want to pee when I look at it. I love it so much. Give it a five-star support.

The writing is very good. The relationship between father and son is well written. There is nothing messy. I just don't understand why the rating is so low. The author should update it quickly. I hope the follow-up will not fall into the cliche (∩_∩)

The father-son relationship between the male protagonist and Yin Shen is really touching and well written. The father and son rush to each other and the relationship is delicate and sincere. Really highly recommended! Although the current rating is only over 6 points, I believe it will really grow and it is very beautiful. Like and recommend!

Nice looking, very special development, I like it.

This article is very well written. Everyone in it is full of life and flesh and blood, rather than just a supporting role or a setting. The relationship between the protagonists is also very warm, and the writing is very good. I haven't read such detailed writing in a long time.

I stayed up late to see it now, and I cried when I read it [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] The author is so good at writing about separation [cry] [cry] [cry] Just reading the text makes me feel uncomfortable, and I can't help but want to cry

I would like to rate the first world. The writing in the first world is so comfortable. The long-lasting relationship between father and son has great stamina. It feels like they really existed. Unfortunately, the subsequent worlds are not about the relationship between biological father and son, so I abandoned it.

They are so beautiful. I like Hongli and Yinzhen so much. Sure enough, how can the ones born by one's own children be compared to those who were born by one's own children?

Full marks, worth watching, very warm I saw something was wrong in the back, some dialogues and paragraphs would be repeated, and then the setting of the male protagonist, although he is a child, his character is still a doting concubine. He only likes the fourth child and does not like other people, especially women.

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍There are too few updates to watch.

I would like to ask how many words the author plans to write and whether the protagonist will have a partner.

Happiness is a little moist and sour The tone of the whole story is sentimental. To be honest, it's not what I imagined. But as a novel, it's boring if you can guess the plot.

It's quite warm. Let's grow up quickly.

The relationship between father and son was great in the early stage, but I couldn't stand it when they got married. It was still great in the early stage, but I came here for the family relationship.