I'm Just a Passerby, but I'm Correcting the Main Line

So far, it's good - it's delicious. [Send heart] [Send heart] But there is still a little problem that needs attention. I always feel that there are shortcomings, well, it is the description of shortcomings, other people's reactions when Xiao Shen changed the node, description of battle damage, etc. Others have the same idea. That time in the library was: change node - discovered - injured - and then It's time to go to sleep, and I've gone over it in one stroke. In fact, this is a place where I can write more, the reaction to subsequent changes, battle damage, etc., And I can also lay out some foreshadowing (oh, I can also make up the word count [get it] [get it]). This is a must for this type of novel, otherwise the plot will feel a bit flat, after all, it is a team comic novel. You can take a brief look at it, and then you will be so inspired that I will update it five times a day (bushi) [please update more] [full] [full]

Alas, I'm halfway through the book. Although I already knew that the protagonist's role was less, I didn't expect it to be so small. After reading more than sixty chapters, it's still like scraps. The protagonist's name appears only a handful of times in each chapter. If you focus on the protagonist's name, you'll be turning the pages. I understand that the author wanted to present more of this comic story, but there was too little writing and ink used to portray the protagonist, which made it a bit tiring to read. And the strange thing is that the character settings in it are actually quite classic, and a lot of words are spent in the article describing their interactions, work, etc., But it just feels like plain water, bland. Maybe there are too many people writing about it, and the ones given are spread out. At least I haven't found a character I really like as of now. However, the advantages are also obvious. The author's writing style is still good, and the setting and plot control are good. Things can also be explained more clearly, and the main line can be advanced more smoothly. The most important thing is that you can see the author's sense of responsibility and creator's love for the characters and the world he wrote. The author is really responsible for his own works and is willing to devote his sincerity to the works. He does not create with the attitude of an assembly line commodity of pre-made dishes. I feel that this is the best place to look and feel.

Such an interesting book, I like it very much... World Consciousness, you are so well-behaved and cute, and Xiao Zhi, you are so cute just like this! I really like Jiang Weiran. Can you and Xiao Zhi talk more about cross talk? I'd love to hear it! The interaction between the threesome is also very interesting! Now with Xiaozhao's six-member team, it's even more amazing! Sickly good, sickly delicious! The dull yet noisy college life is what I like the most...

I tied it all at once. It's pretty good. Overall, the progress is slow. It's not as intense as other similar books with many big events. It's relatively bland. It feels like it consists of many small daily routines. The progress and rhythm are acceptable in my opinion. But the characterization of the characters is not particularly strong. I hope some small details can be added or how each character reacts after experiencing a certain event. I feel that this will be better. The overall feeling to me is very light, like drinking a bowl of plain water with a bit of flavor, but this white water is quite delicious. Overall, apart from being happy for the protagonist's little things, there are no particularly big emotional fluctuations for me. But I can give five stars. First, it is a habit of mine. I basically give five stars to all books. Second, the writing is indeed relatively good, but it is only more than 100 points. I hope the author can continue to improve and write more in the future, which will be more attractive and impactful. I wish my writing will get better and better in the future

This is a group portrait article. It is lively, has a lot of joy, and there are also places that can be explored, making readers want to continue reading. Just like the protagonist's name, Guan Zhi, he also has special powers. He is a spectator, like the wind. He has a low sense of presence and speaks very little, but his existence will always be remembered. Because of the existence of the protagonist, the protagonist group is lively but does not feel noisy, does not disturb the eyes, and does not make the mood impetuous. Xiao Shen is very stable, making readers feel stable and peaceful, which is quite good. Some of the plots are quite gripping. We are readers. Don't look outside the box. Let us have a God's perspective. Hey, it's so gripping. Very nice, looking forward to further development

The subject matter is so new, and everyone in the main cast has a shot. The characters are very rich in personality! ! I want to laugh when I think of Pei Zhixu's yellow hair (꒪⌓꒪) Shen Guanzhi is so awesome and smart! Jiang Weiran and Shen Guanzhi are so cute and world-conscious. So cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute...(˘ ³˘)♥٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥

. It looks good. I haven't written a long review, but Xiao Zhi is really good. The wind type is super handsome. 𖥦 ˂ I particularly like the wind type. Xiao Zhi has a warm pomelo feel. ₍♡♡₎Damn it, it's been so long and it's still so good ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧ (It's so good...) Don't be shy, stay awake... As for the plot, I didn't watch much (not enough, please give me feedback). It's not forced to modify the main plot. This is great. Two of you, World Consciousness and Xiao Zhi, are very cute (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ). Xiao Zhi's dual abilities of wind and probability are very cool. The combination of this is so cool. Xiao Zhi, Xiao Zhi, we like you! Academy, Guixu, there are many characters, spread out the package and look good,,, a big orange plot point and then a forum is really pleasant, although I am very fond of beautiful women, but I have to be good. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ (Bu'shi has a flag feel at the beginning),,,,, and I feel very alienated from the original protagonist and the rest of the group. There is a paragraph saying that letting people follow comics on forums with high expectations and disappointments will hurt themselves. This point is extremely clever... "A small knife makes you happy, but a big knife hurts your body." Come on, author /Let me show you a kaomoji: ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ♡ ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ / If you like watching Gao Zhi's mysterious person, feel free to enter (๑◕τ￩๑)b

Recommendation + demining 1. The writing style is like warm water, but not boring. The daily writing is very interesting, and the major plots are quite passionate. 2. The protagonist is completely cold-faced and cute, a calm person, reliable and calm, smart and gentle, and dares to break the rules and resist fate. There are many cool points in the big event (monthly exam) 3. The world consciousness is completely affirmed by the protagonist, especially gentle! It will also filter out bad barrages, making the overall atmosphere of the barrages more friendly. 4. The sense of group portraits is outstanding, the protagonists and other supporting characters are vividly and three-dimensionally created, the world view is very complete, and the overall narrative is relatively grand. One thing that needs to be noted is that there are many plots that transition to daily slapstick, which is indeed very slow, and the protagonist's presence is not very high in the early stage (before chapter 70), because the protagonist does not talk much and spends most of the time "observing" But it got a lot better later on, especially the second monthly exam. I felt so happy going there! I still want to show my holiness before a good person😋 I feel like the more I write, the better I get. I'm really looking forward to the future. It shouldn't be that easy to change nodes to save others. In fact, I kind of want to suffer the consequences of the battle. (Also, I often write down the content of the class. The settings are very detailed, but it can be a bit boring. I think you can just take a look at these things.)

Polite and gentle world consciousness, always caring about the protagonist The protagonist Shen Guanzhi is calm, mysterious, and very reliable. Every time I see the fluctuation of the wind, I feel a sense of security that "He is coming." A person who doesn't talk much is also infected in the lively and warm protagonist group. It is super warm. I admire his character very much. It matches well with his wind power. It can be a light breeze or a fierce strong wind, plain and powerful. The author writes very well, the characters are well-developed, the plot is not procrastinating, and some of the plots are interesting and lively. It feels like you will fall into it again after reading it for a few days.

It's good-looking. Although the world view may have a knife, it gives me a feeling of being smooth and smooth. What I really like about the character of the protagonist is that he doesn't care even if the sky is falling. The characters are also very distinct and basically have roles. When divided equally, the role of the protagonist is relatively small. However, the author's writing style is quite good, and it can be seen that he put a lot of effort into writing. Come on, it's just that the update is slow [sending heartfelt wishes]

I have read a lot of manga about teenagers with supernatural powers on campus, and I really like Xiao Shen, who is gentle and gentle, trying to respond to everyone's expectations, striving for a better future, and still going for it even though he knows the chances are slim. Everyone is very cute; the author has always been a progressive and wants to write interesting stories and thought-provoking stories; the campus is also designed to be very interesting and logical, taking into account the background of supernatural powers; I also hope that the author can also build this grand worldview with supernatural powers and present it to everyone, and surprise everyone. (I don't know if the entire development of the story takes place in school. That would be a pity, but it's pretty good now)

It's very beautiful, and it makes me miss the feeling of a book (it can be deleted if it touches a thunder). It has a feeling of quiet flowers and moonlight, but under the peace, there are "truths that can't be let go" one after another. I think everything is destined, and I hope they will all be happy [shy][shy][shy]

Ouch, boss, you must continue to update, don't stop updating. It is best to update 100,000 words a day, so that I can feast my eyes on it. This is very interesting, and the others are different, very novel [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's quite good-looking, unlike other hot-blooded shows where fighting happens almost all the time. The words in this book are rather bland, very life-like, and very real. It's so miserable to learn supernatural powers and focus on high school studies without mentioning anything else. The world restart routine is indeed more popular, but have you ever seen other comics realize that this is a fake world? It seems that everyone is smart except Pei Let me make a suggestion to the author, can Xiao Shen's role be increased? He has very little sense of presence and is a bit transparent, while Pei has a lot of roles. Is it a novel with Pei as the protagonist or Shen that I am reading?

When a man comes to check his menstruation, a woman becomes nervous. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of her mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It is so beautiful. It is God and my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes me happy. My world has meaning. I ran, I jumped, and I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

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Very beautiful! Xiao Zhi, um... I hope he changes the plot, but I'm worried about his sacrifice. It's a bit painful. I hope there won't be any knives in the back. Everyone should be well! Have a good slapstick life! Teachers should also be good! Be well to everyone! This book is mainly slow-paced. Well, it feels very good-looking. Remember to mark some foreshadowings or other things, otherwise you will forget them after reading them. I always feel that Xiao Zhi's past is a big thing, and it is restarted 9 times. The teacher mentioned it before, If you experience the same ending 9 times, you will eventually doubt the world, and their abilities also come from their understanding of the world, as well as that complicated shadow and that Xue**, well... And that box and that wall. I just hope everyone is alive and well! It must be good, it must be good! They must be well. They feel that their world is miserable. I hope happiness will come to them. The six little ones must be well! Teachers must also be good! Everyone must be well! We also need to have a good sense of the world! ! ! If there is a knife behind me, please don't knife me too harshly, author! Ask for more updates, more updates, more updates! ! ! Remember to fill in the foreshadowing before! Also remember to have a good rest, I hope the author will do well too!

Overall, it is a very interesting book and highly recommended. The charm of group portraits is everywhere! The six little ones each have their own character traits, oh ho ho, I always like the characters of the six little ones in this book. The plot content is relatively mild and bland without many heavy things, but I didn't feel bored while reading it (I haven't finished the chapter I'm reading yet and there are not many heavy things). The campus life is very warm. Watching the six little ones fight and laugh, this is the bond between them! The author's writing style is very good, and the sentences are smooth. There are not many repeated words in a paragraph. The characters are also described in three-dimensional and vivid ways. By the way, the world consciousness is also very gentle. When I read the first chapter of the world consciousness and asked Xiao Zhi for help, Xiao Zhi asked "What if I don't help?" Shi Shi replied "It doesn't matter, it's okay not to help" (this should be the meaning of the dialogue in the article) ahhhhh! It was really gentle, and finally Xiaozhi agreed. Xiaozhi is also a kind-hearted baby! [Shy][shy][shy] I'm really looking forward to the following plot. Author, don't be tired or idle and work hard! (Author, let's play a game. As soon as I open my eyes, a hundred chapters suddenly appear [shy][shy])

So pretty! I just like a calm, smart and reliable protagonist who seems to be outside the crowd, with a slight sense of alienation! Not to be at the front or the focus of the crowd, but to stay outside the crowd and lend a hand when needed most [laughs] I hope it can be done faster [send heartfelt] tied in one night [cover face]

I'll give it a four overall rating. Part of the leave processing is a bit unpleasant. For example, when the team went on a mission for the first time, the awakened people deliberately tested them, and deducted the team's points because they failed to find the mission target and mistakenly entered the primary area where they shouldn't be... 6 Oh, you interfered with the detector, and you also said that there was something wrong with the team.

It's good-looking, the main characters all have distinct personalities, and Xiao Shen has a cold face and a cute face. I have a vague feeling that there is an aniseed ingredient hidden in the later part of the story (obviously Bushi), please update [already planted]

Look! ! ! So far, I have read 89 chapters (already tied) Although the rating is not very high since it just came out, I personally feel that the setting is quite novel (personally) [Chigua] The male protagonist has no cp At present, in my opinion, the plot is quite reasonable, and a lot of foreshadowing has been laid.୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨ Big boost, author [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The ratings will slowly increase (๑╹ヮ╹๑)

I originally planned to read it and read it for a while, but due to the recent book shortage, I came back and read it hhhhh. It turns out that the latest chapters have traces of AI polishing. I have seen a lot of Tomato novels. The first ones were very good, but later they started to be polished or ghostwritten by AI. Most of them were discarded. A small or trace amount is now ignored. But when I encounter a work that I really like, I still feel sad and don't want to continue reading it because I want it to stay in the memory of the best moment, although there are also bad memories.

I have been following this omnidirectional novel for a while, and I was deeply moved after reading it. I really like the vivid characters created by the author. Each one has his own personality and growth trajectory. The group portraits are particularly brilliant, and the characters do not feel like they are being used as tools. The rhythm of the story is appropriate and the plot is carefully laid out. Many plots made me very engaged and I could feel the sincerity hidden in the text. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of thought on conceiving the plot and polishing the characters. When reading, I am often moved by the choices of the characters in the story, and follow them to experience adventure and growth. Thank you very much, wife, for bringing such a wonderful story. Every update is a surprise. Creation is a hard job, and I hope the author will not be under too much pressure and take care of himself. I will keep following the updates and look forward to more exciting plots and the characters' subsequent stories. Come on!

Baby, you are sincere, brave and kind, and I know your sensitivity and fragility. You are cute and have a good personality. Sensitivity is a gift. It is never a shortcoming, but a unique inner strength. You are a good baby, the most worthy and best baby in the world. It's okay. Now that you have met me, you no longer have to pretend to be strong by yourself. By the way, do you still have it in your draft box? [Laugh]

It's okay, just plain. However, compared to most of this type of novel, it seems too bland, and the plot progresses relatively slowly. It is suitable for passing the time when you are bored, and overall it is more daily life.

Good looking Especially Liangyi - "warmth" (just like that girl, it's not that she won't wake up, but she doesn't know how to face reality) Shen - Supervision ()——Destruction, protection very nice

It's very comfortable to read😌. There may be a catch here for others, that is, the protagonist has very few scenes in the early stage. Personally, I think this is okay. The characters are well created, and I really like the plot of Ergyi City [shy]

I like the general content, but I think more scenes could be given to Xiao Shen. I feel that Xiao Shen appears too little. Hmm... I look forward to the author updating it as soon as possible [Love] [Love]

Good looking Nirvana |ω), each character has a very distinct personality, and the interactions are quite interesting😙, I like it!ヾ(≧▽≦*)O (I just feel that Xiao Zhi's role is not too much, I hope there will be more in the future🥺)