Hogwarts Love Story but Monthly Hex

It's a pretty good book. Maybe it's because I haven't read much of the Cursed Child fanfic. At least it's very novel in terms of subject matter. As long as there are no problems, this book feels like it can still get good results. Even if I know more people during the enrollment period and have more names, readers who don't read many foreign books may misremember the characters, etc. Chang likes Delphi. Currently, I say there are multiple female protagonists. In fact, I feel that Delphi is a bit like Rose, and it feels more like a friend stage (it feels like just two female protagonists are good. After all, most of the female characters at present are related to each other. Too many female protagonists feel very strange. Two female protagonists feel very good, and the author should write it easily)

Well, quite a delicious Harry Potter fanfic, and the timeline is after Harry Potter has elbowed Voldemort. So it tastes quite fresh, and it's considered a daily item? (Currently) the protagonist's golden finger performance is quite weak, but it's pretty good and can only be regarded as an assistant to see how it performs in the later stages. The emotions are well written and delicious *^O^*, but you have to remember the names of the people, otherwise the names behind them may confuse you.

(This book review contains no major spoilers, so feel free to read it❤️) A very good novel. As a Harry Potter fan, the author did not choose to write about the Dumbledore generation, the parent generation (Snape's era) or the child generation (the original timeline). These are more popular in Harry Potter fan fiction and are easier to write timelines. Instead, a stage play "Harry Potter and the Cursed Child" was chosen as the timeline that the public did not agree with, was not very popular, and the plot was not complete enough. This is so brave ᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ At least it makes me write a novel. I don't dare to choose this timeline. Let's first talk about the benefits of choosing this timeline as a place to write fan fiction. You can expand the settings at will. There are a lot of characters' psychology, growth, personality, and experiences. It's not even reflected in the Cursed Child stage play. For example, the life of Bill and Fleur after their marriage and their offspring, the school life of Albus Severus Potter (the protagonist of Cursed Child, but the original stage play of Cursed Child didn't even portray his character well. Maybe it was because of the limitations of the stage play), and what Harry did as the Head of Department. These can be written on and are completely blank. If you don't want to write a fixed assembly-line fanfic (the protagonist travels through time, has a golden finger, learns magic, deals with regrets, and deals with Voldemort. Oops, at most one more person will explore how he got here and then make dumplings.) But to write a real fanfic, a fanfic that supplements the original setting, expands the content of the original work, and supplements the character. Create new characters and let the original characters "move" instead. Harry Potter will always be just the savior who bears the fate, and Hermione Granger will always be the know-it-all fanfic. That is an insult to the wizarding world. The people who write these things are just writing in an original work without tragedy. If you want to write vivid fan fiction, then this timeline is simply perfect. Because the original characters in this world line are difficult to portray perfectly due to the stage play, it is really good to use the novel form to depict the characters on this basis. If it's broken, it won't be enough.

It's a very novel Harry fanfic. The characters are all very detailed. Although there are many characters and the names are difficult to recognize, they all have their own characteristics. The two female protagonists are also very good among the fanfics I have read. They are well written and there are no flaws in the plot. Since this is a rare timeline, it is very interesting to read. There is no feeling of sameness. It's not bad.

I'm addicted to watching it. It's very good. It's so good. I hope there will be more. I didn't want to read it when I saw the synopsis that it had two heroines. I didn't expect to stop after watching it. And I saw that the latest one is already with Delphi and it becomes a single heroine. It's so perfect [Like] [Like] [Like] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore]

Since the beginning of the water disaster, I have made some changes to make Hope less miserable, and then it will return to daily life. If there is anything unreasonable, you can just tell me directly, and I can change it [currently working on the draft] [currently working on the draft]. July 134th. In the past two days, I have been working hard to revise from Chapter 79 onwards. If I see any logical errors, it may be that I have not changed them yet. The problem of reducing the intelligence of the cat chapter will also be solved, and the plot of Delphi will also be added. I am sorry to disappoint everyone. Including word order issues and dull dialogues, we will revise them as appropriate. The second grade only appears and is recalled in the extras. This year is filled in everyone's memories because it is so beautiful. The identity of Delphi will be exposed in the third grade, and then there will be the plot of betraying the ninja and imprisoning Hope. The fourth grade will be the plot of the cursed child. Of course, it will not be the original plot. I will modify it as appropriate.

Well, that's good. The protagonist entered Hogwarts more than 10 years after Voldemort's death. I quite liked the interaction with Voldemort's daughter. The plot with Rose was a bit deliberate, as if they were forcing these two people to be tied up. It was a bit stiff, and the plot progressed slowly. The Delfeit portrayed earlier is now the same as an NPC.

Overall, it's good. When I saw Nine Lives, I was almost exhausted and the emotions were too slow. After Nine Lives, I didn't see any emotion in Rose. And Delphi's emotions were no longer fast. Compared with her, Rose was just standing still. The daily writing was pretty good. It was a bit slow for me, but it should be harmless. I like to watch fast-paced movies, and the Void thing is too abrupt. The author can insert it without any foreshadowing. The author can optimize and optimize the word order.

Well, I rarely read Sun Daishi's books, of course not because I don't like them, it's just that there are too few. To be honest, this book is very well written and the author is very rigorous. I personally like the plot. The two heroines are currently portrayed well, but I personally still prefer Rose. Hehe, the strength of the protagonist is only an ordinary genius wizard. At least so far, the hangup is not too big. As long as the later stage is maintained and the plot does not collapse, I will keep reading. Second review: I rarely follow up on reading, but this book so far is worth reading. Wow.

The writing is quite good, it has great potential, and the characters are well drawn. It is a bit different from other HP fanfics. It is relatively novel, which is a big advantage. The details are well drawn, and the plot advances slowly. He is a growing protagonist. It's good to take a look at it and give it some encouragement.

This is my first time watching a Cursed Child fanfic. In terms of plot alone, it is considered to be in the upper category. And the Goldfinger Hex given to me is not particularly powerful. For me who has read too many novels like that, it is a change of taste. As for the emotional line, the rhythm is okay. Delphi can see it in the early stage. As for Rose, there is a foreshadowing after the chapter of nine lives. Overall, it is indeed okay. There are also some shortcomings, that is, sometimes the words of the characters are a bit messy. It is not clear whether it is due to layout or what. Sometimes it is a bit unclear who is speaking. It would be better if this aspect could be made clearer. There are no other major shortcomings, so it can still be read. I also hope that you will give this book a chance. If you see a chapter that you are not good at, please be patient and read two more chapters before making a decision [Salute]

It's a good HP article, and it's written about almost no Cursed Child fan fiction.

How should I put it? I read the Nine Lives chapter in one go, which the author said was not good for viewing. Before this chapter, I gave it full marks [laughs]. It is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever read. It is full of innovation and not cliché. The writing style is a bit green, but you can tell that the author is very careful in writing. I praise the author. Don't stop getting better, okay?

The author's writing rhythm is very comfortable. The story is told very coherently. It looks good, and the story selection is relatively novel. I chose to continue the story after the original Harry Potter book. I haven't seen a book with such comfortable writing and rhythm for a long time. Very cool

The themes are very new, mainly about the generation after Hex and Harry, which is good. Now that cats have nine lives, Goldfinger has a sense of existence. However, the big problem is serious reading and typos. Regarding reading, for example, whether Rose was stopped by two Weasleys when she was diving, how many roommates Rose has, and many others. The inconsistent statements give me the feeling that the author will stop updating after finishing his thoughts.

It's good to read. Finding a good-looking novel in the book shortage is as enjoyable as reading a male gun in the third stage.

A very good and creative HP fanfic. There are very few novels written with Sun Yi as the heroine and content. The character of the heroine Delphi is very lovable, from a silly and lonely little girl at the beginning to a beautiful and strong heroine later on. People can't help but fall in love with her. But there are a little bit of emotional scenes between them, and I don't know how they ended up together. All I can say is that the author should work hard.

It's pretty good-looking and quite plentiful. However, I don't understand much about Nine Lives (I don't like it personally, mainly because I feel that the style changes too much from the previous part), but the emotional expression itself is still good (a style that I personally don't like) (I wonder how long it will take for Nine Lives to end). Very recommended Come on, author, don't give up. In fact, although I don't like the nine lives part, I can just skip and read a little bit of each chapter. Everything else looks good

The Nine Lives Chapter is really ugly, but I really like the subject matter. I hope the follow-up can be more exciting.

I give you five stars. The author must not stop updating😭😭😭

It looks good, but you definitely don't want to be a eunuch.

It's very interesting. I hope I can finish it smoothly. I don't want eunuchs. Good luck, author.

The plot has a bit of a dragging rhythm, which sometimes doesn't match the author's brainwaves. But I really like this kind of story that doesn't follow the main line and tells the past or future generations. Please give it a lot of credit, the author, and I hope I can finish a wonderful story.

It's very novel, the characters are well drawn, and it's very logical. However, the line about the protagonist is a bit diluted, and it feels like a two-line narrative (Albus and Holt). It's a bit confusing when you first read it, but it gets much better after reading it.

Nine lives are finally over Make up a point

Looking forward to Delphi's yandere [eating melon] [eating melon]

It would be nice if Delphi had more scenes.

This book is written from a Muggle perspective. After the Second Magical War, the protagonist joins the magical world as a Muggle (and the protagonist does not know the plot after the second war, and complained that he traveled too late [face covering]). The plot currently revolves around daily life and solving the mystery of his own time travel. In terms of relationships, there are currently two female protagonists (and even if he dies in the form of a cat, he should also be able to see Night Riding). Hurry up! ! ! !

It looks good. The writing style is a bit like the original. When will the author's chapter on Nine Lives be revised? @ Jean Valjean

This is the first time I have read a HP book from my childhood, and I feel it is super innovative [Thoughts]