Mr. Shen Is Also Training the Dog Today

There can be less dialogue between the system and the protagonist, and there is no need to explain too much about the reasons why the protagonist does certain actions. Seen this way, it may be a bit redundant, or it may lack the appeal to readers. If it is all spread out, it will make you feel uninterested and disturb the smoothness of reading. After all, readers may or personally, what I want to see more is the interaction between the protagonists. The plot and characterization could be written more naturally, but currently it gives people a somewhat deliberately concave image. But generally speaking, it is considered to be on my XP. It is quite novel and well written. I hope I can continue to write.

The first world is particularly strong. The feelings are gradually increasing in a steady stream. It does not rise to the level of ten or twenty in one go. Shen Bao is the kind of guide throughout the whole process. ! It's like correcting a frizzy and awkward puppy. He's patient and gentle throughout the whole process. It's expensive, but it's also your kind of cat!. But the second world was so fast. I felt that the emotional line was so anxious. After watching the three worlds, I felt that there was no cold and gentle guidance like Shen Bao in the first world. . Has the way of writing the boss been changed, or is the subsequent progress different from the first world? But the boss's writing is still very delicate, suitable for those who like to wear fast and fast. ! I believe the boss can start scoring as soon as possible. !¯꒳¯

❤️❤️❤️It's very beautiful. I've just read the first world. It's very good. I actually hate chronicles, but I tried reading the first world. It's very good. I hope more people can read this book [laughs]

The first world is very beautiful, well written, ordinary life, I feel very happy [crying] The second world is not so good, I feel the emotional line is a bit inexplicable, I suddenly fell in love [thinking] no emotional changes The first world is the true god Bai Yueguang. The rhythm in the future feels a bit fast, and it doesn't feel like the first world [Thoughts]

😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋 The first world was so exciting to me, it was the author. Did you know that there was a writer who published 500 chapters in one day and then won 5 million and became rich? Hey, I said this sentence without meaning. If you want to update Chapter 500 in anger, then I will accept it 😋😋😋😋 Oh my, it's not interesting, it's not interesting

It's really good to read. It's the first time I feel the delicate emotional lines written in Tomato. Each unit gives people a sense of solidity as if they are living a long and steady life. I just feel that each unit is short, but it's just enough. I hope there will be more extras [love]

I like this kind of fishing beauty, the ambiguous pull is very exciting, but the ending is a little rushed, the author should work hard to write, it must be he, I can't stand be, so I didn't watch the first world [I almost cried]

What can I say? I recommend everyone to read the first plane. It feels really comfortable. The writing is good and the emotions are delicate. Moreover, I originally liked carnivorous nature. The first world of this book has no specific description, but I felt a special feeling of satisfaction and happiness in my heart when I read it. Hmm... As for the subsequent planes, I have also read it, but it is not as beautiful and delicate as the first world. The plot is too fast. I always feel that it has reached the end just after it started.

Why is there no traffic when writing something so niubi? I'll go, the writing is a second faster, there is no nonsense, it's very comfortable to read,,, I also suggest to reduce the long dialogue with the system, some things don't need to be explained too clearly, it will make the system look like an artificial retard [face covering]

It's so beautiful. I've only watched the first plane now. The feeling of slow and steady water is so annoying to me.

I love it so much🥰I feel warm after reading it. Shen Huai's character is very full. This man looks like a butterfly, like a kitten, like iced lemon tea after exercise, like a hot pot at minus 30 degrees. How can it be so perfect? ​​O(^▽^)o After seeing it, I passionately created a book cover. If the teacher is willing, you can reply me with an ID of any platform that can send you pictures (novice artists usually do it T^T)

It's good to read. I like it very much. It's better than many fast-travel novels I've read! ! ! I've always liked it, and it's not like falling in love out of nowhere! I just hope the author writes more and enjoys reading it! I hope to write a CEO article, a brotherly article, or a hostile one! ! !

The first world is very delicate, with long flowing water, very beautiful, Xiao Shen is very good at fishing! Cheng Zheng is simply like Bai Yueguang! I just didn't see Cheng Zheng eating meat, which was a pity, and the ending was too hasty. The second world feels... Baffling? There is no feeling in the first world...

Of these small worlds, except for the second one, which I didn't watch, the others are all good. Each world is quite beautiful, but it ends so quickly. The emotional line between the protagonists is a bit too fast.

I don't give it five stars because after watching the first world, I left the world after completing the tasks. And I didn't see their che [grievance] in the extra episode. Anyway, it was okay. The emotional scenes were quite delicate. The new world hooks me [Thinking]

It's super beautiful and has a strong sense of immersion (｡ӧ◡ӧ｡) [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] The picture is stronger [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen]

Very beautiful! Please update!

I got an old Feng Feng, it's so sweet The second world feels a bit faster

It's great to watch. It's very exciting to watch. Although I felt that the analysis part was a bit too much at first, I still like this subject matter. I will feel much better after reading it.

The first world is particularly good, it's a blast

Indeed, the first one is the most beautiful in the world, it is more delicate.

It's very beautiful, especially the wizard chapter. It's rare to see someone who maintains a half-human, half-animal form. I really like it [Adoration][Adoration] In this chapter of the Witch Doctor, can the trickle of water be a little longer [I'm about to cry] I like it so much. The pace can be less fast [I'm about to cry] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

The writing is okay, but I can't tell whether Shen is tempted or not. He is a relatively indifferent person [eating melon]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's a little weird, but it's pretty.

It's really beautiful!

Very nice, highly recommended

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Nice! The pace is quite fast

Ram, ram within ram! Good-looking [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]