[Management + Relaxation + Entries + Laoliu Making Trouble + Sky Competition]
Travel through the ninja world and intercept the third generation of Hokage at the beginning.
The main system of the strongest force is activated, and the treasure chest is opened by developing the force.
Polar Star Hitomi: Let's watch the meteor shower together.
Family Planning: The whole village is filled with the aroma of milk.
Gift of Destiny: Unlock an empowering entry every 20% of progress.
Demon King's Double Guards, Emperor's Engine, Wen Tao and Martial Arts, Xuanwu Dharma Protector, Peace Elite, Interest-free Loan, Dizziness Is Normal, The Sect Leader Has Arrive...
The four-star power treasure chest, Tianmu Competition enters the soul in one shot.
Past, present and future, the three worlds meet at the top.
Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara are twin stars.
Sarutobi Hiruzen, you deserve to die!
Tsunade and Tsunade compete for hegemony among the gambling gods of the century.
The strongest partners, start the peak competition of the ninja world.
Uchiha Hall of Fame Super Star Show...
Next up is the tallest mountain in the parallel world, the longest river, the master of taming Uchiha, the leader of the three dark giants, the dream of thousands of kunoichi, the third generation Hokage - Dongyang!
Reader comments
A very awesome Naruto fanfic, with the modern thinking of modern people traveling through the ancient world without being pedantic.
When I saw Chapter 27, I wanted to give it a good review. The reason is that this chapter describes Naruto's biggest scam and the reason behind Tsunade's sure loss in every bet. It also gives an explanation that the author thinks is reasonable and that I think is reasonable.
This allows me to see that the author is really seriously interpreting the original work with modern thinking and adding his own thinking to change that world.
I have always felt that there are three levels of fan fiction, and I have mentioned it before in other novel book reviews.
The lowest level is to follow the original plot and become the nanny of the protagonist. This is the most common in early infinite horror fan fiction. Then there are various novice authors who can only follow the original plot when their writing skills are not enough and dare not change the plot. They are afraid that if they change the plot, they will not be able to know the future direction and predict the future.
Medium is a book that changes the direction of the plot and writes the author's own story according to the author's understanding instead of being a nanny for the original protagonist. Negative examples are those who time travel to Naruto/Sasuke and then follow the original plot. There are many positive examples, such as darkening Naruto and darkening Sasuke.
The best way is to only borrow the story background and world view of the original work, and write a brand new story of your own, from a perspective that the original work ignores or is not so mainstream. For example, some Naruto fan fiction will write a brand new story of the protagonist in the Kingdom of Earth/The Kingdom of Thunder. The Kingdom of Water/The Kingdom of Wind because the presence in the original main story is too strong, I don't think I like it that much, it is the so-called freshness. I have seen the highest level of this type in Hunter fan fiction. There is an author who created a dark continent without much description in the original work, and wrote half of the plot as the main line of the second half of the novel. To be purely original, he also wrote an original composition within the framework of the original work.
It's very, very good. Judging from my reading time, I like this book very much. The main character's characteristics and eyes are not described much.
Also, I would like to see the author write about movie viewing in the future, or compare parallel worlds, two third generations, the protagonist and Sarutobi Hiruzen,
At present, Chapter 54, it seems that the protagonist and Uzumaki Mito will develop in this direction? Others can also look forward to the next plot development. Just forget about Uzumaki Mito and replace it with someone else.
A certain person, Sun Ce, named Bo Fu, was a descendant of Jiangdong! His father, Sun Jian, defeated Dong Zhuo in the past, but was unfortunately killed by Huang Zu. Although I have not yet reached the age of 18, I am already determined to inherit my father's legacy and travel across the river.
Core Competencies:
1. He has been practicing martial arts since he was a child, and his marksmanship is like that of a dragon, and he can defeat hundreds of people;
2. Make good use of heroes, Gong Jin and others are willing to be used by me;
3. Run the army strictly, not taking a drop from the people or plundering a single home from the people;
4. When you hear that the enemy is approaching, you must go to the battle formation in person. When the soldiers see the commander in front, they will all fight to the death to serve.
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good well
It's very good. Transforming Konoha is not like other novels that just follow the plot. After reading it again, I feel like I have read the original novel.
Not bad, very good-looking, good luck to the author
It's pretty good-looking, and it feels similar to Dave's here!
The writing is very interesting, please keep up the good work, author!
It's very interesting. It has a unique perspective and even ate Mito Uzumaki. It's quite interesting [laughing]
Five stars, the writing and plot are okay, not a noob, and no poisonous points were found. It can be considered a good Naruto fanfic.
This good-looking yuppie
Hahahahahahaha
You can watch different routines
It's so funny [laughs] Another old man in the ninja world
Good-looking, the type who likes to develop his power
When can the protagonist show his personal strength?
The writing is okay, but the latest update only has one chapter.
How can I put it this way? I modified some parts and created some, but the whole thing looks okay.
It looks good, but there are too few [Like]
I love the Third Hokage so much, so loyal😭😭
Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking. The reason why I gave it four stars is that Mito Uzumaki is really unnecessary, but overall, the plot is okay.
Good plot, looking forward to the follow-up
It's a very good Naruto fanfic, but the rating doesn't match the content. Come on.
Not bad, I replaced Danzo Sarutobi from the beginning, please update soon.
Love watching👀, good luck to the author⛽
Unexpectedly good-looking, especially the plot of Mito Uzumaki [Like][Like][Like]
Although the word count is small, the writing is good. The plot is very good [laughing][laughing][laughing]
The book is completely unreadable after coming out of the canopy, and it just goes from top to bottom to the end. San⭐bar [cover face][cover face][cover face]
I found it, brothers. The author's quality is online. There is no need to move away from Tomato for the time being.
A very awesome Naruto fanfic, with the modern thinking of modern people traveling through the ancient world without being pedantic. When I saw Chapter 27, I wanted to give it a good review. The reason is that this chapter describes Naruto's biggest scam and the reason behind Tsunade's sure loss in every bet. It also gives an explanation that the author thinks is reasonable and that I think is reasonable. This allows me to see that the author is really seriously interpreting the original work with modern thinking and adding his own thinking to change that world. I have always felt that there are three levels of fan fiction, and I have mentioned it before in other novel book reviews. The lowest level is to follow the original plot and become the nanny of the protagonist. This is the most common in early infinite horror fan fiction. Then there are various novice authors who can only follow the original plot when their writing skills are not enough and dare not change the plot. They are afraid that if they change the plot, they will not be able to know the future direction and predict the future. Medium is a book that changes the direction of the plot and writes the author's own story according to the author's understanding instead of being a nanny for the original protagonist. Negative examples are those who time travel to Naruto/Sasuke and then follow the original plot. There are many positive examples, such as darkening Naruto and darkening Sasuke. The best way is to only borrow the story background and world view of the original work, and write a brand new story of your own, from a perspective that the original work ignores or is not so mainstream. For example, some Naruto fan fiction will write a brand new story of the protagonist in the Kingdom of Earth/The Kingdom of Thunder. The Kingdom of Water/The Kingdom of Wind because the presence in the original main story is too strong, I don't think I like it that much, it is the so-called freshness. I have seen the highest level of this type in Hunter fan fiction. There is an author who created a dark continent without much description in the original work, and wrote half of the plot as the main line of the second half of the novel. To be purely original, he also wrote an original composition within the framework of the original work.
It's very, very good. Judging from my reading time, I like this book very much. The main character's characteristics and eyes are not described much. Also, I would like to see the author write about movie viewing in the future, or compare parallel worlds, two third generations, the protagonist and Sarutobi Hiruzen,
At present, Chapter 54, it seems that the protagonist and Uzumaki Mito will develop in this direction? Others can also look forward to the next plot development. Just forget about Uzumaki Mito and replace it with someone else.
A certain person, Sun Ce, named Bo Fu, was a descendant of Jiangdong! His father, Sun Jian, defeated Dong Zhuo in the past, but was unfortunately killed by Huang Zu. Although I have not yet reached the age of 18, I am already determined to inherit my father's legacy and travel across the river. Core Competencies: 1. He has been practicing martial arts since he was a child, and his marksmanship is like that of a dragon, and he can defeat hundreds of people; 2. Make good use of heroes, Gong Jin and others are willing to be used by me; 3. Run the army strictly, not taking a drop from the people or plundering a single home from the people; 4. When you hear that the enemy is approaching, you must go to the battle formation in person. When the soldiers see the commander in front, they will all fight to the death to serve.
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good well
It's very good. Transforming Konoha is not like other novels that just follow the plot. After reading it again, I feel like I have read the original novel.
Not bad, very good-looking, good luck to the author
It's pretty good-looking, and it feels similar to Dave's here!
The writing is very interesting, please keep up the good work, author!
It's very interesting. It has a unique perspective and even ate Mito Uzumaki. It's quite interesting [laughing]
Five stars, the writing and plot are okay, not a noob, and no poisonous points were found. It can be considered a good Naruto fanfic.
This good-looking yuppie
Hahahahahahaha
You can watch different routines
It's so funny [laughs] Another old man in the ninja world
Good-looking, the type who likes to develop his power
When can the protagonist show his personal strength?
The writing is okay, but the latest update only has one chapter.
How can I put it this way? I modified some parts and created some, but the whole thing looks okay.
It looks good, but there are too few [Like]
I love the Third Hokage so much, so loyal😭😭
Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking. The reason why I gave it four stars is that Mito Uzumaki is really unnecessary, but overall, the plot is okay.
Good plot, looking forward to the follow-up
It's a very good Naruto fanfic, but the rating doesn't match the content. Come on.
Not bad, I replaced Danzo Sarutobi from the beginning, please update soon.
Love watching👀, good luck to the author⛽
Unexpectedly good-looking, especially the plot of Mito Uzumaki [Like][Like][Like]
Although the word count is small, the writing is good. The plot is very good [laughing][laughing][laughing] The book is completely unreadable after coming out of the canopy, and it just goes from top to bottom to the end. San⭐bar [cover face][cover face][cover face]
I found it, brothers. The author's quality is online. There is no need to move away from Tomato for the time being.