The Childbirth System Asked Me to Give It to Him! She! They Give Birth

It's already tied. The heroine's character is well developed and she has character traits. Although it is a story about childbirth, it has a different point. It's just that I feel that the heroine is working too hard, and she is still being hunted with a big belly. I wonder if those top guys who were chasing the heroine can find a chance to deal with them, or don't wait for others to bring in reinforcements and execute them immediately. I know that with the heroine's current ability, there is no way, but I suggest the author write less of this kind of thing, because the heroine is very weak now, and then there are always top guys coming to harass her, and then she can't fight but can only run away. This is very sad and frustrating. Moreover, the world of cultivating immortals is different from other worlds. At least the martial arts value is not as high as other worlds. This world is really capable of fighting. The young ones come and the old ones come. It is recommended to write less excellent plots. Moreover, the heroine was beaten by others and ran away. I feel that many of the enemies she provoked have not been resolved. I hope that I can just eradicate the root causes. Otherwise, it always feels like there is some hidden danger. You can write less about other things, like some top-notch ones. Although the heroine is taking it step by step now, I feel that the heroine is too hard. And I haven't mastered any powerful martial arts yet. I feel like I'm constantly being chased by others and escaping for my life. I hope the heroine can level up faster. Or rather more powerful. The words of the male protagonists do not need to be so specific. I just want to see the heroine enjoy the story, and I hope the heroine won't suffer too much. The pace is a bit slow. But overall it's good, maybe because this book is still being serialized, so the rhythm hasn't been figured out yet. I know how many chapters the author plans to write. If it is to be completed within 500 chapters, I feel that these parents can write less and hope to see the plot of the female protagonist cultivating immortality. If the system of this book were changed to another system, instead of the childbirth system, the heroine's personality and character would be in the world of immortality. If written alone, it would be a very good novel.

The AI ​​was a bit too watery in the past, so I was swiping to read it. In recent chapters, I feel that the AI ​​seems to be less involved. I don't know if it's my imagination, but it does look much better than before, at least I don't always have to swipe to read it. The special advantage is that the orange power is very good, and the women are also carefully portrayed. There are currently three children, two fathers and one mother, three girls and one boy. I like this kind of high ratio of daughters. Although the number of twin pregnancies is only once, there are already several spare ones. At least I feel that Saint Aguo and the original heroine will conceive in the future. It is also possible for the girl who is the best in the beast, and the adopted sister Lu Cui is also seriously helping her grow up. Then the children all take their mother's surname. Advice, don't listen to novels. When you listen to novels, the traces of AI will be amplified a lot. You really can't listen to it at all. You can automatically ignore it when you read it. Listening to him speaks every word to you clearly and completely cannot be ignored. Listening is a kind of torture - from a person who accidentally forgets that she is an AI while listening to novels. Alas, it would be great if the author could write without AI. The subject matter is really attractive. What was originally a 80% or 90% delicious novel becomes a 60% tasteless novel after adding AI. It would be a pity to abandon it.

It's super, super good-looking. I recommend it to all my relatives and friends [laughs][laughs][laughs] It's very beautiful. Please leave comments if you think it's good or bad after watching it. Also, for those of you who read the book review first, this book contains some al, not purely hand-written, so if you don't like it after reading the review, please don't come in. I'm afraid that if you don't like it, you'll give it a bad review. Also, those who like Gao Jie must believe in the author's mother's love for the protagonist's baby. It's just that the opening plot needs to be written like this. It does not mean that the protagonist's baby is unclean. Also, don't have high demands on the female protagonist when writing on female videos! ! !

The author's writing style is really sophisticated, with a trickle of warmth and elegance. It is not the cool writing style of the traditional upgrading style. The description is very real. I think it's worth 9.0 Or above. I think it is more reasonable to write dozens of chapters during the Qi training period. The step from a mortal to the path of cultivating immortals is extremely difficult. The heroine's ability to keep a cool head when encountering any crisis is what impresses me most about her. The characterization of the heroine allows me to believe that such a tenacious and unyielding woman can reach the end of her fairyland step by step. Seeing that I have given birth to two daughters and have not reunited with the other two parents of the children, it is quite good. The mainstream is still to find your own path. Love and love are good even if they are used as a tonic when chasing the road [Bird Food Masterpiece]

Teacher, I want to see the scene where the heroine meets the original heroine

I just like reading books like this. Both men and women like [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

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The writing style is really good, and the narration is also very touching. It gives people a feeling of seeing the true feelings in the ordinary. It is worth reading❛˓◞˂̵✧

A story about childbirth that is neither hurried nor impatient, which suits my taste very well.

Not bad, not bad, give me a review and support.

Don't eat it, it seems okay so far