After Traveling Through Time: I Became Famous by Live Broadcasting Iron Collapsing

It's a novel subject matter, and the plot is pretty concise. However, from time to time, the barrage doesn't match up, and the barrage of the later plot appears in front. The author can probably read it once after writing it, so this situation can be reduced a lot. Starting from Chapter 20, there has been a large-scale barrage chaos. Almost every barrage has errors. I have tried to ignore the mistakes, but five or six mistakes in one chapter are too much. [Awkward laugh]

The subject matter is very fresh. This is the first time I have seen this type of storytelling. However, some options can be returned and re-selected in the game, such as the options with information bubble patterns, and the arrow → cannot be returned once selected, so the protagonist or the author has omitted some information in this regard. Information, and some confusing settings. For example, when Himeko first met the Doommon in the space station, she said that we should take the pioneers with us, which was very dramatic. Also, when choosing the protagonist, they were still voting but did not get to the subsequent plot. One person said that the star was suitable for being chosen by Kafka or something. All in all, if the details are changed, it might be good. Now I can't stand it. Four stars is an encouragement. My original rating was probably three stars.

It's well written, and it feels like I've watched the plot again. Most of it is the original plot in the game. I just hope that some barrages can respond more to the background music. Some of Beng Tie's boss songs are great even without lyrics. And occasionally let the audience know the existence of the IF line, such as what will happen if the star stays on the space station, so that they have a concept of [the end], know the consequences of choosing some options, and let the audience know the meaning of Kafka's sentence "When you have the opportunity to make a choice, don't let yourself regret it." At present, the protagonist is taking the live broadcast route, so the previous stories are not understood by some new audiences, so I hope the protagonist can realize this problem and want to completely show a story in a different world instead of just showing it to real readers. He can write a novel to record it, or simply set up a game company to make Bengtie after he has money, like this? The writing is great, I will keep following the updates😋

Chapter 18: The power of the Last King begins to appear [smile] Is this what you should know now? 1. I am not a little guy. 2. My name is Pioneer. 3. Do you have to discuss me in person? Leziren Research InstituteVote 3! "How much?" - This reaction is too true. Funny and sad at the same time.

Progress: 74 In the live broadcast room, the story of Bengtie is told in the way of a storyteller, not only using the voices of each character, but also using the audience's co-creation link, which is the line selection that appears when playing the game. The live broadcast room gives out the choices, and after the audience chooses, the protagonist reads out the lines, and then continues the story. This can be considered novel. To be honest, the pace is very slow. I am too impatient to wait. I retell it word for word. Now the plot has only reached the mining area. Yes, the main plot is told from the beginning. Those who want to review the plot of the game can read it.

In fact, I personally feel that the musical shock of Wildfire can be written about, as well as Hook and Natasha's phrases "What a blue roof" and "That's not a roof, that's the sky." I think these two sentences are quite enlightening.

Nice! ! ! Very novel theme! ! !

It was clearly stated that it was the result of dubbing or the host did it himself, but I don't know how to explain it.

I like this theme very much, thank you to the author!