Rock Kingdom, Resurrect Iris and Control Freya

No one died in the accident on the snowy mountain, only my beloved horse died😭😭😭 It's beautiful. The description of the scenes and the portrayal of the characters' hearts are very good. There are also many intriguing places and foreshadowings. I personally think this is the best Locke Kingdom novel written on Tomato

Really, I have read several Rock Kingdom novels, but this one is the only one that completely conforms to the setting of Rock Kingdom. The two most popular books now are one that engages in dark revolution in Rock Kingdom, and the other directly deals with mechanical creation, completely using the IP of Rock Kingdom to write other things. Only this one allowed me to see a real world of Rock Kingdom, where elves have flesh and blood and are not just tools.

We in Luoshou have also suffered from fine chaff. Needless to say, shocking and delicious. Iris is very cute.

Xilan, friends who skipped the plot while playing the game can check out the plot here, it feels pretty good [laughing evilly]

After thinking about it for a long time, I felt itchy all over, and finally decided to let it out... First of all, I would like to say that my comment is only my personal attitude and my parents are healthy. The purpose of posting the comment is just to express my opinions and remind me. It is only my personal opinion on the content of the work and does not deny the excellence of the work and the delicate writing style of the author. This book is very good, the writing is good, the layout is good, the narrative method is very comfortable, the emotional description is very delicate, the logic is good, the character creation is mostly in line with the original work, and it is very good as a fan fiction - as for why I feel prickly, it is mainly because I cannot accept that the heroine is a princess. But maybe I'm a bit vindictive, and I can't accept that the princess is the heroine… After all, she said at the beginning that the protagonist is a little beggar, and also suggested that the protagonist get rid of the guardian dog… This is really embarrassing-too arrogant. I didn't change much after the second meeting. I almost didn't get into a fight with the protagonist, and I almost injured the guard dog... Doesn't anyone really think it's weird? Maybe it's because I'm a little sensitive, but this seems to have brushed off the bullying aspect, right? Even though the princess is pretty much the only one who likes to eat the main character's cooking, that really makes up for the... Well... Maybe I do hold a grudge... In that case, I will at least have no contact with the princess forever... Finally, this comment is just a personal opinion and I accept corrections on the premise of friendly communication. Thank you. (I give five stars because the writing and other contents of this book are really good...)

A top-notch novel, the opening chapter reveals the main character's late stage attitude. To be honest, it's so cool [Like] The daily life that follows becomes even more heartwarming, paving the way for the protagonist's subsequent darkening. However, the title of this book is very interesting. I read it more than three times on my recommendation list, but because of the title, I had no idea of clicking on it. This time I came here to take a look because I was really short on books. Back to the plot, since the protagonist will go dark and save Aerys, can we start from saving Aerys and then save everyone in the world, overthrow the aristocratic rule, establish a force (such as an alliance like Pokémon or American federalism), and establish a world where everyone is equal under the law? Since the kingdom is the upright one in the main plot, it is natural that the protagonist who wants to overthrow the rule of the kingdom is the villain. Don't wash it off, don't wash it off, don't wash it off! Don't do that. After the protagonist saved Iris, after certain things happened, everyone around him forgave him, the Elf King forgave him, and the kingdom also forgave him. This is impossible. After sacrificing so many elves, how can it be forgiven? How can the kingdom forgive this unstable factor? Moreover, it also controls Freya. Speaking of Freya, I don't know whether Freya was controlled by the protagonist or whether she was released after rescuing Iris. The author also said that the protagonist will establish a contract with Iris, which means that Iris will agree with the things the protagonist does. This is not in line with the character. Is it possible to clear up? In short, if you want to see the protagonist go dark, you can wait and see. It is suspected that he will clear up in the middle and later stages. Also, is there a female protagonist? If so, is it single or multiple? I hope the author can give a label in the introduction, for example (for reference only) [Rock Kingdom fanfic + multiple heroines Freya/Big Ear Hood + Growth + Daily + Darkening] The title of the book can also be changed For example (for reference only): "Aerys is dead, I no longer have the heart to distinguish right from wrong" "Resurrection, my Aerys!" "After understanding Enzo, I finally surpassed him" "Senior Enzo, you are too weak!" "I who overthrew the kingdom established an alliance" I remember that when a certain number of words is reached, the book title will be tested, and you will be asked to write multiple book titles for testing. In the end, the most popular book title in the algorithm will be anchored as the final book title. The title of the book is the first threshold to attract readers. It is extremely important. It should be refined rather than miscellaneous. It is extremely important to use the book title to highlight the characteristics of the book and attract readers.

Nice! The relationship between the protagonist and Iris is written in great detail! But I didn't expect it to be monogamous! [Laugh]

This book is so good. I get up at 7 a. M. Every morning to wait for him to update. Today I added my account. I thought I was stuck, but saw that he didn't update. I just saw the result and zoomed in on the ending. [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's really good and good. I accidentally crossed into the Locke Kingdom and met Iris under the circumstances of being a black household. I think it's not bad. [Like] [lick the screen] This is completely the path of becoming a magician in the Locke Kingdom from ordinary people. I think it's very good and very satisfying. I like this very much.

The writing is very good, and the plot is also very good. When I first read it, I thought it would be a cp-free movie with a female protagonist, but the writing was okay and not too abrupt. It's pretty good. You can take a look.

It's good to read, but the title of the book is a bit strange and may dissuade some people.

Woo hoo hoo, shocking first release

Very delicate, my first companion was also a sonic dog. It's the Elise in my imagination. Every time I talk to or touch her, I can't help crying.

It's good to watch, the plot is very detailed, but there are too few updates.

It's nice to watch, and the characters are emotionally nuanced.

It's quite good-looking and has a lot of supplements to shape the entire realistic world view. I just don't like love lines in fanfics ( ) but it's good-looking!

Speed ​​update, we Luoshou players are also in trouble. Can we capture Huahua? I used to think Qi Lihua was ugly, but now she feels so cute.

The writing is very good. I have read several articles about Locke Kingdom. Only in this one the characters are really alive and breathing.

Good book, very delicate emotions

Elder brother--! ! One more episode! I'm really dying, please, brother! I feel uncomfortable all over my body now, as if there are countless ants crawling around on my skin, burrowing into my bones and itching like crazy, my hands and feet are shaking uncontrollably, my heart is beating so fast, even breathing has become difficult, my chest is so blocked that I can't breathe, and my eyes are almost going black! I really can't hold it any longer, so I'll just add one more episode, just one episode, okay bro! I swear, I really swear, as long as you update an episode now, I will definitely be quiet after watching it, I will never pester you to update, I will never go crazy, I will never make trouble again, I will quietly wait for your next update, I will do what I say! I'm lying on the bed now, tossing and turning, rolling here and there. I can't fall asleep. My mind is full of the plot and the next development. The more I think about it, the more I feel itchy, and the more I think about it, the more I collapse.

To be honest, do we want to play? Well, my previous math teacher at our school was pretty good (it was just a personal mistake that made it to the work and author)

It's well written, but not enough to read.

It's really well written, it's genuine fine grain.

It must be rated five stars. Although resurrecting Aerys is a plus, the author's writing is still quite good so far.

5 Stars. It's a very beautiful story, one of the best I've ever seen in Locke Kingdom [laughs]

It's well written, but I thought the cp was Iris but it turned out to be a single female protagonist. But the author wrote it well. The family can continue to pursue monogamy and so on after eating Iris, which is the best and the author feels that the writing is good hehe