Traveling Through the City, I Awakened the Mirror Prison Villain System

B-, the logic and plot still need to be refined, some of the turns are too blunt, the foreshadowing is too crude, and the emotional foreshadowing is slightly lacking, but the specific plot and content are above the passing line, and there is a lot of room for improvement. I hope to persevere. To add another rule, Angela should reduce her share of work and take more vacations. The subsequent AI flavor will be too strong and not good-looking.

🧛: It was a wise decision to let the author do the writing! 🤖: What a wonderful novel, I can still feel the wonderful scenes even if I am not there : The various things in that room are intertwined to create it! It's amazing 🧟: Ah! What joy! There really wasn't even a moment of boring space left! 🧛😈🧟🫙🤖👽: Ah! Ah! Our beloved author! Bring us more and more! 🐛👵: Ahhh! The immortal in your heart, do you think so too? Ah! Hahaha! The immortal in my heart spoke!

A single male protagonist means not two male protagonists. Regardless of whether there is a female protagonist, it means that both can be compared. It doesn't matter whether I knock or not, as long as I grit my teeth and use all the imagination I have saved so far, I will be strong enough even if I don't have the knowledge of Shi Xie [Cool]

A Yueji second-generation novel with great potential. The original content is consistent with the Yueji setting. Although some of the content is polished by AI, it still retains certain characteristics of its own. Although it is only the first creation of an apprentice, you can still get a glimpse of the master's talent in it! The Ring Masters Jury awarded its artistic grade: A-! Such masterpieces are worthy enough to be included in the exhibition list of the cloister!

There is no big problem with the overall content. It can be said that the future is promising. The villain personality system of the protagonist is also very interesting. The card pool will be expanded in the future. If the fathers of the spider lair are drawn... Tsk tsk, put pressure on Yoshihide, or relieve the knot, for example, draw the personality of Reen, talk to Yoshihide, and then Yoshihide will be thawed after meeting Zhenlien, and this regret will be made up for. The future is promising, the future is promising, the author, come on!

Great imagination and good writing. I have AI but it is only used for polishing.

Is my sister a CP? No, family love is just family love, don't let it go bad.

The author should update soon ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

That's good, but shouldn't it be day and night?