Claymore: The Awakened One

I haven't watched the anime, but I know the characters. Even though it's a banned anime, and she dies when she's the strongest, it's undeniable that Dinisha is strong and beautiful. I really like cool heroines, just like Platycodon and Dinisha, Jian Suyan

It's good-looking, very delicate, and has a bit of a stream of consciousness. However, the protagonist is well portrayed. He is a real aboriginal, not the usual "don't eat beef" type of protagonist. The emotional scenes are delicate. I hope the author can stick to it.

The writing is very good, with excellent writing style. It is neither a trivial article nor a cool article, and there is no boring system. It uses the perspective and identity of the aborigines to save the regrets and tragedies of the original work. The explanation of the abilities is also in place. However, the focus on psychological description is very suitable when the characters are struggling in the early stage. However, in the later stage, I personally feel that it is a bit repetitive and delayed. It is just a vague feeling personally. The overall rhythm and writing level of the author are still very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard👏

The opening chapter throws out several suspense and nouns to catch my interest like an eagle, and then slowly and naturally adds settings in the narrative. This rhythm looks very smooth and comfortable. The only drawback is that the description of the fighting scenes is a bit stiff, and the use of verbs is not very proficient. Other aspects will have to wait until I read a few more chapters before making any conclusions.

It's super beautiful. The original heroine is not unexpected at all. It was tied in two days. Author, you must finish it `(*∩_∩*)′

High-end grain! Urgent update! It's been a long time since I've seen a well-written story about two heroines with swords! !

Nice. Like it very much.

It's been a long time since I've seen a Da Sword fanfic. And the author is so awesome. There are so many words in one chapter, so I'm full of it.

Very good sword fanfic

The writing is very delicate and has an obvious girlish style. I really like the emotions of the two protagonists in it. It's just that the niche subject matter is not popular. I'm optimistic about the author! This is a very detailed and emotional Da Sword fanfic.