Immortal Lord: Your First Disciple Is so Evil!

It's very interesting. More than 100 chapters have been updated so far. The protagonist can talk. He can turn black into white and evil into positive. Give the author five stars [learned it] Also: It is best not to have ambiguous plots in articles without female protagonists, such as the female dragon. Some of the descriptions are a bit too much.

It's really good. Don't be fooled by the score. This score can definitely be rated as 89 points. The protagonist is decisive in killing and careful, and there is no cp at present. I have to say that Jiang Fengzhu is still very good to the protagonist. I saw the author's chapter summary in the first few pictures saying that he wanted to cut the book. Although I am new to the game and don't have much money, I still send three power generation for love to support the author.

At least up to Chapter 135, I think it's fine. It's a blast to watch. It's really decisive in killing➕No overnight grudges➕You already have a way to die➕The protagonist has no cp. The plot progresses pretty fast. P. S. After reading other comments, I feel that there is still room for recovery later. If you want to write a big plot, you should include a lot of Su Shuang's small plots in the middle. After all, the readers who filtered out this subject should come to read Shuang's articles. There is no big problem with the logic... I think few readers will follow the Shuang's theme to write long articles on the tomato extended front, so I'd better speed up the progress. I hope to see a better ending.

It's just a refreshing article about cultivating immortals, but it gave me the desire to continue reading and it was comfortable to read [Chigua] Although there are some minor problems, they are not harmful [Chigua] I think it's pretty good. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but after looking at the reviews and updates, I changed it to five stars. [Chigua] I recommend giving it a try. Changed. I originally thought that although there were some minor issues, the plot and rhythm were not bad for me, and the rating was not too high, so I would give it a five-star rating [eating melon]. However, after the appearance of the two beast-controlling sect members, the writing was not as good as before. The protagonist no longer has the sinister feeling before, and feels like he is being "controlled". [Chigua] Now I will give it three stars if I write it like this. If the writing is good/bad later, I will change the review to remind everyone [Chigua] Part 2 It is recommended to give up after the two characters Qin Shenghong and Wang Keqing appear (it's okay to continue watching if you can watch it). I personally feel that the level of these two people has dropped after they appeared compared with before they appeared, and the impression is not good. Although there were many problems before [Fear] appeared, it did not particularly affect my perception. Although there were fewer problems after it appeared (but there were also turn-based battles, a group of talkative people during life and death battles, and the supporting characters acted like fools), the perception of the game dropped. [Eat melon] I originally wanted to give it a try, but it turned out that after more than forty and fifty chapters, it still hasn't come to an end [fear][fear][fear] This is just my personal feeling. Everyone has different tastes, so I think you can give it a try. The score of 6.4 Is indeed low in Tomato. I will continue to keep it and see what happens next.

The protagonist's little mouth deserves serious study frame by frame.

The writing is good, the plot is good, but there is still no cp, ➕Follow it! The male protagonist has an interesting personality, and the supporting characters also have distinct personalities. This novel is one of the few in which I don't feel disgusted when the protagonist speaks dirty words [Like]

I want to watch it. After watching it for a day, I tied it and I want to support it again. The protagonist is decisive in killing and has a sinister and cunning character. It is very interesting to read. The author's writing style is very humorous and made me laugh several times [smile]

It's very good-looking and in line with your appetite. It's suitable for both demonic cultivation and righteousness. The writing style is sharp and the words are coherent. If you like to read male videos and enjoy them, you can take a look. It has zero depression.

It's a novel article. The protagonist is no longer an immortal cultivator with a celestial spirit, but a demonic cultivator villain who has the taste of a businessman and talks nonsense. It's quite fun to watch him deceive the people in the sect. And it can be seen that AI is not used. Just because AI writing is popular now, it is worthy of giving the artificial team a thumbs up. By the way, I want to ask the author. I haven't seen any ambiguous plots between the protagonist and other people so far, so I just read it as a novel without CP. Can you give me accurate information? This is a novel without a female protagonist. I feel at ease.

I have seen the latest chapter 85, so far the impression is good, but it is not very rigorous, such as the Black Law of the North, the self-dialectical reasons, and the method of improving cultivation. Currently, I only see the improvement through the Ten Thousand Soul Banner. The supporting roles are okay. The decent characters who have appeared so far are a bit naive and cannot regard evil as hatred. I hope there will be a few like this in the future. "But considering that there are only 85 chapters now", and the author's positioning of this article is to be a fantasy novel! ! That's still okay. Regarding the issue of female protagonists, there is currently no one, but I hope there will be one in the future. After all, the protagonist is an evil cultivator. It is a bit strange not to have a female protagonist, but it has to be a single female protagonist, because we have to consider that the protagonist says that he is the Black Law Judge of Beidi (personal opinion) ! ! ! ! Now someone wants to ask! ! Book Friends Book Friends "Isn't the Black Law of Northern Emperor Strict?" How can there be a female protagonist? ! ! ! Judge Black Law of the North is divided into! Lay judge! Priest Judge! Among the two types, the clerical judge is a priest who is established by a high-level Taoist priest and has been appointed by Emperor Fengdu of Beiyin. He must abide by the black law at all times. This kind of judge cannot have a female protagonist, but! ! The author's inheritance in this article has been broken for 3,000 years, so the protagonist can only be a lay judge! ! Say it again! ! Lay judge! You can also be called a half-time judge, but you have not been appointed! ! People who learn the Black Law of Beiyin by chance must abide by it only when using the Black Law. If not, they can marry and have children just like normal people! Digression (there are female judges in the Black Law of Northern Emperor, but most of the texts are dominated by males)

It's pretty good. I think the only problem is that there are a lot of typos. For example, at the beginning, there is the Core Formation stage and the Golden Core stage, but they should be the same. Then there are some mistakes in the names. For example, Zhang Jia Na, Zhang Rulong is written as Zhang Yang in Chapter 61. These all affect the perception a bit, but overall it's okay. Other supporting characters can be introduced or other branches can be added to enrich the story, but the most important thing is that it feels satisfying.

The character of the protagonist is the same as the name Shen Bai. He is very kind and pure, generous and generous. He is well versed in the inheritance of the older generation. He gives each other a hat before doing things. He is committed to letting his colleagues get a share of the pie and dragging them into the water (crossed out). In short, the protagonist can definitely be called a well-known and decent person.

It's pretty good. Anyway, I like it very much. It's updated three times a day.

I have to say, this book is wonderful. It's not that interesting either. There is currently no cp. It looks pretty good, very acceptable. Worth a look. Anyway... He's really talkative.

Good book, I am reading it. Oh, I have not read countless books. This book is really a masterpiece. The writing style can be seen that the author is a veteran. Like a woman, the older she gets, the more fragrant she is. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Good book with good plot The protagonist has characteristics Not suppressing combat effectiveness Well written, keep it up

It looks good so far. I hope there won't be a female protagonist in the future, and there won't be anything ambiguous. Directly implement war war war I kill kill kill [laughs]

It looks good, but this score is too low. It can be at least 8.9 Or 9. Well, I feel like 8 points should be there. The above mentioned ones are too high because I watched the early stage and it looked pretty good. Now I see 71. It's okay. It's okay to watch it without thinking. I feel like the people in the sect don't have their own thoughts and are led away by the protagonist. They don't use their brains. In fact, sometimes what the protagonist says doesn't make sense. Even if you insist on saying it, they will believe it.

It only has a score of 7.1, Which is actually okay. Dihua is a bit serious. Xianxia has a martial arts feel. The plot is a bit slow, but it's okay when viewed as a Le Ziwen.

Although the snake is a female snake, it is still a snake! Old and delicate body. I hope that this female snake will not be written into a human form in the future, and then be with the male protagonist.

Where can I find the author who also read Ming Dynasty 1566 and wrote novels about cultivating immortals? Author, we are close friends

The language is vulgar, but it touches the soul and is very powerful.

It's obviously very beautiful, the writing style is very good, and it's humorous. Why does it only have a score of 7.1?

Very well written. There is something funny about killing decisively.

Must follow till the end, come on

Damn it, you gave me a better update [make a face][make a face][make a face]

This book is so beautiful, why has no one read it?

This kind of book that is not AI is really comfortable (っ^‿^)っ📚.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

It's beautiful. I can't think of any adjectives that can be used to describe this book. Just read it and you'll find out.