[The ratings have just come out, please give me a thumbs up] [Naruto + Garp template + combat + system but no sense of existence]
Once he was reborn, he came to the dangerous world of Naruto in Naruto Legends. The good news is that he was reborn with the Garp template from the One Piece studio next door.
Someone asked Kazan, what kind of technique is this?
Kazan said, "What I use my fists is, of course, boxing."
The man asked again, "What is the effect of this technique?"
Kazan answered truthfully, "The left fist does more damage, the right fist does more damage, you choose one!"
Reader comments
Really cool writing, punches to the flesh, free will, dare to fight anyone you see
It takes a long time to hit anyone
Good reviews, this is the real will, this is the real domineering, which is completely different from the domineering obtained by signing in and ding-dong in other novels. To put it bluntly, do those carefree protagonists deserve to be domineering?
It's a pretty cool novel. At present, there is only one red female lead in the pipeline, but the protagonist has no such idea [laughs]
The plot is calculated from which year Obito starts, and the plot advances relatively quickly. It does not limit the combat power, that is, the left fist does high damage, and the right fist does high damage. It's more relaxing to watch, unlike other Naruto fans who are always plotting and scheming to waste their brains [laughs]
Isn't it written that this kid from the ninja school is so strong that he shouldn't be able to kill him with just one punch? Even chakra can't block a punch.
This group of ninjas are described as being better at resisting beatings than pirates. Even with chakra, they can't resist beatings like this.
Naruto Chunin Examination
"Little Naruto! I will throw you into the forest of death to hunt! Throw you into the deep sea to fight sea beasts! Tie you to a cliff nearly 10,000 meters away for training! Just to train you!"
Kyuubi:... Heh
Not bragging, not bad, it's really good. Although the setting and some of the missions are a bit confusing, it's really great.
Secondly, in this era where AI is everywhere, it is really a waste of money.
I caught up with the update and Naruto was born. For now, I can continue to catch up.
Give it to someone
No matter what the nitpicks are, this novel is very exciting to fight, and although it is poisonous, it does not have any fatal poisonous points. Since a large part of it is in the exciting part of fighting, then this should be a very qualified online novel to pass the time.
Perfectly integrated into Hokage's deformed worldview, both Jiraiya and I would peek at Konoha's bathhouse and slip away.
Everything else is fine. Talk about 40% Garp's fusion bonus. Then the physical strength and domineering suppressed Feng Ying, and then opened the sixth gate of the 8 Dunjia. Then the puppet on the opposite side cannot be destroyed with one punch. What material is it made of? With such an invincible puppet, why not make armor?
It's good to read. If you are short on books, you can read it. The author is a bit weak and the volume is too small. Please give the author a good look at you.
It's very interesting. Please update it soon. Also, if it's okay, I hope the author won't add some of his own ideas to discredit this character. I think the setting of the manga is the setting. Why should I make up some nonsense by myself?
It's good to watch, but the update is a bit slow. Until now, there are no bad points. I just hope that the protagonist will not be Hokage in the future and continue to be a free man. This is more in line with Garp's style. Later, he can become an old-timer and travel around the ninja world like Jiraiya.
There are no other poisonous points in the book except that Shukaku was captured by Hashirama and compared to the fact that Kyuubi was able to seal the gate inside Kushina's body.
First, Shukaku was captured by Lieto and the others themselves. I remember there are screenshots from the comics, and I will put the wrong places in the book.
Second, there is no sealed door in Kushina's body, so I have placed it in the corresponding position in the article.
Pretty good fanfic
First of all, Naruto is a very long novel, and its character creation is quite good, so the corresponding fan fiction should also inherit its character creation, at least it should not be too OOC, which is very good.
Then there are a few minor flaws in the writing, but it doesn't matter much. It's pretty good in the big environment of Tomato.
It must be added that the core value of Naruto is the endless entanglement of chains and fetters of love and hate. One of the most amazing settings is that first-class ninjas can briefly connect with each other in battle.
This is a setting that is rarely inherited in fan fiction, but in this book it is
All in all, it is quite well written. Although the review is a small account and does not have much duration, the total duration is more than 10,000. Have you read any books of the same type? There are hundreds of 100. This book is quite good in the same type. The content is very rich. If it is written at this level, I will almost rank it at 8.9 Points for a very high-quality book. I highly recommend it to old bookworms.
Okay, no pressure on combat power
Updates are slow. I saved 16 chapters for a month and updated them every few days.
The fighting was very exciting. I thought it was the invincible crushing of Wen, which still showed some growth. I was thinking, Kai opened the door to death, and with his physical strength, Kai could distort space in the night. Why can't Garp's power work here? Garp's physical strength and power shouldn't be lower than Kai's, right?
It's very comfortable and refreshing to watch. Especially with the character Garp's ability and tone of voice, I feel very comfortable and handsome. However, I think the author's writing style is still very immature. I can only say that I look forward to improving.
Personally, I think it's still worth watching. The protagonist, a pure reckless man, likes this kind of left fist that does high damage and his right fist that does high damage. It's really interesting. Finally, I hope the author can work harder and update it so that the eunuch won't be unfinished.
After writing Naruto, let's write a Pirates novel. This taste is so authentic. It's a pure Bean-dipping Pirates novel. It doesn't say anything about justice or injustice, it's just a Bean-dipping novel. It's so cool. It's unparalleled in the world.
I was just curious that there are so many people reading Naruto fanfics. I started reading from the two-tailed Jinchūriki. There was no trace of AI, almost no poison points, and the whole battle was fun. I really clicked in without any expectations, and ended up watching the end directly [Like]
The plot is still very good, and the Naruto and Pirates fusion system is still very bright, and it is worth watching. As the plot progresses, the protagonist's strength can still keep up, and the protagonist's combat power is not overpowered, nor is he invincible immediately. As the protagonist's strength increases, he can keep up with the pace of the plot. I also hope that the author will not stop running away! !
So far, it looks fine and looks good, but it's just that there's a lot of characters and there's still no female protagonist.
After reading it, I thought it was quite interesting, but I still have two questions. Why is Kazan's name inexplicably changed to Skylark in the book? There are still three battles where the history doesn't match up. I feel like I'm fighting a boss just for the sake of fighting a boss.
It's my favorite part of picking up the pirate box again [laughs]
This book is a true description of Konoha. Unlike most other Naruto books that are closer to the rational guesses of Chinese people, it can be considered a retro style. The protagonist is quite enjoyable to fight, and it's a novel worth reading for traditional Naruto fans.
Okay, it would be better if you tease me a little more
Okay, I think it's great. I think it can be ranked among the top among Naruto stories. But I'm worried about the author's outline. See the author's follow-up
Nice book, I've been short of it recently
At present, it seems that there will be a single female protagonist Yuhi Hong. Will there be multiple female protagonists in the future? @Give me added pepper. Can you label whether there is a single female protagonist or a multi-female harem? @Give me added pepper
What is the approximate level of Garp's strength in Naruto?
Really cool writing, punches to the flesh, free will, dare to fight anyone you see It takes a long time to hit anyone
Good reviews, this is the real will, this is the real domineering, which is completely different from the domineering obtained by signing in and ding-dong in other novels. To put it bluntly, do those carefree protagonists deserve to be domineering?
It's a pretty cool novel. At present, there is only one red female lead in the pipeline, but the protagonist has no such idea [laughs] The plot is calculated from which year Obito starts, and the plot advances relatively quickly. It does not limit the combat power, that is, the left fist does high damage, and the right fist does high damage. It's more relaxing to watch, unlike other Naruto fans who are always plotting and scheming to waste their brains [laughs]
Isn't it written that this kid from the ninja school is so strong that he shouldn't be able to kill him with just one punch? Even chakra can't block a punch. This group of ninjas are described as being better at resisting beatings than pirates. Even with chakra, they can't resist beatings like this.
Naruto Chunin Examination "Little Naruto! I will throw you into the forest of death to hunt! Throw you into the deep sea to fight sea beasts! Tie you to a cliff nearly 10,000 meters away for training! Just to train you!" Kyuubi:... Heh
Not bragging, not bad, it's really good. Although the setting and some of the missions are a bit confusing, it's really great. Secondly, in this era where AI is everywhere, it is really a waste of money. I caught up with the update and Naruto was born. For now, I can continue to catch up. Give it to someone
No matter what the nitpicks are, this novel is very exciting to fight, and although it is poisonous, it does not have any fatal poisonous points. Since a large part of it is in the exciting part of fighting, then this should be a very qualified online novel to pass the time.
Perfectly integrated into Hokage's deformed worldview, both Jiraiya and I would peek at Konoha's bathhouse and slip away.
Everything else is fine. Talk about 40% Garp's fusion bonus. Then the physical strength and domineering suppressed Feng Ying, and then opened the sixth gate of the 8 Dunjia. Then the puppet on the opposite side cannot be destroyed with one punch. What material is it made of? With such an invincible puppet, why not make armor?
It's good to read. If you are short on books, you can read it. The author is a bit weak and the volume is too small. Please give the author a good look at you.
It's very interesting. Please update it soon. Also, if it's okay, I hope the author won't add some of his own ideas to discredit this character. I think the setting of the manga is the setting. Why should I make up some nonsense by myself? It's good to watch, but the update is a bit slow. Until now, there are no bad points. I just hope that the protagonist will not be Hokage in the future and continue to be a free man. This is more in line with Garp's style. Later, he can become an old-timer and travel around the ninja world like Jiraiya.
There are no other poisonous points in the book except that Shukaku was captured by Hashirama and compared to the fact that Kyuubi was able to seal the gate inside Kushina's body. First, Shukaku was captured by Lieto and the others themselves. I remember there are screenshots from the comics, and I will put the wrong places in the book. Second, there is no sealed door in Kushina's body, so I have placed it in the corresponding position in the article.
Pretty good fanfic First of all, Naruto is a very long novel, and its character creation is quite good, so the corresponding fan fiction should also inherit its character creation, at least it should not be too OOC, which is very good. Then there are a few minor flaws in the writing, but it doesn't matter much. It's pretty good in the big environment of Tomato. It must be added that the core value of Naruto is the endless entanglement of chains and fetters of love and hate. One of the most amazing settings is that first-class ninjas can briefly connect with each other in battle. This is a setting that is rarely inherited in fan fiction, but in this book it is
All in all, it is quite well written. Although the review is a small account and does not have much duration, the total duration is more than 10,000. Have you read any books of the same type? There are hundreds of 100. This book is quite good in the same type. The content is very rich. If it is written at this level, I will almost rank it at 8.9 Points for a very high-quality book. I highly recommend it to old bookworms.
Okay, no pressure on combat power Updates are slow. I saved 16 chapters for a month and updated them every few days.
The fighting was very exciting. I thought it was the invincible crushing of Wen, which still showed some growth. I was thinking, Kai opened the door to death, and with his physical strength, Kai could distort space in the night. Why can't Garp's power work here? Garp's physical strength and power shouldn't be lower than Kai's, right?
It's very comfortable and refreshing to watch. Especially with the character Garp's ability and tone of voice, I feel very comfortable and handsome. However, I think the author's writing style is still very immature. I can only say that I look forward to improving.
Personally, I think it's still worth watching. The protagonist, a pure reckless man, likes this kind of left fist that does high damage and his right fist that does high damage. It's really interesting. Finally, I hope the author can work harder and update it so that the eunuch won't be unfinished.
After writing Naruto, let's write a Pirates novel. This taste is so authentic. It's a pure Bean-dipping Pirates novel. It doesn't say anything about justice or injustice, it's just a Bean-dipping novel. It's so cool. It's unparalleled in the world.
I was just curious that there are so many people reading Naruto fanfics. I started reading from the two-tailed Jinchūriki. There was no trace of AI, almost no poison points, and the whole battle was fun. I really clicked in without any expectations, and ended up watching the end directly [Like]
The plot is still very good, and the Naruto and Pirates fusion system is still very bright, and it is worth watching. As the plot progresses, the protagonist's strength can still keep up, and the protagonist's combat power is not overpowered, nor is he invincible immediately. As the protagonist's strength increases, he can keep up with the pace of the plot. I also hope that the author will not stop running away! !
So far, it looks fine and looks good, but it's just that there's a lot of characters and there's still no female protagonist.
After reading it, I thought it was quite interesting, but I still have two questions. Why is Kazan's name inexplicably changed to Skylark in the book? There are still three battles where the history doesn't match up. I feel like I'm fighting a boss just for the sake of fighting a boss.
It's my favorite part of picking up the pirate box again [laughs]
This book is a true description of Konoha. Unlike most other Naruto books that are closer to the rational guesses of Chinese people, it can be considered a retro style. The protagonist is quite enjoyable to fight, and it's a novel worth reading for traditional Naruto fans.
Okay, it would be better if you tease me a little more
Okay, I think it's great. I think it can be ranked among the top among Naruto stories. But I'm worried about the author's outline. See the author's follow-up
Nice book, I've been short of it recently At present, it seems that there will be a single female protagonist Yuhi Hong. Will there be multiple female protagonists in the future? @Give me added pepper. Can you label whether there is a single female protagonist or a multi-female harem? @Give me added pepper
What is the approximate level of Garp's strength in Naruto?
Okay, okay😌You can eat it, you can eat it