Dihua+Invincible+Single Female Protagonist+Xianxia+Empress+Accept Disciple
How does it feel to be overrated by the world?
Shen Qingshan traveled through time for twenty-eight years. I had no spiritual roots, no cultivation, and only focused on practicing martial arts.
One outrageous thing after another:
The opponent whom I easily defeated → the Golden Elixir Immortal?
Heart-beating girl → Demonic Empress?
The introductory martial arts swordsmanship taught by opening a martial arts school → the swordsmanship and immortality?
Chickens that have been raised for two and a half years → ancient fairy chickens?
Everyone in the immortal world held me up on the altar, and everyone was in awe.
Shen Qingshan was stupid.
He spread his hands and smiled bitterly: "So the world of immortality is so weak? I really only know martial arts!"
Reader comments
Five stars for encouragement. Although the plot is a bit old-fashioned, the settings are quite different from the traditional plot details. Plus, there are many interesting points. Overall, it is good. In terms of personal aesthetics of the text, 8 points is more appropriate. The main reason is that the two types of details are not handled well. First, some details are not explained clearly. For example, how does the male protagonist find the female protagonist's sect at the beginning? There are many similar situations later, and some plots are missed when reading. The sense of fragmentation, even a simple explanation of one or two sentences is enough; secondly, personally, the description of some of the cool points is too exaggerated, just like too much sugar in a dessert, it is a bit too fast, and there is no room for improvement later. Generally speaking, there is some novelty in the traditional clichés, and the opening is dense with cool points and lays some foreshadowings. You can estimate the boring direction of the plot without even reading the opening chapter. It has great potential. Come on, author
Good review, I feel like I saw the book written by Doubao on Tomato [Like][Like]
Isn't that why the update was discontinued?
It is one of the more interesting novels of the same type and can be read on.
Update update update quickly
It looks good and you work hard to write it?
It is humorous and some people are maliciously disparaging, but it is definitely a good book here.
It's so beautiful, I can't stop it, please update soon
Don't stop updating, update quickly
It looks good, but the author is too short [laughing][laughing]
It's actually quite pretty.
Update soon.
I'll give you five stars and try to trick more people.
Update quickly [smile] Don't stop updating.
Author, could you please stop making the protagonist so stupid?
Good, good, good, good, good, good
I don't see any blocking points, it's okay, it looks pretty good to me.
Books that start with a strong ceiling seem to be easier to reduce stress [laughing]
Five stars for encouragement. Although the plot is a bit old-fashioned, the settings are quite different from the traditional plot details. Plus, there are many interesting points. Overall, it is good. In terms of personal aesthetics of the text, 8 points is more appropriate. The main reason is that the two types of details are not handled well. First, some details are not explained clearly. For example, how does the male protagonist find the female protagonist's sect at the beginning? There are many similar situations later, and some plots are missed when reading. The sense of fragmentation, even a simple explanation of one or two sentences is enough; secondly, personally, the description of some of the cool points is too exaggerated, just like too much sugar in a dessert, it is a bit too fast, and there is no room for improvement later. Generally speaking, there is some novelty in the traditional clichés, and the opening is dense with cool points and lays some foreshadowings. You can estimate the boring direction of the plot without even reading the opening chapter. It has great potential. Come on, author
Good review, I feel like I saw the book written by Doubao on Tomato [Like][Like]
Isn't that why the update was discontinued?
It is one of the more interesting novels of the same type and can be read on.
Update update update quickly
It looks good and you work hard to write it? It is humorous and some people are maliciously disparaging, but it is definitely a good book here.
It's so beautiful, I can't stop it, please update soon
Don't stop updating, update quickly
It looks good, but the author is too short [laughing][laughing]
It's actually quite pretty. Update soon.
I'll give you five stars and try to trick more people.
Update quickly [smile] Don't stop updating.
Author, could you please stop making the protagonist so stupid?
Good, good, good, good, good, good
I don't see any blocking points, it's okay, it looks pretty good to me.
Books that start with a strong ceiling seem to be easier to reduce stress [laughing]