Sword Fairy Mommy, One Sword Can Conquer Mountains and Rivers

I am a newbie, writing a book for the first time, so please forgive me for any shortcomings in my writing. You can point them out and I will work hard to correct them. Then the author absorbed the opinions of book friends and changed the entire outline, deleting the heroine's boyfriend. The little goldfish is not the child of the heroine and her boyfriend, but an unknown life that suddenly appears in the heroine's body. I will add some settings later, such as the little goldfish being conceived through feelings. Then the character design of the second female lead, He Yuanyuan, was also changed. She had a boyfriend at the beginning. I changed the boyfriend to the girlfriend, and set He Yuanyuan to be Lily from the beginning. This way, it is perfectly connected with the plot of the heroine falling in love with the heroine later. It will not be as abrupt as before, where the person who originally liked men suddenly changed his mind to like women. In short, if you have any questions, please ask them and the author will listen to them. I hope that everyone will continue to express your views and opinions in the future. If you find out what is written poorly, tell them and the author will correct them. Also, please don't give negative reviews to the author. The author updates more than 10,000 words every day. It's not easy to write words, and he still gets negative reviews. It's really sad [I'm about to cry], please🙏🏻 This author updates 10,000 words every day. He is really diligent. Why are fewer and fewer people reading the book? Is it going to be cold? It's so miserable. Hug the author. The author must continue to update. Although the first volume was a bit dull, the second volume started to enter the main plot and gradually got better. I hope the author will not stop updating. I will keep following the updates [crying]

Maybe it was because of the biased marriage at the beginning, and there were more female readers. Regardless of the plot or comments, I always felt that something was wrong. It's that kind of character setting and relationship that seems to be biased toward female fans. Although the author changed it to become a female fan, the shadow of female fans can still be seen.

I watched this book grow up little by little, and accidentally opened this book. At that time, it only had a little over 10,000 words. I watched it grow from a few readers to more readers, and now it has 110,000 words. I have been working hard to post paragraphs and comments to make it more popular. It is not only the author's child, but also like my child. I hope it will get better and better and be seen by more people. It was not so good at first, and readers said that both heroines were unclean. I also felt that the writing was not good at the time, but I did not dare to tell the author that the writing was not good, for fear of hurting the author's self-esteem. It was his first time writing a book, and I thought it was pretty good when it was written like this, so I gave him a little tolerance. Until a book friend posted a negative review, I was very sad, as if my own child was said to be a bad boy. Fortunately, the author has also worked hard and listened to the opinions of book friends. He has made major changes to the key points and the outline. I am really happy to see that this book is getting better and better. In addition, if you have anything you don't like, you can tell the author. He is really a person who is good at listening to other people's opinions. Give this book more tolerance and more room for growth. I believe it will be better in the future [Blow kiss][Please update][Top post]

The author's setting is very novel. As a novice author, it is already great to write like this. I still have to praise it. However, I felt weird when I read it. It gave me a very smooth feeling. Everything went smoothly, just like the narrative text, without any twists and turns. Faced with being reborn three times, facing his daughter, and facing the new world, the protagonist's emotional expression gave me a very bland feeling. The setting is that the protagonist has a powerful spiritual consciousness and is one of the top leaders in the world of immortality, but the performance is unsatisfactory. It's a good book, you can read it, and the author must not argue with readers about right and wrong in the comment area, it can easily scare other people away.

Beautiful, great content

The little goldfish is very cute.

Very pretty and so sweet [Adoration]

It's very beautiful, but I don't know why no one sees it.