Those Years of Dawdling in the Villain Organization

Shennong still tastes all kinds of herbs, please read the follow-up review for details Put aside the logic, put aside the plot, put aside the brain, the character descriptions of the heroines are okay👍, there is no principled poison in the whole, but if you think about it for a while, you will find some small loopholes in the plot logic. To give a few examples, a piano competition was attacked by villains and held a sacrifice ceremony, and hundreds of people were almost killed😱. It was held again within a few days🔄, and then it was attacked by another gang of villains and caused an accident😓 Relying on the protagonist's transformation into a Tang Dynasty to advance the plot😶‍🌫️, it is concentrated before and after two piano competitions, which makes it a bit frustrating😤. Apart from these two piano competitions, everything else is okay. This involves the character of the protagonist🤔, which will be discussed in detail below👇 The character of the protagonist is constantly changing😵, objective evaluation based on the original plot📝 In terms of strength💪: The protagonist's health bar and blue bar meter are reversed at the beginning⚡. As of the latest, there is no strong boss👾. He is considered pseudo-invincible for the time being😎 In terms of character design😏: I have become a veteran in the villain group🖤, and occasionally send some information to the magical girl organization📨. If I have nothing to do, I can scare the magical girl to collect emotional points😈. I think it's okay to have a chaotic and kind personality. But after getting involved with the red, yellow, and blue horse monkey soju trio, anyone who doubts the protagonist will be sweating😥, and his flaws will be revealed after just one sentence😰. Although we have just met classmates for a few days, and we have not spoken more than ten sentences, I suspect that there is something wrong with you🤨, so I invite you to come to my piano competition🎹. Protagonist: This tone is not an invitation, it is an order😐, I have to go😣, what kind of personality do you think this is? At the second piano competition, Lan was held hostage by a controlled ordinary person with a hairpin. Protagonist: Although she is Mahou Soju✨, their use of magic will be seen by others and expose the real existence of magical girls and weirdos👀, which will bring them a lot of trouble😥. The person being controlled did not mean it. If Mahou Soju takes action, she will be taken into custody by the official organization. Even if I have the risk of exposure, I have to use my ability. Save them🫡, (I still just met them for a few days, and they didn't speak more than ten sentences), but the next day the magical girl was announced to the public📢, and we have to work with ordinary people to fight against the weirdos and the cult⚔️, the person being controlled was taken away by the magical girl agency, I said that the main character, the Madonna personality, is online for a limited time😇 So far in the latest chapter🆕, the protagonist has fought with the Mahou Soju again💥, and has collected a lot of emotional points. During the fight, he even made red and squeezed the red leather drum. However, it seems that the armor will be lost soon, so there is no need to worry about the self-green plot🚫💚 To sum up, if you personally feel that the plot of being suspected and being tested is okay, just read it, or skip and read these chapters. Just before and after the two piano competitions, it is still interesting to read the other chapters with a free mind, especially the plots with He Zai.

It's very interesting. The main character is a human being. He is at a loss, has selfish thoughts, and has things that normal people have. I have actually read several magical girl novels, and the protagonists are all like gods. The introduction is written like training a magical girl, and the plot is like that. ? How come the child protagonist has never even touched a magical girl [face covering]

So far, it looks pretty good, and the characterization is still okay. But it feels like it's easy to die suddenly First, currently, the focus is on emotional dramas, which can easily lead to female rivalry, yandere, or things developing to serve emotional dramas. It's not that it's bad, for example, my roommate has a good relationship and treats me to high-end steaks every day🥩. I feel good on the first day, but I'm still very excited the next day but calm down a bit. After countless days, I just want to vomit after seeing the steak. This part can take up a large proportion, but the white rice (the main plot) cannot be completely forgotten. Secondly, as others have said, if the main line is not clear and the goal is not clear, it may become a group portrait, a party struggle, an urban science fiction, etc. It is best to have a clear main line and goal. After all, novels have a target audience. If the direction is not clear, it is easy to persuade people to quit one by one.

66666, Give it a five-star rating to prevent book friends from not seeing it. Please turn to chapter 202. If you can accept it, just read it. Anyway, I am satisfied. I have pictures below, just to avoid reading history books, I finally know why my score is so low. I never thought I could eat like this. After eating more than two hundred chapters, I shouldn't have read this.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, but I don't know when the protagonist will be able to eat it [laughing evilly]. Overall, it feels like a daily instant noodle show. The male and female protagonists have distinct personalities, and the villains can also be used. Highly recommend! [OK]

A middle-school boy who puts on a mask to release his true self, a protagonist who is emotionally attentive. The shortcoming of the article is that the protagonist's temptation to test one of the three people is a bit subdued, in order to forcefully promote the plot.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If Noah hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! Unexpectedly, this book is still waiting for Zihan to fight Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian. Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. But on the way, he was tempted by foreign persimmons and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma became angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally became the plot of the Emperor Yan! ! !

Chapter 3 is updated daily to accumulate great virtues, and chapter 9 is updated daily to accumulate great virtues.

The author reads it to me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update it. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

It's hard to comment. There are no big problems overall, but there are a lot of small details missing. I feel that when the male protagonist gets along with magical girls other than Black, it feels like "making up the word count". Anyway, there are no big problems, and there are a lot of problems to be solved in detail. The advantage is that it looks cool? (Give up thinking) If you don't dig into the details, the daily life between the male and female protagonists is actually quite interesting. I can't comment on the battle (I haven't read any articles about how the battle is exciting). It would be better if it was pure love (maybe). The daily content is very good and has a warm feeling. To sum up, "Being better than what is lacking is better than being below." In daily writing, fighting is better, and in fighting writing, daily life is better. Fairly good In view of the comparison with other novels of the same type (magical girl), I think it is above average, and I rate it 8.5+ (Currently). You can read it in the book shortage. If you are interested in the subject of magical girls, I recommend it. For the author, uh, I hope it can continue to be updated. I generally support new writers and cannot "take things out of context." Don't be too fussy about some plot details. At least they must be able to "justify themselves" and don't have "missing settings" or "left and right brains fighting each other". It's ok. Come on [Like]

Right! This is what magical girls should be like! Psychological committee member, I'm so excited, oh oh oh, so excited ╰🤓╯ (dancing) Oh oh oh, so excited ╰🤓╯ (dancing) oh oh oh, so great ╰🤓╯ (dancing) oh oh oh, so great ╰🤓╯ (hands dancing) Oh oh, dance so hard╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh, dance so hard ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh, dance so hard ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh, dance so hard ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh, yes Oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) Oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) Oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) Oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (dancing) Oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, it's so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance) Oh oh oh, so good ╰🤓╯ (Dance)

Order the author to update [angry] The author does not write multi-person emotional dramas. First of all, Chapters 84 to 85 are not jealous at all. They are a group invasion-style moral kidnapping + a declaration of sovereignty without identity. The protagonist clearly takes full advantage of himself: he takes in vulnerable groups, actively avoids suspicion, and does nothing extraordinary. As a result, he is blocked and questioned by three people who are not qualified to take care of him. He is actually a bit "timid and doesn't know how to answer." If a normal person is so offended, he should have said, "This is my home. Do you have any control over who I want to live in?" And then close the door and see the guests away.

To be honest, there is no need for you, the author, to work so hard. Give yourself a little buffer space. There is no need to keep forcing yourself to update intensively for the sake of fans. After all, we hope that quality is greater than quantity. This is my immature idea. Okay, I'm done. It's been quite a while since this chapter was released. Are you done? After the break, please update as soon as possible! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this! [Eat melon]

The disadvantage is that I like to use AI, and the advantages are abundant. And after looking at it for a long time, the corner of my mouth has almost reached the sky and is shoulder to shoulder with the moon.

Isn't that Susie the yellow-haired one, then Lucia is the blue-haired one, and then the other one is the pink-haired one, a classic trio, one is stupid, the other is cunning, and the other is pure and natural, it's not bad

The main plot has not been sorted out yet. It is best to give the male protagonist a goal, otherwise he will appear to have no independent opinion and cannot create an image. Now the male protagonist seems to be pushed by several female protagonists. Later, whether it is battle or daily life, an incident can be made, and then the male protagonist will strengthen his determination to protect the beauty around him. Of course, I'm just making a suggestion. Currently, I quite like this magical girl book. Finally, please come on, author, for more chapters

Passion is in the sky, freedom is extremely difficult to be proud of. [Angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

I like Xiaohei, but the threesome is a bit annoying

It's just so-so, it's a daily novel, nothing classic.

It's okay. To be honest, the writing of this hidden line is a bit of a failure, that is, when I am an undercover agent, and the overt line is about daily life, it is okay. In summary, I am a slow-moving person. I can read it without saying anything, pretending to be a slap in the face, but it is very bland. To me, it is also a different kind of refreshing article.

It's so good. I haven't seen such a good magical girl story in a long time.

Jiahao in the class next door has become Carabi

The pride is in the sky, I am so proud, I can kill the time if I am bored

The first part is pretty good, but after the dream part, things suddenly become fragmented and the pace suddenly becomes faster. If you don't plan to read it all at once, I don't particularly recommend watching the second part. The first part is really good and I can give it four stars.

It looks pretty good, I'll give it 4 stars first and then look at it Let Minato live to see it

It's so pretty, come and take a look too [makes a face]

It's very delicious, but it's a pity that it's not refreshing, but overall it's still very good. I will continue to read it as long as I keep updating frequently.

Yes, it's a good book among magical girl novels. The author has many updates, but it's not enough to read.

The pride is in the sky. But magical girls are fun to eat. It's getting boring from now on. Then nourish it.

I'm about to die, really, sweet heart [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]