Naruto: Building a Clan from the Warring States Era

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong⚡. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. Luffy fought with Ultraman for Rem, and the whole episode was full of light. But Pikachu's skin is indeed too thick. If Yasuo hadn't blocked the 100,000 volts with a wind wall, and then followed it with a steel-cutting flash, this wave of turtle Qigong would have been interrupted. But I care more about Lin Daiyu's words to the Avengers: "Brother Baoyu, are these weirdos wearing leather jackets here to rob the Grand View Garden?", Which shows that Lin Daiyu's words to Iron Man⚡ are flying in the sky and unable to come down. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. Fighting scenes feel like you are there

I'll go, the emperor's kindness is not over yet, it's so good, it's a battle~We are hopeless~[laughing evilly] In harem stories, the protagonist is powerful enough and can be said to be the most powerful one after Madara, Hashirama and Raidai. There are many emotional scenes but he is the most interesting. There are also passions and farming, but they are secondary. After all, it takes time to develop the economy and one's own strength, unlike other invincible articles that have not yet reached Boruto and directly destroyed their combat power. At present, there are few descriptions of passion and farming, and it may take time to develop, but in fact, the author did not skip the middle timeline to write "" [laughter] So pretty! ! ! The best Naruto fanfic. Please keep the pace and continue to lead us to charge. The characteristic of this book is the rhythm.

The farming part is amazing, but the setting adaptation of the Uchiha Security Department and the trend of the comment area are questionable. This novel is wonderful in its description of the development of farming and the outbreak of the First Ninja War. The process of the rise of the protagonist's power is logically solid, and I highly approve of most of the early content. But as I approached the latest chapter, the author's adaptation of the setting of the Uchiha Security Department aroused my discomfort. What was even more disappointing was the one-sided tone in the comment section. In the original work, handing over the police force to Uchiha was an act of trust given by the second generation to appease and show goodwill. The author changed it to "Uchiha took advantage of Sarutobi Hiruzen's unsteady footing before the lion opened his mouth." This in itself is understandable as a fan adaptation. However, the comment section used this to shout that "Uchiha are arrogant and will destroy themselves", and even ridiculed them for "lack of ambition", which is really biased. A blood successor family joining forces is enough to suppress the entire village. Wanting to compete for the position of Hokage is a normal ambition that matches its strength. The real problem is that Uchiha is arrogant and emotionally unstable, and other families are unwilling to accept his future rule. Preferring to recommend Sarutobi Hiruzen to maintain stability - this is a logical choice based on the balance of interests of each family, rather than simply and crudely blaming everything on Uchiha as "deserted" or "greedy". An excellent fan work should delve into this complex game of people's hearts and political trade-offs, rather than following the stereotypes of the original work and simplifying the tragedy into a moral judgment on one party. The above are all generated by me using AI to express what I mean.

The writing is very good. It's not the protagonist of an invincible novel. The protagonist is probably a strong person in the film industry now, but his character is still very high. He doesn't look like a loser, but the leader of a country. He has a strong demeanor and is not the kind of protagonist who is busy and careless. This article is a harem story, with a Hyuga girl and two maids, and a Uzumaki girl who will be picked up after two years. The heroine is written in a three-dimensional way, not the same as the stallion story.

Let me tell you an objective fact first. The opening angle of the book is very strange. I think it has a lot of imagination. Then it's time to talk about the advantages. The writing style is very good and natural. It has a lot of imagination. It can be said that firstly, the biggest enemy is the newly established Konoha Village, which is interesting. Secondly, the pure power development flow has a refreshing feeling of watching farming. Thirdly, the first female protagonist who has appeared so far does not use a lot of space, but the character is well established. I did not see the later but I hope to have more highlights as the head wife. In just a few chapters, she is portrayed as brave and resourceful. As the leader, I think the protagonist fits the image of most ancient unification and founding emperors [face covering]. Come on, write it well and it will definitely be a clean stream of Naruto fan fiction.

Recently, there have been a lot of Naruto fanfics with themes of power building and political hegemony appearing on Tomato, which is quite a novel perspective. The setting of the protagonist in this article is quite innovative. Instead of following the traditional taijutsu, ninjutsu, senjutsu, and jinchūriki, he created a special chakra and created a second version of the puppetry. The new settings are reasonable compared to the original work and will not make it feel like a drama. The author can indeed be seen as an old reader of Naruto (even if he is not, he has studied the details of the original settings in depth). Of the characters that have already appeared, very few actually appear in the original work. Of course, this is also because the time period in the article is taken too early, and the ancestors of many plot characters are still in the state of fertilized eggs. The original characters are also in line with the intuition of the ninja world, and there are no inexplicable character entries. The author does not maintain a sense of "reverence" for the forces in the original work (for example, in One Piece, he clearly has the conditions, but he resolutely refuses to accept some characters from the Straw Hats. Of course, it is not about accepting girls, but that he can recruit Chopper as a doctor but does not recruit people. This kind of functional recruitment), such as pulling In order to relocate the entire family, the protagonist will do it as long as the protagonist needs it, and then deduce the subsequent plot development, instead of forcibly creating a development direction that is completely consistent with the original work (of course, the protagonist is not strong enough to completely change the historical development of the original work). The author is quite bold in this regard. I personally like this kind of farming competition that has its own rhythm, and there are no obvious poisonous points in the places I have seen so far, but there is no guarantee that it will be suitable for everyone. Maybe some people just like to quickly bulldoze the world. All I can say is that if you keep the current pace, it will definitely be a fanfic worth reading.

The writing is really good. The Aburame and Giganta persimmons are pretty good too. I think the author could collect the Blood Pond group, which would also be a powerful force. He could collect more different ninja clans and hollow out Konoha. Also, the protagonist should develop the ninjutsu of immortality, and the Rasengan can also be used. Come on, the protagonist's ninjutsu changes in various forms and properties. I hope to accept more psychic beasts, sea, land, and air psychic beasts, functional psychic beasts, artificial psychic beasts, and accept more civilians. It is best to let Orochimaru be born in the Kingdom of Darkness in the future. Come on, please support me with five stars. It's too watery. Why are there so many emotional scenes later?

It's okay, because the author hasn't stopped updating ➕ One star, the overall rating is around three stars It's too watery. It keeps writing about the daily life of the protagonist and his women.

The writing is very interesting, and the setting is thoughtful. It is considered a unique niche track in Naruto fan fiction. It does not count as a small opening, and there is no such thing as a fusion bloodline or a first-born bloodline. The writing is quite interesting. I hope the author will work hard to update it and don't stop.

There are many heroines in the harem. Ccb does not procrastinate. Develop your own small country. Currently, Nanao is defeated and a peace contract is signed. Male protagonist's combat power: Puppet Master. Can create puppet life. The main body strength is ordinary shadow. The puppet has strong combat power. How should I put it, it's a bit uncomfortable if the main body's combat power cannot be improved. It looks a bit frustrating. Other places are ok. When I don't write about improving my strength, I keep talking about love... The plot is getting boring.