The Grand Order Begins in Fz!

The author's writing is pretty good, and the updates are stable. It's my favorite style. I've finished reading the FZ chapter so far. I'm looking forward to the following chapters. I hope my comments and reminders can provide you with some motivation. Come on⛽

Except for Sakura, I think everything is pretty good. To make up for your regrets, just make up for it.

It looks good. The author is not OOC. There is no female character who inexplicably likes to label disgusting people. The protagonist is not a virgin, but very kind. The story is also original.

It feels pretty good. Who is the servant summoned in the fifth battle? Is it possible to have Athena with the sword R spirit base? 🤔

So far, as mentioned in the review, the plot of the protagonist is passable, but the time travel is a bit wrong. Sakura can be saved early, but she doesn't care about it later, but she gets stuck at this point. She is saved, but not completely saved, leaving readers dissatisfied. But it doesn't matter ㅍ_ㅍ The main thing is to see whether the author can grasp it later. If it can be stable, it will be okay. If it is not, it will collapse.

The author must persevere. I want to read Singularity and Lostbelt. Don't be crazy about it. The first few books I read were all about being crazy as soon as they were written. It took a lot of effort to find a novel that suits my appetite.

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This is a good Xingyue fanfic!

The plot is logically coherent, the characters are restored, and the writing is fluent. The shortcoming is that it is a bit lacking 🤭🤭🤭

Very good, keep going