Crown Designation Starting from Fz!

The author's writing is pretty good, and the updates are stable. It's my favorite style. I've finished reading the FZ chapter so far. I'm looking forward to the following chapters. I hope my comments and reminders can provide you with some motivation. Come on⛽

Except for Sakura, I think everything is pretty good. To make up for your regrets, just make up for it.

It looks good. The author is not OOC. There is no female character who inexplicably likes to label disgusting people. The protagonist is not a virgin, but very kind. The story is also original.

It feels pretty good. Who is the servant summoned in the fifth battle? Is it possible to have Athena with the sword R spirit base? [Think]

So far, as mentioned in the review, the plot of the protagonist is passable, but the time travel is a bit wrong. Sakura can be saved early, but she doesn't care about it later, but she gets stuck at this point. She is saved, but not completely saved, leaving readers dissatisfied. But it doesn't matter ㅍ_ㅍ The main thing is to see whether the author can grasp it later. If it can be stable, it will be okay. If it is not, it will collapse.

Nice fanfic

Very good, keep going

The plot is logically coherent, the characters are restored, and the writing is fluent. The shortcoming is that it is a bit lacking [laughing][laughing][laughing]

This is a good Xingyue fanfic!

Not bad, well written.

It's nice to see, but there are not many people there. The author should not starve to death. ()

Not bad, very comfortable to watch

It's okay, keep working hard

Not bad, quite interesting

Yes, you have your own logic

Good luck to the author!

Hao Chi, it's not enough. Come again. Otherwise, I will raise a book (it shouldn't be like that)🤓☝

It looks like a pretty good style article

The writing is very good, and it would be even better if it can be updated more frequently. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you

It's a very interesting story. I'm looking forward to the appearance of the doctor. Also, is it really okay to write that Yehe is the BOSS? I can't think of how to win.

It's a pretty good fate book. The protagonist's setting is quite interesting. It's worth reading.

I think it's okay among the ones I've seen

Look, it's quite nice.

Can the author add some work on the Star Dome Railway? It's all linked together.

Can I write a volume about strange fakes later? Looking forward to it[shy][shy]

It was so good that I watched it all night.

It looks good. I love watching it. Keep working hard.

You can take a look, there's nothing poisonous about it

Okay, not bad,

Come on, it looks good, more to come