A Guide to Cultivation of Immortal Sect in Small Towns
小镇做题家仙门修炼指南
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- Fantasy Romance
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Explore more →Group Portrait, I Want to See the Group Portrait, the Noisy and High-Spirited Young Man
I want to read a book like "Spring Comes Again on the Branches of a Sick Branch".
Immortal, I Want the Ultimate Immortal, a Book That Truly Deserves the Word "Immortal"
What is the purpose of seeking immortality? For that eternal life! For the journey of the great road, the top of the great road!
Group Portrait, Group Portrait, Group Portrait! I Need High-Quality Group Portraits
I want to read a book like "Spring Comes Again on the Branches of a Sick Branch". Geniuses from all over the world gather together to fight against invincible opponents and create brilliance in their own time.
There Are Not Many Group Portraits of Tomatoes. I Want to Read a Group Portrait Article. Please Recommend the Book.
Is It so Difficult to Have a Female Channel Without CP That There Is No Masterpiece?
No CP, no CP, no CP! ! ! Similar to "Binded to the famous minister system, I disguised myself as a man in ancient times"!
Are There Any Non-CP Heroine Novels Similar to Yu Xunge, Shang Yechu, and Qi Xu?
I want to read a book similar to "She After 208 Actors in One Year (Shang Yechu)".
I'm looking for a story like Lin Du or all the villains, a story that focuses on group portraits (not okay). There are no intrigues in the sect or team, they are all young people, high-spirited, and growing up together🎊Ask a question
What I Want Is a Group Portrait, Not a Group Favorite, Not a Junior Sister and Senior Brother.
I want to read a book like "Sister, stop pretending, the whole sect will be strict with you". Not men and women, men and women, not males competing, not females competing, but a group of men and women from the same sect or different sects cultivating immortality.
Nowadays, the Articles About Cultivating Immortals Are so Embarrassing. the Articles About Women Are Always Competing with Each Other.
Is there any cp, fresh and refined female channel to cultivate immortality, no female competition, no female competition, no female competition! No cp, no cp, no cp, no cp, no cp! Have the world in mind, don't always think about falling in love
Is It Hopeless to Cultivate Immortality?
I Like Non-CP, Please Make Sure There Is No CP, Otherwise I Will Report It
I want to read a book like "The system gives me immortality, and I will eventually become invincible while I'm alive". Save the children! I am short of books and want to read articles without cp! I would like to read the articles you recommend. --——I would like to thank strangers here
CP-Free Articles Worth Reading
What a cool article without CP! Both men and women are welcome~~ The point is it's fun!
A Book That Looks Ordinary but Is a Masterpiece
Some books are praised, while some masterpieces are missed or buried. However, everyone has different preferences. Age, environment, and personality are all influencing factors. Everyone has their own masterpiece 9.9.
Nowadays, the Female Videos That Cultivate Fairy Tales Are so Embarrassing. Isn't There Something Fresh and Refined?
No cp, no cp, no cp, no CP, no CP, no CP, no CP, no CP, no CP, no CP, no CP, no CP, no CP, no CP, must be no CP
No CP! ! ! ! If You Know What No CP Means, Please Recommend It😐
If you want a female channel with no CP, lone wolf or group portrait is fine. Even if you want a female channel without CP, you don't want ambiguous ones!
Group Portrait Article, Vigorous Friendship Is No Worse Than Love
I want to watch something like "The Young Junior Sister is Clearly Super Strong But Too Much", where all the members of the Qing Dynasty gathered together in a competition. They would bicker over trivial matters on weekdays, but when big things happened, they stood on the same front, skipped classes together, practiced together, and were punished together. They didn't want the White Lotus heroine.
Group Portrait, Group Portrait, Group Portrait! the Team's! ! Many Protagonists! !
I want to read a book similar to "Star Campus: A Team of Five Rushing Forward". There are multiple protagonists, forming a team, good coordination, strong, don't be the kind that always misunderstands, be trustworthy, there are as many books as this! !
Is There Really No Heroine Who Has a Very Attractive Personality Apart from Her Appearance?
The Meaning of a Group Portrait Is That Everyone Is the Protagonist
I want a group portrait
I'm Looking for Some Other Articles That Book Friends After the Invasion of Cat Game Can Still Read.
I want to see something similar to "Game Invasion". A grand world view, rich and three-dimensional characters, extremely high moral aesthetics, elegant dialogues and narration. After reading this novel, I can no longer follow any of the other novels. It is difficult to switch from luxury to frugality. It must be equal to this one
Load! Liquor! Find! Song! ! !
I would like to read a book similar to "The Game Comes: I Want This, This, and This". Needless to say, everyone who understands the value of our Zaijiu Judgment - Zaijiu Xunge :)
The All-Female Team Has No CP. Please, Please Save the Children. There Is a Shortage of Books😭
Orthodox Immortality Writing! No System! No CP! Female Channel! Don't Be Born Again!
I want to read a book like "Continuously pretending to be dead, I became the heart-throb emperor".





































































































Hello dear readers and grandmothers! The author of this article is about daily cultivation of immortality in school. The world view is relatively large and the pace is slow. I hope you won't be impatient QAQ. The first thirteen chapters are all about the heroine who comes from the countryside to the city. After the thirteenth chapter, she officially starts studying in the academy to cultivate immortality. Those who feel that the progress is too slow can skip to the back! No CP. The heroine is a real and atypical heroine. She has a golden finger but she still has to go to school seriously and do her homework diligently. There is a group portrait, and everyone is mean-mouthed [note] Daily update! I will never ask for leave. If you have any questions or suggestions, you can leave a comment under this post and everyone will read it [Salute] Love everyone.
This book is really, really good-looking, very good-looking The first point is that the wording in this book is very strict. It is all about Taoist ancestors, young people, and there will be no use of neutral words. The second point is that the female content is 99%, and each character is very well created. I like the special effects and the group portraits created by the author. The writing is really good. The third point is that the plot is very humorous. Everyone is so interesting. When they argue, it makes people feel trance. This is really another world that really exists. It has a strong sense of being alive. The fourth point is that the writing style is good and the writing is very comfortable! ! I think the author was a little put off by the title. I clicked in and didn't expect it to be so good. It's really a masterpiece. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I'm going to follow the author's other novels!
241. Let me comment again. There is no need to say more about this book about loving a daughter. There are no words about disobeying a daughter. The characters are three-dimensional and really beautiful🥰 I really like the down-to-earth and steady character of our heroine Daniel, she is simply the light of healing. Xiao Lang is so reliable, as long as she is around, I feel that everything is done. ರ_ರ When the cold-faced cute representative comes, just get out of the way ◉‿◉ Gongdu young lady is so delicious, support our eldest sister Xiaoqiu is so mysterious. I'm really looking forward to her story. This is how raspberries make laxatives more popular It's no wonder that if you continue to deceive our honest boss, she will be heartbroken. A team of six, you are the best [crying]
I have sent a gift, I am very considerate, I hope the author can update more. I really like this book. It was many years ago that I didn't realize it. I especially like martial arts novels, and I don't mind watching the male protagonist without any plot. What I yearn for is the scene of youthful spirit and scolding Fang Qiu. In the past, there were too many novels that charmed men. If you want to read this kind of novel, you have to accept that there are many male characters. Gradually, I became wiser. Even now, I only watch nvwu and nv-oriented movies, but I will try to read as few of these genres as possible because I have been tainted by my previous impressions. I think that if they are about rivers, lakes, temples, and can't be separated from men, I don't want to read them. I didn't expect this book to be such a big surprise to me. As soon as it appears, whether it's a royal family or a woman-trafficker, it's a woman by default, which gives people a lot of peace of mind. Each protagonist is so lovable, and they are all high-spirited teenagers. It is so easy to charm a woman, or show a real woman, without describing her "beauty" and focusing on her strength! I have also read similar books, which are very interesting, but there are always many male characters, and the ratio of women to men is 1:1 at most. This book is really good. The main characters are all women, and occasionally a few men appear, which does not affect the reading. There are very few descriptions (selfishly, of course, I hope the less the better haha). I hope the author will work hard and update! I will continue to pay attention~
It's so good-looking! ! ! It's so heartwarming and I want to cry. T I see that there are more women than men now, it's okay, it's okay, there's no insulting words about women, it's okay. The heroine is very good! The interaction is also very good! The world view is quite new and feels very beautiful! I like this world of cultivating immortals!
The writing is very, very good. I really like the protagonist and my friends. Everyone is so interesting. The female-to-male ratio is 82 to 37. The female-to-passerby ratio is 64 to 55. The writing is very good and I like it very much. The ratio between men and women is eighty-two to seventy-three. Wrong wording. It looks good. If it doesn't look good, it will be criticized or not evaluated.
It is a very natural fairy tale that I want. There are a high proportion of women and the author pays great attention to the wording. Many of the ideas are very creative. The system of ascending to immortality is self-designed, and overall it is a very interesting group of images. The author may be a medical student, but the protagonist has an inexplicable obsession with medicine. Anyway, it's beautiful, warm and plain but not boring. A good-looking group portrait of women, the protagonist looks vaguely like that, the big cow is honest, honest, and submissive (this kind of protagonist is rare for one reason, and the second reason is that it is difficult to write something cute enough to keep the audience reading, but this article does it). Wu Jiu is so handsome, he has thousands of faces, he is strong and tough, he has extremely charming political qualities, and he has a light glass feeling. He doesn't seem to occupy the position of a good friend, but in fact, he is such a deep-seated person who was rescued by a big cow at once. In his heart, it feels like a crack in the glass and a fine line is slowly unfolding. There is something very mysterious and charming. It seems that she is not in the protagonist group, but she is actually the protagonist of another dimension. This woman can also open a book by herself. The most interesting thing is actually "Qiu Chen Xing", the full text of "Qiu Chen Xing", in which the poisonous god predicts the true identity of a person with a loose mouth and the best sense of relaxation. The name is also very interesting. Anyone who has made friends knows that the most valuable thing is actually the sincere, generous, aimless and cheerful friend beside you (Boss, I really can't remember the name). This is the first time I can get the cold-faced cuteness, ah, so reliable, safe, cool and cute (oh, again, anonymous). My favorite is Li Chan, who will revitalize medical education. She has the ability to act, the political quality, the courage to reform, the vision, the outstanding temperament, the respect for talents, and the ability to correct mistakes. The most mysterious chess piece sister in this article still has no idea what her purpose is, but this way of writing is so powerful. Wait a minute, whoever doesn't remember, I'll add it when I think of it. At least this kind of character description and serious portrayal is expected to be widely popularized in female videos among female protagonists. They have different personalities and backgrounds, but they can get along well with each other very smoothly. (Of course, if there are conflicts between female characters in female videos, other than those related to men, everything else is acceptable). Apart from the characters, the plot has a very comfortable feel and does not highlight a templated process. In fact, the current fairy tales about the competition between sects are very similar to those between schools. It is more natural for the author to point out it directly. I am a serious reader, and seeing a good and serious novel is no less than eating delicious food. If anyone views this comment, thank you for watching. I hope you will support the wider development of female group portraits in female videos. Thank you!
The main cast is all female, so cool! The vocabulary is gender-friendly, so cool! The plot is compact, the language is funny, the characters are well controlled, and the random comments are even more hilarious. The main character and her friends are very charming people.
First of all, the characters are described very well, and each person's personality is very three-dimensional. No matter whether they are good, bad, big, small, long, round (?), You can clearly feel that everyone lives in another world and is a real person. The protagonists are also good kids, and everyone has their own pursuits and goals. I am very satisfied with the fact that there are more girls than boys. After all, this is a female channel! The plot is also unconventional, with daily life in the front and the main plot slowly entering later. I especially like daily life! It's the immortal version of college life! It tastes particularly delicious, and you can feel the warmth from it in your daily life. The main plot is also slowly extending, and I'm looking forward to it. I won't spoil it if I don't say more. There are no words that insult women, as you can see from Pao Pao's book reviews. The last is the description of the scene that I particularly like! ! ! ! ! They are very professional, powerful, amazing, great, noble, sacred, and solemn. The scene descriptions and environment descriptions are all about presenting a world in front of you that will not leave you imagining and make you feel like you are really "watching" their story. Shocking and delicious, if you see this you must try it. Originally I was not very fond of the subject of cultivating immortals, but one day I suddenly saw it on the homepage and I had the urge to click in and take a look, and then I felt a different kind of feeling [shy][shy] Must try!
I solemnly swear to Grandma Daozu: It looks good! Really pretty! Let's talk about the writing style, wording, atmosphere, and world view of the author√ Let's talk about the heroine: Jiang Zhu, also known as Daniu [a master in the industry, a mastermind], a passerby, a medical practitioner, a transparent person, a rural person, a capybara, and a savior! Finally, this class of students is the best class I have ever taught! Youthful spirit, chance encounter, classmate and best friend, life and death acquaintance👍👍👍 Good kids, all good kids. My heart warms when I see it, my youth is back! Let's keep it together, let's keep it together, let's go all the way with different opinions! ! ! White hole! The white one is waiting for you tomorrow! ! 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
It's so good-looking, I'm scratching my head every day and waiting for updates... The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, with their own personalities, but they don't make people feel stereotyped. The characters are very energetic and close to life. They are very vivid. I love every one of the protagonists! Moreover, there are dandy-type and uninhibited and regal-type female characters. I have been waiting for twenty years to see my eyes light up in the first second and fall in love in the next second. It is so rare and rare (wiping away tears) that the female characters are about 90%. The male characters are basically villains, buffoons/passers-by, etc. You don't need to care about them. The author also avoids them. The awareness of disobedient women's poems will be revised when the readers remind them. It is very good ~ the plot is smooth and dense, and there is basically a rest time after each intense copy, and it will be interspersed with excellent descriptions of scenery. It is really rare to see serious descriptions of scenery in general online articles. It's really good. The dungeons are very exciting, some are mainly about fighting and some are mainly about adventure/eeriness, they are all interesting, and the author is very good at writing horror atmosphere (horror novel lovers are ecstatic), but it is very clever, so that it will not make people feel that they are overpowering, and they can grasp the degree of keeping people following the plot without being too scared. The daily chapter is also written very warmly. I really enjoyed watching the six protagonists go to the countryside. I wish there would be more chapters where everyone plays and talks together. It would be even better if we could catch fish, catch shrimps and grill sweet potatoes together (I pray jpg.) I always feel so nervous about entering the main story. I am looking forward to it!
It's really super invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹I like group portraits of women🥹🥹🥹No cp, no insults, very comfortable and refreshing to look at! ! ! ! Like! ! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 Give me a rating! ! ! ! It doesn't make sense to get less than nine points! ! ! ! !
Five stars for the main cast of all women! The whole thing has a bit of an ancient stream-of-consciousness cultivating feel. In addition, with the change of imperial power, the power of various immortal families clashed. Now the main line is studying in the academy, interspersed with branch lines in various regions, thus leading to various mysteries. The personalities of each character in the protagonist group and the emotions between them are highlighted and heated up in this experience, which is really charming. The writing is witty and humorous, and the characters' quarrels with each other are very interesting. Moreover, it can be seen that the author has a high level of literary literacy, and the writing is very consistent with the background of "cultivating immortality". It feels like it should be a long novel, and the world view is very interesting. The author is carefully shaping this world. Every time he goes to a new place, he describes the cultural landscape in great detail. There are magnificent buildings unique to the world of immortality and shops that are similar to reality. Generally speaking, it is grand but full of fireworks. The female to male ratio is about 73/82.
The rating is only 8.2 Now. What a pity. I saw it on the recommendation list before but thought it was a routine fairy tale, but this book is really different. There are many female group portraits in the book, and there are many bright and charming female characters. What I like most about this book is that many people's names are neutral, powerful and meaningful, rather than stereotypes at first glance. It is the best name book among all the books I have read. The characters in the plot are well described. I don't know why, watching them study and fight together in Changdu, the writing is obviously very funny and lighthearted, but as a viewer, I feel a touch of sadness. I hope their youthful friendship will remain unchanged and they will all grow up slowly🥺
I really like the gags between the main characters, the author is so good at writing. I feel that this is the most suitable for the protagonists of the online novel to get along with each other. The other writing methods are obviously imitating anime. There is a class difference within the protagonist who is not a lone wolf, whether she is a female character or a male character. The other protagonists are just like the opening screen, pretending to be part of the plot. But the protagonist in this book seems to have a filter of mediocrity. He is obviously excellent and special, and everyone around him can see it, but the protagonist is very calm and indifferent, making the readers almost forget the excellence of the protagonist. In fact, the protagonist has already been a man of the hour. What I like most is the interaction between the main characters. Although I use the term "protagonist group" to describe the core characters, their encounters and interactions with each other are as natural as the author's unintentional intervention, as if there is no design arrangement. Every character is impressive.
The rating is so low that I can't read it and make a long review. It's already tied. There are no big surprises so far and it seems that there are no rn words. The author's writing is very interesting and always makes two comments. Hahaha. The protagonist studied medicine in his previous life and is still a medical practitioner in this life. Hahahahahaha. He has deep resentment. The main supporting characters are all women, but occasionally there will be two men in the plot, but I personally don't think it's a surprise: Because first of all, there is a brother and sister in it, and the younger sister's character is actually a kendo genius and a cold master (but in fact he is cold-faced and cute). I think her brother can only be regarded as an external emotional intelligence of the younger sister, helping her to block some human relationships, because the younger sister is completely real. The relationships between those who are very powerful are all for the girl. I find it quite cool. Generally, the positions of the two are reversed on male videos. The girl has many more plots than the brother. The girl is so powerful that "others will think that she is bragging when she says this, but what she says is absolutely true." Secondly, there is an old-style long-haired man who is misanthropic from the animal cultivator. He pays great attention to appearance, loves to dress up, and diets. I like this kind of character who has a vase appearance but does not hold back women. Besides, he only appears occasionally. The supporting female characters in it are simply too diverse and delicious. The story of each supporting character can be written as a short article. The dandy young lady has a calm heart, the princess with high emotional intelligence but has deep thoughts in the city, Xiaoqiu with a poisonous tongue and very courageous (I will directly tell you when the above two are yin and yang) They had a fight), there was Wenren who was a bit silly, and Xiao Li, a top student who was initially dissatisfied with the protagonist but later felt proud that the protagonist brought honor to the medical field... The only shortcoming is that it is too little. I wrote too little. I finished reading it in one day. I hope the author will add tens of thousands more words.
The important roles and most of the supporting characters are female, and a few villains are male. No Confessions, the female characters are very well portrayed, vivid and powerful, the plot has a bit of humor, and it warms people's hearts. The system of cultivating immortals is very novel. It integrates the modern university mechanism. At first, I was not used to this setting. Later, I found that this setting does not conflict with the system of cultivating immortals. It integrates very well and makes it more interesting. The plot is also very good, not a mindless novel, and the writing style is also very good, with a very visual sense.
The grassroots female protagonists have a growing trend and tend to be group portraits. Most of the main characters are women, and the ratio of women to men in secondary roles (background roles) tends to be even. It is a mixture of elements such as "feudal male superiors/imperial royal family/antique cyber technology/socialist cultivation of immortals/self-flow fantasy", etc., And tends to a world view of "equality between men and women", so some plot narratives and individual wordings/supporting characters are still based on their own standards. The author's writing style is very good, and some of the jokes are very humorous. The protagonist Daniel (yes!) Is the center, and the other female characters are the radius. He is not stingy with their coenzyme descriptions and personal highlights. The names are very nice while fitting the characters. Every female character with a name, a surname, and a role basically has a distinctive personality, which makes people like it more. Seeing that the shortcomings do not hide the good points so far, I still recommend it. I hope that there will be more and more articles about women like this, and that the authors will write better and better.
It is a very interesting novel about cultivating immortals. The world view setting is very interesting and novel. The characters of the protagonist group are also very interesting. The jokes are dense but not vulgar. There is a clear line to support the whole text. The daily description is not too scattered, but it is very warm and rhythmic. It is my TOP so far this year. The rating is a bit low. In terms of quality, it should be above 9 points. It may be because of the name. I hesitated when I saw the name at first before clicking in, but it is really, really good-looking! After reading it, everyone's ratings are all five stars, which is a rare unanimous high score. The author's writing style and rhythm are excellent! The current low rating may be due to too few chapters or a small number of people rating it, but I believe this quality will definitely become popular! Big cheers for the author!
It's very interesting. It's rare for Tomato to find a fairy tale with good writing style. I've seen too many articles that are full of rhetoric or written by primary school students. I was pleasantly surprised to see this one. What's even more surprising is that there are really many female characters. It's not the cliche of n boys and 1 girl. The images of female characters are also diverse. I went back several times to see if they were girls, but it seemed like I was blinded [face covering] It's great! It's been a long time since I've followed a serialized novel. I like to read more to keep myself updated. As a result, every time I finish reading the updated chapters, I have to go back and read the previous ones again. It's so good! Totally the best all-female novel I've ever read on Tomato. The different types of female characters are portrayed very well. They are not restricted by stereotyped female images at all, nor are they forced to make concave settings in order to abandon stereotypes. Each character looks like a real girl in life, or a living female character that I think should appear in this worldview. It's so good that I can no longer read other female-oriented novels. I just hate that each reader can only rate it once. This novel should get a 9.9!
Initial evaluation, very good The writing is good, the pace is good, not draggy, and the writing is clean and crisp. Women are better than men The male-female ratio is good, except for the dean and the elders, 1:1, and the other supporting characters are about 7:3. Most of the degrading words have been changed, some are bad luck (make good use of search This title and the beginning are likely to attract readers like me who love to watch growth. It reminded me of the female college of cultivating immortals next door. This book is more relaxed and humorous. That dragon appeared, and the heroine became uninteresting after being involved in a big incident (a lot of people should like it) The heroine is surrounded by a circle of people. Although there is an explanation for the reason, it still makes me feel a bit baffled (maybe it's because I don't like Laijiu's heartthrob very much)
A very good group portrait! Let's talk about the writing style first. The author's writing style is really great. He is not a novice at all. The writing style keeps up with the plot, especially the description of the high spirits and different appearances of the young people. It is not too frequent and cumbersome, it is just right. The words are also very good, such as heroic spirit and sharp muscles💪The girls written are very powerful! 👍And the author is very careful in choosing names that sound nice, such as Wen Renshu, Liang Gongdu, Qiuchenxing, Biejianshan, etc. Oh, yes. And the words are not insulting to women. I have read more than 30 chapters so far, which is really good. This book has great potential. Jiang Zhu (the heroine) is an I person. She has a slight feeling of being smooth. She thinks she is a little transparent, but in fact she is a link that connects her companions together! Then there is Wen Renshu, who is simply an enthusiastic puppy! Very cute, and a social cow. Qiu Chenxing is a bit lazy, while Gong Yilang is simply cold-faced and cute, and is very nice to the heroine. Liang Gongdu is a bit naughty. (The above are all girls) The plot is also very good. It can be seen that the author wants to show a large world view, which is still being slowly revealed. Some of the descriptions are quite interesting. For example, in the world of cultivating immortals, there are also Wusan, scalpers, elevators, taxis, etc. Hahahaha, come on, author! Very good 👍
This book is really good to read. It is slow-paced and life-oriented, and the daily bickering between the protagonists is really funny. Our Jiang Zhu, Daniel, she is really close to ordinary people like us, she may be scared, but she is also very tenacious at critical moments. The other members of the protagonist group also have their own styles. Let's talk about the daily bickering between Liang Gongdu and Qiu Chenxing. The two people's mouths are like control tools. Now I have seen the Xianmen Competition, which is really exciting. Sister Chenxing still manages to attract sacks. Because I prefer to follow serialized novels, and when I read this series, the author was really good at writing at the end of the chapter, like a little hook that kept attracting me. Author, can you please update more, please...=థ౪థ....
It's very interesting. It's true that my worldview is different from the general fairy tales. There aren't so many things about grabbing treasures and killing people. It's mainly about studying in the academy. Moreover, this self-created medical treatment system is interesting. I also want to see how the heroine will combine modern medicine and immortality in the future, and use modern medical knowledge to help check the body and cure diseases. I feel that the heroine will definitely be a big boss in medical repair in the future. It's just that the pacing is really slow, with more than 100 chapters being the end of the first school year. But I can slowly describe the friends next to the heroine, and the shaping is really good. The ratio of women to men is very friendly, and women can basically be the default. A very good female novel.
Without it, I would definitely give five stars to my better writing style. The choice of words and sentences makes it clear that the writing style is not at the level of assembly-line online writing but at the level of online literary novels... I am particularly attracted to well-written novels. Although the plot of this novel is not particularly thrilling, and it is not one of the short stories that are most likely to become popular, but because of the author's writing skills, it is really solid, so the characters of the protagonist group are distinct and distinctive, and they even have their own cute exclusive jokes (this is called each protagonist group having a face). For me, online articles either have plots that open up my imagination or fit together so that I can enjoy the story, or they have to stand up the characters and make them relatable in my mind enough to create an emotion similar to "I recommend" - often many online articles can't do both, and can even only say that the one with a score of over 50 is considered a strength when they fail both subjects... …To achieve the first point, there are also many fast-food novels that I won't let me take the initiative to review and recommend, or the plot is rigorous and innovative but does not have literary polish, so I will not have the idea of re-reading; to achieve the second point, it really requires writing skills, so as long as I find that the author's writing is good, at least I can feel relieved about the character creation of this novel. Anyway, I'm following up. Thank you to the author for bringing you such an exquisite work. Stay tuned🥰
At first I thought it was a regular reading test article, but it turned out to be a campus adventure and comedy article. The author's writing is quite mature and he is very good at creating characters with different personalities. The "honest" heroine who is as emotionally stable as Capibala but will silently complain in her heart and explodes at critical moments is really interesting. Her mother and friends even don't appear much. The teachers also all have distinctive personalities that are impressive. I especially like the way the protagonists get together to talk cross talk, like putting different instruments together to play in harmony, and the chemical reaction explodes. I like the author's sense of humor so much, I really kept laughing hhhhh. The copy is very exciting, and there is suspense. I can read ten thousand more chapters of daily life on campus! The female to male ratio is very high, with an all-female troupe, all kinds of words and descriptions are very comfortable, and the author's thinking is also very progressive. Some of the traits that are stereotypically assigned to male characters are very well digested in female characters. Once again, I realize that the charm of a character does not have to be bound to gender at all. Looking forward to the follow-up~
The writing is quite good, but the rhythm is not very good. I got used to it slowly at first, and then suddenly, the pace picked up. After this rhythm passed, some inexplicable daily riddles and conspiracies will appear. I feel that the author's plotting is not very good. Of course, it may be foreshadowing, but foreshadowing makes people lose the desire to read further, so it cannot be considered a good foreshadowing. Although there are shortcomings, there are also advantages. The advantage is that the author listens to suggestions and the book is female-oriented. The creative characters are very interesting and everyone's personality is quite good. However, everyone's personality and performance are somewhat labeled, and the characters are not deep enough. But when I read the novel, it was enough. Summary: People who want to watch a slow-paced female-oriented film can watch it, but the author's grasp of the rhythm is not very good, so pay attention to screening. The writing for the author is quite good, the creativity is very good, and the story expression is good, but there is still room for improvement in writing skills, and the rhythm control and narrative need to be strengthened. I hope the author writes better and better and becomes a great writer one day. Although we are not destined for this book, maybe it will be the next book? Right [blowing kiss] Come on!
It's good. I paid attention to the use of some neutral words, but unfortunately there are still some reasons for taking the father's surname and the death of a woman. The social essence is still () (). There are more female characters, but there are still a few male characters. The plot has ups and downs. The most hilarious book, GaGaLe, the author is so good at silencing people. The writing is very good, the characters are very distinct, and each has its own way of making choices hahh. The protagonist also lives up to expectations and has a nickname. I don't know how many chapters to whip up hhh.
Good looking i is a genius heroine who has an incorrect understanding of herself + a carefree roommate who is smarter than e - a roommate with a poisonous tongue who is committed to becoming an alchemist who throws plants into the alchemy furnace to make messes and explodes + a playboy from a wealthy family + a dependent princess + a cold-faced and warm-hearted genius swordsman ++++ There are no low-intelligence villains among the current classmates, they are all good
It's not my first time to write a review and I won't beg for mercy... I'll just tell you what I can remember. First, the characters in this book are quite distinctive. Even the supporting characters whose names I can't remember can probably recall some general impressions. Not to mention the several protagonists, it can be said that they all leave a deep impression on readers. I think the ratio of women to men is 8:2. The men who appear are either cannon fodder, villains, or classic comedy characters (although I think there is no need for such comedy characters to be given to men?) Ah, but the roles of American soldiers can be given to men. The random cross-interactions between two protagonists are very cute. The categories include but are not limited to: confrontation road, everything is comfortable and self-explanatory, watching will make my body rejuvenate, cow cat and exorcist, etc... This is what a group portrait should be like. I said it was a group portrait, but after watching it, I didn't remember even a single character. ( So far, there has been no such thing as suddenly giving a lot of roles to men (some women will have this happen later, and I have seen mine clearance). I hope I won't change my review one day...