Is This Cultivation of Immortality? so Can I!

According to my many years of reading experience, this book is generally well written, but I just felt that the protagonist was too young (the entry level competition was only 8 years old) and felt that the writing was too calm (although it was a time travel, and the mental age is in his twenties). The same was true for the teammates, but I personally felt that it was a bit too calm for this age. The above is all my humble opinion, the author wrote it very well

You are a big professional in spreading sugar. Third brother, you are a scheming boy. Shengsheng, I hate that you are a piece of wood @ Strawberry Flavor Strawberry Bear

It deserves 5 stars, the world view is huge, the small details, etc. Are all handled very well, the writing is also very smooth, and the protagonist is also very enjoyable. I finally read the interesting article, and I feel that most of the people in the article are very good. This kind of group portrait article is the most delicious, and I haven't tasted any abuse yet. I seem to have read this novel many times before, why do I still like it so much now.

Shocking and delicious, I finished reading it so quickly. .

So pretty! ! I'm not saying it plainly. It's green. It's blue. It's purple. It's black. Teacher, why are you so good at writing ദ്ദി ü? It's wonderful to have partners fighting side by side. I really like this kind of ՞･∞･՞. Waiting for the follow-up updates. It's so beautiful🫶🏻😋

The second male protagonist has made relatively few appearances so far

Hee hee hee! ! ! Hey hey hey! ! ! Ouch! ! ! La la la la la! La la la la la! Look here! Look here! I'm going to speak! (Raises hand, makes fist) Ahem, this book is really great! Good! Look! Very! Good! Look!

It looks great, the little system is really cute

It's a pure novice's article. It's well written, but there are still many shortcomings. I can't stand it. Come on, the author! I hope my writing will get better and better

Beautiful, very beautiful! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It is not clear whether the wood crystal is absorbed into the body or used to fight Zhao's natal weapon. [What] [What] Haven't you got your natal weapon by the time you reach the golden elixir stage?

Super pretty! ! ! I love it so much

It looks great and will definitely be a hit!

Ahhhh! [Love] Please update more!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Okay, pretty good-looking

It's really special (I said a lot of compliments)

The world's aesthetics has declined ten thousand times since this novel didn't become popular.... It's really good🔥🔥🔥Everyone is so interesting🔥🔥🔥

It's very interesting. Please give me more encouragement from the author.

Looks good, Rainbow Dash is so cute, the cold-faced cuteness is the coolest

Look good, come on, I will always support you ヽ(๏~๏)ﾉ