Time travel + villain villain + robbery + women disguised as men + idol boy group + bullying + 1V1 + double cleansing + male protagonist rebirth + redemption + amnesia plot + selling oneself as a slave + GB
She dressed up as the evil captain of an idol boy band, disguised as a man, and robbed and bullied the cool young male protagonist.
The original protagonist had a miserable ending, and would be chopped into a stick by the male protagonist's own hands, leaving his body intact.
In order to save her life, she changed her mind, worked hard to save him, protected him tenderly, and prevented disaster for him.
Little did they know, the young male protagonist had already been reborn with the hatred of his previous life.
She thought it was redemption, but he just thought it was false love.
A redemption, but ultimately a wrong payment?
Reader comments
I clicked into this book last night when I was bored. I was attracted by the evil female character in the introduction from the beginning. I finally caught up with it this morning. Let me tell you my thoughts after reading it. I feel that the character design of the original protagonist "Su Jin" is really interesting (I like the evil female character very much, very bad but very lovable, and she is always in a superior state). I liked it before, but after the heroine replaced the original heroine, I don't like it very much, because I feel that the heroine is no longer in a superior state, and I don't understand why the heroine is so good to the male protagonist (because the female protagonist does not know that the male protagonist is reborn, if If you are afraid of repeating the tragic ending of the original protagonist, just don't do what the original protagonist did to the male protagonist. If you stay away from the male protagonist and save the life of the male protagonist's adoptive mother, the male protagonist will not have murderous intentions towards the female protagonist. But it feels like the female protagonist has done a lot of unnecessary things, and the heroine does not need to maintain the character and behavior of the original protagonist?) This novel is very interesting, and the writing feels OK, but I don't like the change in behavior after the replacement. Sometimes I really want to see the story of the male protagonist obeying the original master after being reborn. I think it will be very interesting [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] But it is still being serialized. I hope the subsequent plot will be better and I will continue to follow it.
Author, please stop making trouble, I can accept the rewrite [crying], please don't destroy Su Jin, okay?
I want to delete it but I can't bear to delete it. I feel that the last few pictures have tarnished the first 40 chapters. I'm not here to see Ai Nan. Goodbye, unless Su Jin comes back (the leading heroine in my mind)
A very unique book. The pull and constant threats and resistance between the original female protagonist and the male protagonist in the early stage are really tense. The characters are very distinct and the setting is also very novel.
Whether it's Su Jin's constant pressure on the male protagonist, or the male protagonist's strong counterattack to powerless acceptance, it's very interesting.
What is eye-catching is that the author chose to first describe in detail the plot of the male protagonist being focused by the original heroine, and then write about the current heroine's time travel. The advantage of this is that it allows readers to feel involved and better understand the hero's fears.
But the disadvantages are also obvious. The original heroine Su Jin is extensively described, and this character is described as crazy, strategic, and full of personal charm. And the dark and paranoid torment between you and the male protagonist is really touching.
So when the current heroine comes in, it is difficult for readers to get into her perspective at once, and I think her character is a bit thin at the moment. I can only feel that she is kind, and then she disappears.
Every time I switch from Su Jin's perspective to the current heroine's perspective, it's like switching from Fast and Furious to Baby Bus. And from time to time, she pulls and steps on the original heroine whom I have a crush on, it feels like. Fire.
But I still like this book very much. I hope that the plot will unfold later and the heroine can have her own highlight moment, and have more suspicion and friction with the hero like in the introduction😋Distorted EmotionsModoModo
I like the lively Su Jin in the front. After the heroine wore it, it seemed a bit too gentle and no fun, so I commented [awkward laugh]
Can the author make Su Jin's personality split for a while? I think it is really easy for the male protagonist to change his attitude towards the female protagonist. This is also because after rebirth and despair, a little kindness towards the female protagonist will be like a dead tree. Because the author describes the character of Su Jin too carefully. The above are some of my thoughts after reading the author's article. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on.
If possible, that... Author, can you please bring Su Jin back? Su Jin's character makes me cute. For the male protagonist, love and hate both come from the same person. It's so cute [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
But if you deviate from Da Da's writing ideas, then just write according to the author Da Da's ideas. No matter what happens next, I also want to thank Da Da for creating the character Su Jin that I like very much. Her character is imperfect and very bad, but also very real. Because the author Da Da takes the character seriously, I like this imperfect character. Of course, I have my own selfish reasons for wanting Su Jin to come back. I prefer the emotional and the first time in time.
Hahahaha, it comes from my feelings
I hope that the follow-up will not turn into a sweet story. I hope that the female protagonist will be stronger or stronger. It does not mean that she is only good to the male protagonist from the beginning, but gradually. I hope I won't become a woman just by writing, the only kind that treats men well, very, very well, the kind that suddenly changes from sadistic to sweet.
The front is very good, don't change people, it will not look good if you change people.
The second book review I read is about Su Jin, Su Qingyuan, and the reader's heart. The first review seems to have been deleted.
When I first followed the update, I thought this book was about a story about a time traveler who rescues the male protagonist after a villainous woman is replaced. It was only after the second play that I realized that what I really cared about was the replaced Su Jin from beginning to end. She is not a good person, and there is nothing to blame for what she did to Lu Zhiyan. But her charm lies in the fact that she doesn't need to be whitewashed, and it's hard to explain why she looks good. After Su Qingyuan came in, the whole aura of the book changed. She is gentle, feels sorry for the male protagonist, and wants redemption, but her "I want to get better" attitude seems awkward. It's not because she's not good, it's because she thinks too well, and it's like she's correcting a mistake rather than getting to know a person. When Su Jin does bad things, there is no need to explain. When Su Qingyuan does good things, she always has to foreshadow that she is different. She is always pulling and stepping on her. What are you pulling on? This kind of "I am correcting the mistakes of my previous predecessor" narrative, after reading it for a long time, people can't help but think: What about Su Jin, does she exist just to be corrected? Readers are not fools. Everyone likes Su Jin, not because she is right, but because she has vitality. That kind of calmness about being as bad as possible is so rare in online articles that are full of gentle heroines. Finally, I remember it was said in the book that Su Jin had never loved anyone. The ending was written very hastily, giving me a sense of "a good character must be paired with a male protagonist." The author spent a lot of pen and ink describing Su Jin. No matter how I disliked him in the follow-up, I still liked Su Jin. There are more readers who like him than the female protagonist. Why does a female character have to "belong" to be considered complete? Su Jin's regret was not that she was never with Lu Zhiyan, but that she was replaced before she could be herself. The ending later turned out to be very sloppy.
The second brush is over. I still like Su Jin. Welcome Ai Nanpo to come and have sex with me [laughing]
Does a successful character have to have ownership? With the hero? It's better to have the female protagonist locked up with the male protagonist, Su Jin, give it to me [snickering] My own selfish desire is to let Su Jin unbind from the male protagonist. When the author didn't change the ending to soul fusion with the male protagonist, I fell in love with Su Jin [snickering] [smirking] [smirking]
After watching it for a while, the identity and behavior of the original heroine were quite interesting, but this mainly talks about what happened after the new heroine arrived. The previous chapters felt a bit too much and cumbersome, which made it a bit boring to watch. The main reason was that I wanted to see the male protagonist after he was reborn, but I was afraid that skipping chapters would lead to missing parts.
I like evil girls, big brother
Not bad, looking forward to the next one
It looks good. I like it very much.
I like Su Jin in the later period and the gentle heroine [shy]
Good-looking, good-looking, fairy product
Looks good but updates too slowly
It's okay, but the contrast between the heroine's front and back is too great, and there's an obvious sense of fragmentation [what]
Extremely perfect! Delicious😋More updates from teacher
I clicked into this book last night when I was bored. I was attracted by the evil female character in the introduction from the beginning. I finally caught up with it this morning. Let me tell you my thoughts after reading it. I feel that the character design of the original protagonist "Su Jin" is really interesting (I like the evil female character very much, very bad but very lovable, and she is always in a superior state). I liked it before, but after the heroine replaced the original heroine, I don't like it very much, because I feel that the heroine is no longer in a superior state, and I don't understand why the heroine is so good to the male protagonist (because the female protagonist does not know that the male protagonist is reborn, if If you are afraid of repeating the tragic ending of the original protagonist, just don't do what the original protagonist did to the male protagonist. If you stay away from the male protagonist and save the life of the male protagonist's adoptive mother, the male protagonist will not have murderous intentions towards the female protagonist. But it feels like the female protagonist has done a lot of unnecessary things, and the heroine does not need to maintain the character and behavior of the original protagonist?) This novel is very interesting, and the writing feels OK, but I don't like the change in behavior after the replacement. Sometimes I really want to see the story of the male protagonist obeying the original master after being reborn. I think it will be very interesting [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] But it is still being serialized. I hope the subsequent plot will be better and I will continue to follow it.
Author, please stop making trouble, I can accept the rewrite [crying], please don't destroy Su Jin, okay? I want to delete it but I can't bear to delete it. I feel that the last few pictures have tarnished the first 40 chapters. I'm not here to see Ai Nan. Goodbye, unless Su Jin comes back (the leading heroine in my mind)
A very unique book. The pull and constant threats and resistance between the original female protagonist and the male protagonist in the early stage are really tense. The characters are very distinct and the setting is also very novel. Whether it's Su Jin's constant pressure on the male protagonist, or the male protagonist's strong counterattack to powerless acceptance, it's very interesting. What is eye-catching is that the author chose to first describe in detail the plot of the male protagonist being focused by the original heroine, and then write about the current heroine's time travel. The advantage of this is that it allows readers to feel involved and better understand the hero's fears. But the disadvantages are also obvious. The original heroine Su Jin is extensively described, and this character is described as crazy, strategic, and full of personal charm. And the dark and paranoid torment between you and the male protagonist is really touching. So when the current heroine comes in, it is difficult for readers to get into her perspective at once, and I think her character is a bit thin at the moment. I can only feel that she is kind, and then she disappears. Every time I switch from Su Jin's perspective to the current heroine's perspective, it's like switching from Fast and Furious to Baby Bus. And from time to time, she pulls and steps on the original heroine whom I have a crush on, it feels like. Fire. But I still like this book very much. I hope that the plot will unfold later and the heroine can have her own highlight moment, and have more suspicion and friction with the hero like in the introduction😋Distorted EmotionsModoModo
I like the lively Su Jin in the front. After the heroine wore it, it seemed a bit too gentle and no fun, so I commented [awkward laugh]
Can the author make Su Jin's personality split for a while? I think it is really easy for the male protagonist to change his attitude towards the female protagonist. This is also because after rebirth and despair, a little kindness towards the female protagonist will be like a dead tree. Because the author describes the character of Su Jin too carefully. The above are some of my thoughts after reading the author's article. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on. If possible, that... Author, can you please bring Su Jin back? Su Jin's character makes me cute. For the male protagonist, love and hate both come from the same person. It's so cute [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] But if you deviate from Da Da's writing ideas, then just write according to the author Da Da's ideas. No matter what happens next, I also want to thank Da Da for creating the character Su Jin that I like very much. Her character is imperfect and very bad, but also very real. Because the author Da Da takes the character seriously, I like this imperfect character. Of course, I have my own selfish reasons for wanting Su Jin to come back. I prefer the emotional and the first time in time. Hahahaha, it comes from my feelings
I hope that the follow-up will not turn into a sweet story. I hope that the female protagonist will be stronger or stronger. It does not mean that she is only good to the male protagonist from the beginning, but gradually. I hope I won't become a woman just by writing, the only kind that treats men well, very, very well, the kind that suddenly changes from sadistic to sweet.
The front is very good, don't change people, it will not look good if you change people.
The second book review I read is about Su Jin, Su Qingyuan, and the reader's heart. The first review seems to have been deleted. When I first followed the update, I thought this book was about a story about a time traveler who rescues the male protagonist after a villainous woman is replaced. It was only after the second play that I realized that what I really cared about was the replaced Su Jin from beginning to end. She is not a good person, and there is nothing to blame for what she did to Lu Zhiyan. But her charm lies in the fact that she doesn't need to be whitewashed, and it's hard to explain why she looks good. After Su Qingyuan came in, the whole aura of the book changed. She is gentle, feels sorry for the male protagonist, and wants redemption, but her "I want to get better" attitude seems awkward. It's not because she's not good, it's because she thinks too well, and it's like she's correcting a mistake rather than getting to know a person. When Su Jin does bad things, there is no need to explain. When Su Qingyuan does good things, she always has to foreshadow that she is different. She is always pulling and stepping on her. What are you pulling on? This kind of "I am correcting the mistakes of my previous predecessor" narrative, after reading it for a long time, people can't help but think: What about Su Jin, does she exist just to be corrected? Readers are not fools. Everyone likes Su Jin, not because she is right, but because she has vitality. That kind of calmness about being as bad as possible is so rare in online articles that are full of gentle heroines. Finally, I remember it was said in the book that Su Jin had never loved anyone. The ending was written very hastily, giving me a sense of "a good character must be paired with a male protagonist." The author spent a lot of pen and ink describing Su Jin. No matter how I disliked him in the follow-up, I still liked Su Jin. There are more readers who like him than the female protagonist. Why does a female character have to "belong" to be considered complete? Su Jin's regret was not that she was never with Lu Zhiyan, but that she was replaced before she could be herself. The ending later turned out to be very sloppy. The second brush is over. I still like Su Jin. Welcome Ai Nanpo to come and have sex with me [laughing] Does a successful character have to have ownership? With the hero? It's better to have the female protagonist locked up with the male protagonist, Su Jin, give it to me [snickering] My own selfish desire is to let Su Jin unbind from the male protagonist. When the author didn't change the ending to soul fusion with the male protagonist, I fell in love with Su Jin [snickering] [smirking] [smirking]
After watching it for a while, the identity and behavior of the original heroine were quite interesting, but this mainly talks about what happened after the new heroine arrived. The previous chapters felt a bit too much and cumbersome, which made it a bit boring to watch. The main reason was that I wanted to see the male protagonist after he was reborn, but I was afraid that skipping chapters would lead to missing parts.
I like evil girls, big brother
Not bad, looking forward to the next one
It looks good. I like it very much.
I like Su Jin in the later period and the gentle heroine [shy]
Good-looking, good-looking, fairy product
Looks good but updates too slowly
It's okay, but the contrast between the heroine's front and back is too great, and there's an obvious sense of fragmentation [what]
Extremely perfect! Delicious😋More updates from teacher