Pokemon: What Do You Mean My Team Is Two-Faced?

The writing is quite good, and the writing style is also quite good, but the description is a bit repetitive. I feel that the author is not very clear about when to be detailed and when to write in abbreviation 🤔. But the writing style is still very good 😄

There are no big problems at the moment, but there are many small ones. Take the first battle of the Silver Assessment as an example. In the second battle of Round Shark VS Dajia and Bibi Bird, Sword Dance was used three times in total, but in the description of the duel with Bibi Bird, Sword Dance was only used twice. Is it possible that all the buffs will be removed in the middle of this series of battles before continuing?

Well, the daily writing is okay, even the fighting stuff is okay, but it's not too amazing. It can be regarded as a readable article. I hope the author will work harder and don't ask me to give negative reviews. Of course, sometimes I give negative reviews just to increase the score. Books are still okay. When you are an author, this is not a game. This is a novel you write. It is based on your own feelings. You should not write too rigidly or too game-like. You just upgrade it by two levels normally. How do you know that the world does not dare to write like this after you upgrade two levels? Even anime would not dare to write like this. The messy daily life is very well written, but there are some places that should not be written like this. It is not that personal, it just has no emotion. I know that this book must be written by AI and you, but it is also a bit rigid. In fact, the most interesting thing about this book is the Pokémon you chose. I kind of like them all, and I can accept them in daily life. Of course, if you write some Pokémon that I personally don't like, I may not read them, because they are not particularly exciting. Apart from daily life, there are not many. The emotions are too game-like. Even an insect-catching boy can be game-like. People have real feelings. What you write is about the world. Or have you discovered it? None of your reviews say that all five stars are four stars, which is equivalent to recognizing you, but it is not that wonderful. But I am the only one who writes like this. If I say this, that is my problem, but it is the same for all authors.

It's well written, and overall it's very comfortable to read. The interaction between the protagonist and Pokémon is really well written. I read the previous book next door that I thought was so good. And the Pokémon of the protagonist are all in my xp. Come on, author, take good care of you.

Much better than those articles that only upgrade! 🥰🥰[Admiration]

It's okay, but Duan Yu's role is a bit too much, right?

The writing is very detailed and warm (author, I found that you like to write "what is not what is" 🧐)

It looks great, I hope I can keep it up.

Can the Fire and Nether Elements choose Blue Flame Blade Ghost?

Come on, well written