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The writing is quite good. The plot is a bit classic. Before you even wrote it, I already guessed that you would be looked down upon and discriminated against. This thing is so bad when it comes to football, basketball, badminton, etc., And then performs and laughs off all the worries, but the writing is good.

The protagonist is hardworking enough, and the author is also very passionate about writing it. Even if he doesn't have CP for the time being, he can focus on training and competing, so it's a good review! I just happened to read a football article to catch up with the excitement of the World Cup. I didn't expect that the rating is not high but the content is quite good. I was surprised to see that the author could not return to China and directly joined Spanish citizenship. It turns out that everyone now likes this way of writing hahhh don't mix it up The bad things about the country 🦶 are indeed quite pure and refreshing, but I think this country 🦶 will be a clown villain for a long time. Don't write any more and be more careful, otherwise I'm afraid that the author's article will be too direct. Where can I find another ⚽️ article that suits my taste?

So far, this is an excellent football article. It can be seen that the growth brought about by the protagonist's own efforts is not entirely dependent on cheats. Up to now, the protagonist has not had a relationship with a woman and focused on playing football, which is more worthy of praise. At least I came to watch the protagonist play football, not to watch the humanoid Teddy go around messing around with women.

Not bad, the character of the protagonist is quite rare, he has a cold and vicious tongue. The author's writing of the interaction between the protagonist and the players is really interesting. I like it very much. Moreover, there are very few or even no scenes of beautiful women. I like it.

I can see the progress of the protagonist. The fierce competition is interspersed with the gentle warmth between family members. So far, it seems that this speed is quite good. For the time being, it seems that I am not satisfied with the stallion story.

It's pretty cool, but I think the main character is so aloof [face covering]. Next time you win a game, would you like to add some action or something to celebrate? [Eat melon] Like Cristiano Ronaldo's su~ or something like that. It feels like it will be more engaging and more real. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] There is no heroine, which is very satisfying [Blow kiss]

[Laughs] It was reported by the National Football Team and the Football Association. I saw the report letter.

Super nice Every improvement in ability is the result of hard training - not entirely given by the system, but a perfect combination of training and system. The "Weapon of the Law of Cause and Effect" is even more exciting. When you lose your memory and find your relatives, you suddenly add a grandfather of Spanish descent. Plus the free kick debut, Backup goalkeeper: He knows this damn script too well. In the past few days at Atletico Madrid's training ground, it was also 35 meters. He was treated by No. 44 As a moving target without dignity. Those hundreds of desperate saves made Robles deeply suspect that there was a guidance chip hidden in Bai Yao's sneakers. Finally I am not the only one who is a moving target.

There is a huge gap among those who write football novels. The last novel I read also started in Segunda B, with a transfer fee of more than 100 million euros. This one also started in Segunda B, with the same winning streak, and not many people paid attention to it. Some people even thought it was an amateur game [face covering]. The same thing, some people think it is worth thousands of dollars, and some think it is just a piece of cake. Isn't it more reasonable to combine it? There is also a characteristic of the author of this book. I know he is wrong and your suggestions are very good, but I just won't change it. He is very characterful. Come on. When I turned 18, people in La Liga were being criticized. I didn't expect that, even as a substitute, an 18-year-old in La Liga would be very awesome [face covering] Brother, your writing is so depressing, maybe the proportion of AI is smaller.

I have seen the latest chapter, so far it is good, the protagonist is also getting stronger through training step by step, the narrative is mediocre, it is quite interesting, more updates would be better [I understand][Please update][Please update][Please update][Please update]

I have read some football articles about passing the ball 99%, but success comes too quickly and the sense of competition is lost. Although it seems a bit strange to me, a layman like me, that there are many passes and no shots (it feels like these two are inseparable, and the goal is also a point), and there is a slight suspicion that the growth line is deliberately stretched to delay the development of the plot, but it can be regarded as careful in the same category. Five stars does not necessarily mean five-star level, but I think it is worth a look

It's okay so far, but there are flaws and the author has made corrections. However, the author may have a headache as to whether to join the national football team. Some people like to join, while others like to leave. [Laughing evilly] It depends on how it is arranged. I personally want to get in, but some people have to pay a price, like "getting in." After all, I always watch playing for other countries in the World Cup, which is a bit awkward mentally.

This book is generally good. The biggest drawback is that I changed my nationality to play football. Chinese football is not good, but this is not a reason to abandon the motherland. If you give up your nationality just to play football, it can only be said that there is something wrong with your core values.

Although some of the plots are classic, they are actually the most realistic inner portrayals of the characters. You may find it annoying when you watch it, but in fact, when you look back and think about it, this portrayal is very real. The protagonist has his own growth process, and he does not become the strongest all at once. Although it is sometimes frustrating, after becoming stronger, it will be very satisfying to look back at the journey. The characterization is okay, although it is not particularly detailed, but the general appearance is there. The atmosphere of Team B is well described, and overall the flaws are not concealed. There is no heroine, I really want to blow this point. I hope it can continue and don't suddenly show up from behind. This is how a passionate novel should be!

The previous content is not very good. I feel like I haven't found the rhythm. The protagonist is a bit hard pressed in the early stage, but if you think about it carefully, it doesn't feel like it's like pretending to be a pig eating feed and counterattack. As you go on, the rhythm of the plot becomes more and more stable and better. The key point is that the plot does not deviate from the main line, which deserves a high score.

Not even yet. I am a novice when it comes to football, and this is my first time reading a football-related book, but it is unexpectedly interesting! There is no heroine, but the tacit understanding and friendship between teammates is also gradual. Some of the dialogues in particular are really interesting and funny. I especially like to watch the interactions between teammates. In addition, I also like the description of family affection, it is quite humane! The most important thing is that I really like the character of the protagonist, he is very stable, his energy is very high-spirited, and he plays it naturally! Overall, this book is quite suitable for people like me who just want to read about football, teammates, and careers. Come on, the author——

Why is there no 4:5? [Thinking], the character design of the protagonist is very good, I like this kind of protagonist very much, and the system is not too obtrusive. Some plots are very repetitive, so I lose points a little bit. Then I don't like the atmosphere of the comment area very much. Well, the descriptions and everything are quite graphic, and even people who don't know football can understand it. Keep up the good work, Bai Yao's character is really super cute.

So far, I have seen the protagonist enter the Atletico Madrid first team and start training. Generally speaking, I like to read what the author writes, but the description on the field is not very good. There is also the training match with Atletico Madrid's first team when I first came here. The description on the field is really problematic. Can the goalkeeper guard two goals alone? Appeared twice. Secondly, there is too little description on the court during the game. Here I can recommend the author to watch "The National Youth Kicked Me Away, I Awakened Adriano". The plot of this game is very good. I suggest the author study it. There is also the mentality of the protagonist. He was also caught in the past life. In this life, he is always nervous and is a bit discouraged. The most important thing is that the protagonist currently relies on the system. As long as you train hard and improve your physical fitness, then you will be the one to choose the team, not others. Don't worry about others coming to watch a game. I felt weird when I saw that. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better and describe the plot of the game better. Come on

I didn't pay much attention to the Spanish teams, and I don't know how strong the team was at that time. At first, I said that this team was very strong, but then every game after that was blown away. If it weren't for the protagonist, I probably wouldn't have won a game. I don't know if this team is really good, or if they are deliberately suppressing their ability. Moreover, after being the "savior" in so many games, his status in the team is still not high, so he can barely gain a foothold.

Damn it, when the title of the book saw Cristiano Ronaldo, he only saw it in Chapter 133

I planned to raise him, but why did he have to pay for it when I ran out of food [face covering]

May I give you a five-star encouragement~ It didn't look good in front of me and I felt a bit depressed. Although I understand that the male protagonist is terrible except for passing the ball, this is a novel after all. In recent chapters, the male protagonist has signed an agent and I feel much more comfortable. I hope to add more life/entertainment/social media in the future to add more fun (I didn't mention adding a female protagonist)

It's quite good in a growth-oriented football article. The author writes like this, step by step, plug-in gives you opportunities, and your own efforts are the foundation! As the protagonist grows up, readers will also be immersed in it, which is great! Just write slowly like this and give full play to your strengths. If you are not good at social networking, try less and just integrate it bit by bit! Come on!

This football book has a large system scale and is a growth protection system. It is not ostentatious and not too winding. It has brotherhood and a little childlike heart❤️. It does not have too much individual heroism but some team spirit. It is suitable for long-term follow-up.

It feels okay, but the way foreigners speak is too Chinese, without the feeling of foreigners, and it looks a bit weird. That causal weapon that forces Spanish citizenship is so embarrassing that I can't stand it anymore.

Please, stop doing that nonsense with the Moji National Team.

When I was reborn, I practiced football with the help of plug-ins [laughing evilly] (I was afraid that I would not be able to kick the ball, so I gave him a guaranteed full-level pass. The others started practicing with the help of plug-ins. I will see how the author writes the plot later. I hope it is not a robot [face covering])

It's very beautiful. Who reported it? It's a prison sentence. Can you still come back? [Awkward laugh]

I love this kind of non-stop training, training, training. Competitive sports are all about sweat and sweat. There is a system in place, and the golden finger is huge. It would be too boring if biu had one skill at a time and another skill at the next time. The correct way to write sports articles is to constantly practice and master various skills! I heard that this article has no cp. It's so perfect, a love story in a dream.

The book feels good, but it would be better if it added some side descriptions, such as assists and goals, net worth, family, friendship, love, or team points. These can be written briefly but not without them. Simply playing football in chapters doesn't feel good.