After Gaining Unlimited Destiny, He Became Da Luo from the Third Level of Qi Refining.

More than 100 chapters have passed. The protagonist has been well portrayed. He is cautious and modest. He understands human nature, values ​​​​love and is not ostentatious. He has brains and no red flags. He is an ordinary person with normal IQ, hard work and motivation. It is very good. It is rare. I hope it will not go astray in the future, and the emotional processing can be more delicate and vivid. Come on!

The plot develops coherently, and all living beings in the world are depicted in detail. I am addicted to the drama.

Come on, come on, come on

It has novel ideas, intelligence, plot, and structure, which is very good.

Not bad, not 5.5

The really exciting thing is after one hundred chapters

The characterization is vivid and the talismans are profound.

Your writing is okay, keep up the good work

Not bad, come on, come on, come on

The plot is meticulous and reasonable

It's interesting, I'll watch it first

It's quite satisfactory.

Although it's a bit poisonous, it's not like five o'clock or so.

Just take your time, it doesn't matter. The question is, is your world of immortality a bit small?

This article is bound to be a hit, the story structure is already better than Zhu Xian

The plot is smooth, the characters are rich, the overall storyline is reasonable, and the links are connected. Come on

The plot is clear and smooth, and the sentences are clear and uplifting, reflecting the ups and downs of self-cultivation. Top,,,,,

The writing is good, the plot is brilliant, and it is different from the antagonists in other books.

Very good, the plot is not draggy, not bad, but there are too few chapters

Alas, there are just too few and not enough to watch [smiles]

The protagonist comes from a humble background and reaches the highest level step by step, which is admirable. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]