Bleach: From the Start, I Became Yamamoto's Disciple

Private settings are acceptable, but since the IP of Death has been chosen, the private settings should also be in line with the original IP. However, there are many conflicts in timelines and character settings that are very uncomfortable to watch. It feels like the author is very unfamiliar with the original drama. Moreover, the setting that the swastika needs to pay a price is not very good. The swastika itself is the final form of a Zanpakutō.

Dude, did you write this with AI? The timeline is quite confusing. First of all, six of the first captains of Team Thirteen, except Yamamoto, went to the Soul King Palace, and Team Thirteen was only established. After they were established, Ukitake and Kyōraku came to become apprentices. After becoming apprentices, the Quincy attacked Soul Society. Shouldn't it be Yuha who led the Quincy to attack Soul Society for the first time? After Team Thirteen began to change, shouldn't it be one or two hundred years after that that Ukitake and Kyōraku appeared and became apprentices to Yamamoto?

The author has a deep understanding of the world view of Death, the protagonist's growth line is reasonable, there are emotions and new plots, the pace is moderate, the fighting and daily life are well interspersed, the content is exciting, I am sure to follow it!

The setting of Yamamoto's master and apprentice is good, the plot is not broken, the combat power is reasonable, and the writing is very careful!

Flat, but comfortable to look at

Basically, few settings are correct. It is clearly a timeline thousands of years ago. The first generation of Division 13 did not have a division setting. It was a purely violent organization. Sister Hua and Old Man Yamamoto were just companions, without the setting of teachers. The Zero Squadron is gradually increasing, just like when Hikifune Kiryu was promoted to the Zero Squadron, Kyoraku Shunsui was already the captain. I don't know the various settings and backgrounds of the original work, so I'm just writing them down here.

How should I put it? There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. The author's writing style is good but the timeline is a bit messy. First of all, when Kyōraku and Ukitake didn't become apprentices to Mr. Yama, Unohana should still be called Unohana Yasen-ryu, not the later ones. Retsu, secondly, the five members of Soul King Palace were not together before the establishment of the Thirteenth Gotei Division. At least Kirin Temple, Hikiha Fune Kiryu and Shutara (not too sure) should not have been there at that time. At the beginning, only the monk and the sword god were in the Zero Division.

The writing is good, the pace is steady, the master and apprentice are well written, it is beautiful, and I highly recommend it with five stars!

AI novel.

There have been too many of them lately, all written in this way.