The Heroine's Filial Devotion Has Gone Awry

The author's writing is not bad, the rhythm of the two-line narrative is very good, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. While writing about the heroine's journey (I said it is rare that the church is not the villain), at the same time he writes about the male protagonist's reconnection on the way to raising his daughter (he met a saintly lady during the trip, with high attack and low defense, she is as strong as a monster, and she can't defeat it with all her strength). The president feels very comfortable [blowing kiss] Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute 🥰

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for the Noxian's outer ring hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! There is still time for Zihan to fight with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, and Li Kui goes to persuade him to make peace. But on the way, he is tempted by foreign persimmons, and strays into the depths of the lotus root. He starts a relationship with Xiao Longnu in the Huanshi Water Pavilion, but is seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma gets angry and goes to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally becomes a generation of Emperor Yan! After thinking about it, the part where Lu Bu and Sun Wukong fought for hundreds of rounds was okay, but the logic of the overall combat power was as confusing as mixing No. 42 Concrete with spaghetti. The length of the screws directly interfered with the output torque of the excavator. The high-energy particle UFOs erupted from the collision of the two sides' ultimate moves, directly exploding the charging equipment of Huaguoshan into nuclear radiation pollution. Xue Baochai's numerical value is seriously over the top. If it weren't for the Noxian guillotine scraped on the outer ring of Nuo's hand and the burst of M4 six-fold scope shooting, Lu Bu would have been killed on the spot. Only Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain, "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang" poked me, perfectly describing the resentment after being hit hard by the three golden cudgels. Foreshadowing is hidden throughout the book, and the description of the fighting scenes is immersive. It is a mixture of various dimensional settings. It is as unorganized as using trigonometric functions to capture the wild winter Yin base. It is really a fly in the ointment, but it is still very good.

It's good to watch, but the biggest problem is that it's too literary and youthful, and the plot actually doesn't advance much, making it a bit tiring to watch... The core is not obvious, the plot is mediocre, cliche, boring to watch, and a pity to abandon.

It's a slow-burning invincible road novel, but I don't like it. I think it's young and procrastinating, but it's well written. It feels like the protagonist is simply completing tasks for the coexistence line of heroes and witches. In terms of emotions, the writing is more gorgeous, but the inner emotional core is very empty. It's very heart-wrenching for me to stop caring about the brave man's luck. The person you care about is very weak. If you want to cross the continent to find you, normal people should be very worried and concerned. The protagonist just throws away the holy sword without caring. When seeing the brave man in danger for the first time, he is very depressed. If there is no nun, he will die. In addition, the first story of the brave man is not well told, the environment is not developed, and the deus ex machina flavor is very strong. It smells like chicken soup and tastes like plain water, but it's really good in Tomato.

The emotions are written very delicately, which is considered to be the best among the books I have read. However, I would like to ask the author, why can the character of the saint rekindle an old relationship with the protagonist, because the saint in the past had unconditional trust in the protagonist? Because the saints in the past were very filial? Or is the protagonist Asasi the male protagonist who doesn't care about the past? It can't be because the saint has been standing still for 10 years and finally knows that the protagonist is right, so she quickly says some innocuous words to admit her mistake, and then the protagonist forgives Asashi for being a saint, and actively puts down the pretense of being a saint and starts chasing the male protagonist. She also makes some rituals of her own volition and stays by his side, right? Oh, I understand, it's because the saint is a tsundere! The arrogant female character's arrogant side doesn't really matter once the arrogant side is written. Here I go, this is my first time writing a comment, I didn't expect anyone to read it. I looked at a few of the replies, and they reminded me. I don't care at all what the male protagonist's character is. The problem of the saint does not mean that the male protagonist can put it down if he does not care. This is a problem that I see from the perspective of a reader. I think the author's willingness to allow the saint to join the male protagonist's "harem" is ultimately based on one word - moral debt, and it is a unilateral moral debt of the male protagonist. I think the author seems to have only seen that the saint's "admission" words are an act of lowering the saint's "status", and this lowering of the "status" is directed at the male protagonist, so the male protagonist has a moral debt to the saint - I have already lowered my "status", you are now You owe me morally, so what I did to you before is wiped out, and you must let me join your "harem" and treat me as well as before, otherwise this moral debt will make you feel guilty, and others will blame you if they know what you owe me. However, I think the moral debt related to the saint's passage has always been a kind of obscenity in female videos. Moral debt is indeed a part of human relationships, but the moral debt of adultery is not. After the saint met the male protagonist for the first time - at least in the text I saw - she did not actually benefit the male protagonist. Of course, you can say that the emotional value is also valuable, but the emotional value during their time together is mutual, and the saint leaving alone is a betrayal of this relationship and a unilateral request from the male protagonist. Objectively, this can be regarded as a debt owed by the saint. And when they met again, the saint was still asking for things from the hero, and "repaying" the hero in her own way. She didn't care about the wishes of the hero at all. It could even be said that she was taking advantage of the hero's plain mentality to gain value from the hero. I think this is also the debt of the saint. From a reader's perspective, I came to the conclusion that the saint's behavior has owed the male protagonist a moral debt, but the saint unilaterally announced that I had paid off the male protagonist's debt and made him owe me a debt. It is hard to imagine how the author could reverse the debt relationship between the two people so easily, even using the most outrageous plot, that is, the male protagonist deliberately avoids the saint to let her experience the consequences of his actions; this kind of plot can also make readers look down on the debt relationship between the two to a certain extent. But the author did not write this, and just let the male protagonist accept the binding behavior of the saint. Judging from the existing text, the author seems to regard the male protagonist as some kind of machine that provides unlimited value: every woman is using this machine, trying to extract the value she wants from the machine. If the male protagonist is really a machine, this kind of behavior is normal, but the male protagonist is a living person, and no matter how ordinary he is, it cannot erase his identity as a human being. As a human reader, I will naturally look at the heroines as a human being and evaluate their behavior. I think it is unacceptable for the saint's behavior to be forgiven in this way. In fact, it is eroding the existence of the male protagonist as a social animal and as a human being. Damn, I have written so much without saying anything. I am just expressing my own thoughts. I hope someone can evaluate this supplementary review and analyze this novel in a serious manner.

It's a good novel with a good narrative feel, and the emotions and characters are very delicately portrayed. Then Miss Saint knew that it was too strong. During the trip, I met the Saint Lady by chance. Her attack and defense were as strong as a monster and she couldn't defeat her despite all her efforts😋. Delicious and love to eat.

So sweet, so warm, so healing [Adoration] Miss Saint is so good at it, she is still c after being banned, there is no doubt about the super big cup! The little witch is so cute and cute, and she recently occupied the cover and became a poster girl. She is a future wife! The familiar little snowman is also cute! And little angels! The baby is also a soft and glutinous little dessert! Long Luo is also laying the groundwork, looking forward to it! Er, are there any missing ones? It should be gone, right? What do you think, Miss Brave Man [Eating Melon] Although yandere is quite interesting, I still hope there will be a happy ending, nya. The protagonist finally remembered to write a letter to Miss Brave. This wave of braves will go to Oita nya! Miss Brave: Jungle ing So does my stud little witch understand? [Shy]

Delicious😋, a very good western fantasy daily travel article, two-line writing, fortunately the author's writing style is online, how can I put it, the protagonist is at full level and powerful, there is no aggrieved plot, there are not many fights, the whole article is a daily article, the first copy of the hero seems a bit boring, but I am looking forward to the Shura Field in the future, the little witch is completely girlless, cute meow! Miss Saint is very mechanically weird, with high attack and defense and a little shyness, she is invincible! It's a pity that there are too few updates now. The author should update it soon!

It's a very good book. The plot is light and day-to-day. Although it has multiple female protagonists, the emotional line is not bad. Currently, it only has the hero line, which is uncomfortable after all (but the author said that the hero line will be strengthened soon). All in all, I still like this style of book.

Good work, good daily writing. The names of the two heroines are very similar, and it is easy to make mistakes when switching between the two lines in the early stage. I always feel like I have read the incident in Maple Leaf Town in a certain novel.