Miss Brave's Filial Piety Has Gone Sour

The author's writing is not bad, the rhythm of the two-line narrative is very good, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. While writing about the heroine's journey (I said it is rare that the church is not the villain), at the same time he writes about the male protagonist's reconnection on the way to raising his daughter (he met a saintly lady during the trip, with high attack and low defense, she is as strong as a monster, and she can't defeat it with all her strength). The president feels very comfortable [blowing kiss] Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute🥰Livia? So cute 🥰

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for the Noxian's outer ring hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! There is still time for Zihan to fight with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, and Li Kui goes to persuade him to make peace. But on the way, he is tempted by foreign persimmons, and strays into the depths of the lotus root. He starts a relationship with Xiao Longnu in the Huanshi Water Pavilion, but is seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma gets angry and goes to another world to conquer the Delta with Doraemon, and finally becomes a generation of Emperor Yan! After thinking about it, the part where Lu Bu and Sun Wukong fought for hundreds of rounds was okay, but the logic of the overall combat power was as confusing as mixing No. 42 Concrete with spaghetti. The length of the screws directly interfered with the output torque of the excavator. The high-energy particle UFOs erupted from the collision of the two sides' ultimate moves, directly exploding the charging equipment of Huaguoshan into nuclear radiation pollution. Xue Baochai's numerical value is seriously over the top. If it weren't for the Noxian guillotine scraped on the outer ring of Nuo's hand and the burst of M4 six-fold scope shooting, Lu Bu would have been killed on the spot. Only Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain, "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang" poked me, perfectly describing the resentment after being hit hard by the three golden cudgels. Foreshadowing is hidden throughout the book, and the description of the fighting scenes is immersive. It is a mixture of various dimensional settings. It is as unorganized as using trigonometric functions to capture the wild winter Yin base. It is really a fly in the ointment, but it is still very good.

It's a good novel with a good narrative feel, and the emotions and characters are very delicately portrayed. Then Miss Saint knew that it was too strong. During the trip, I met the Saint Lady by chance. Her attack and defense were as strong as a monster and she couldn't defeat her despite all her efforts😋. Delicious and love to eat.

It's a slow-burning invincible road novel, but I don't like it. I think it's young and procrastinating, but it's well written. It feels like the protagonist is simply completing tasks for the coexistence line of heroes and witches. In terms of emotions, the writing is more gorgeous, but the inner emotional core is very empty. It's very heart-wrenching for me to stop caring about the brave man's luck. The person you care about is very weak. If you want to cross the continent to find you, normal people should be very worried and concerned. The protagonist just throws away the holy sword without caring. When seeing the brave man in danger for the first time, he is very depressed. If there is no nun, he will die. In addition, the first story of the brave man is not well told, the environment is not developed, and the deus ex machina flavor is very strong. It smells like chicken soup and tastes like plain water, but it's really good in Tomato.

The emotions are written very delicately, which is considered to be the best among the books I have read. However, I would like to ask the author, why can the character of the saint rekindle an old relationship with the protagonist, because the saint in the past had unconditional trust in the protagonist? Because the saints in the past were very filial? Or is the protagonist Asasi the male protagonist who doesn't care about the past? It can't be because the saint has been standing still for 10 years and finally knows that the protagonist is right, so she quickly says some innocuous words to admit her mistake, and then the protagonist forgives Asashi for being a saint, and actively puts down the pretense of being a saint and starts chasing the male protagonist. She also makes some rituals of her own volition and stays by the male protagonist's side, right? Oh, I understand, it's because the saint is a tsundere! The arrogant female character's arrogant side doesn't really matter once the arrogant side is written.

Good work, good daily writing. The names of the two heroines are very similar, and it is easy to make mistakes when switching between the two lines in the early stage. I always feel like I have read the incident in Maple Leaf Town in a certain novel.

It's good to watch, but the biggest problem is that it's too literary and youthful, and the plot actually doesn't advance much, making it a bit tiring to watch... The core is not obvious, the plot is mediocre, cliche, boring to watch, and a pity to abandon.

So sweet, so warm, so healing [Adoration] Miss Saint is so good at it, she is still c after being banned, there is no doubt about the super big cup! The little witch is so cute and cute, and she recently occupied the cover and became a poster girl. She is a future wife! The familiar little snowman is also cute! And little angels! The baby is also a soft and glutinous little dessert! Long Luo is also laying the groundwork, looking forward to it! Er, are there any missing ones? It should be gone, right? What do you think, Miss Brave Man [Eating Melon] Although yandere is quite interesting, I still hope there will be a happy ending, nya. The protagonist finally remembered to write a letter to Miss Brave. This wave of braves will go to Oita nya! Miss Brave: Jungle ing So does my stud little witch understand? [Shy]

A two-line narrative travel novel with excellent three-dimensional character creation. Overall it feels very comfortable. Come on, big brother who writes sweet articles! (PS: It must be a harem ending! You must pay your old debts!)

The author's writing is super good! ! There's no clutter like that, and the characters that have appeared so far are all great! ! ! If you like warm daily western fantasy, you really can't miss this book [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] The author must write it down. Every character is very cute, but when will the gravity show? I want to watch the gravity field battle [get it]

The writing style is delicate and smooth. It is considered a good Western fantasy novel. It is also a kind of two-line narrative. It is rare in Western persimmons, so it is a treasure. The emotional portrayal is quite good. I would like to suggest that in some places, such as the operation of a ruins, it does not need to be so complicated. It will be more complicated and affect the perception. There are some places like this that are a little redundant. This is just a personal opinion, but it does not affect the content of the text. This low score is also a characteristic of Western Persimmons. I hope the author can persevere and not rush off. I really like this book [star]

Delicious😋, a very good western fantasy daily travel article, two-line writing, fortunately the author's writing style is online, how can I put it, the protagonist is at full level and powerful, there is no aggrieved plot, there are not many fights, the whole article is a daily article, the first copy of the hero seems a bit boring, but I am looking forward to the Shura Field in the future, the little witch is completely girlless, cute meow! Miss Saint is very mechanically weird, with high attack and defense and a little shyness, she is invincible! It's a pity that there are too few updates now. The author should update it soon!

Ram. It is a story of love, growth, farewell and reunion. The writing and writing rhythm is good, and the dual-line narrative is well controlled. It is fresh and will not make you bored after watching it for a long time. The description of psychology and emotions is very penetrating, and the characters are brought to life. I suspect that the author has practiced writing, unlike a newcomer who is writing for the first time. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

It's so delicious. The heroines in both lines are well described, and Livia is cute. After that, Fina could have more plot, but it's still my god~🤤🤤

The writing style is very healing, very delicate, and beautiful, with a kind of elegant sweetness, and the character creation is also very good. The summary of the saint must have values ​​and mechanisms, and it is the sweetest saint part in Stud [laughs]

Keywords: multiple heroines, daily oriented, relaxed, delicate emotions The writing is very delicate, the characters are three-dimensional and complete, the male protagonist is invincible, and the daily writing is very comfortable and interesting. Good-looking meow, I like the author, Fina is cute, Little Gray is cute, Xinghui and Elf are coming soon, meow, as for Miss Brave? Miss Brave is still farming, let us wish Miss Brave happiness

A plain and gentle journey of development. The emotional growth of the characters is well described. Although there are not many of them now, the heroes or they may turn dark in the future, but from my heart, I don't want them to become similar to yandere, because I feel that they are all very good people, so I don't want them to hurt each other, but it is normal to have a Shura field in the future, but I don't want to be too intrigued, because it will be more tiring to watch. Finally, cheers for the author [Like]

The character of the protagonist makes me very fond of it. I have watched too many plots of pretending to be a slap in the face and growing up. This setting of being a demigod at the beginning is very interesting. I feel that the effect will be better after watching it for a while. Unfortunately, this interesting type and setting is a bit hard to find.

It is a Western fantasy novel with excellent writing style. It is very comfortable to write. It finally made me find gold. There is no obvious poisonous point. I have to say that it is a bit poisonous for me personally. It is because it is a minefield that many players in the game world have played. I personally don't like this way of handling it.

There is no doubt that in the daily development series, the character creation is relatively full. The character of the protagonist is very appetizing. He is more indifferent and gentle, not the kind of passionate warrior. Some people say that the protagonist is a eunuch. It can only be said that people are different. I think it is a kind of responsibility (if it takes too long, I will come back and change it). I highly recommend it. If you like Riqing, you can try it [Blow Kiss]

The lack of fighting plot and the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine hit the airwaves hard. The slow narrative rhythm also touches the heartstrings. Unfortunately, there are too few chapters and the world view has not been fully developed. The follow-up potential is huge. I give it a 5⭐ By the way, is the author considering writing a prequel, or is he planning to integrate the story before the Witch's Line into the subsequent plot?

The slow pace is very warm, plain and attractive

It looks good, Xiao Hui is very cute, the Saint is a super model, and the Hero is also very sensible, but the more I look at the Hero, the more I feel a little pitiful [face covering]

A warm and heartwarming travel story about a different world, with a dual-line narrative and multiple female protagonists. The emotions are very real. It is not a deliberately created template. It made me twist in bed. The writing is excellent and is unquestionable gold in tomatoes. I personally think this book should get a score of 9 if it continues to be written. It's just that there are too few updates now, and I can't catch up with the big army. Update soon! [Turn one's lips][Eat melon][Shy]

This novel is super beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. I almost don't want to be a newbie. When I read the novel, it gave me the feeling of watching Witch Journey and Fulian. Moreover, the dual-line narrative is very well written and there is no sense of separation. The author would like to improve it. It is not enough to read.

This is a Western fantasy open world online under the guise of a yandere theme. It's very interesting to watch. The writing is gray, humorous and heartwarming. The lyrics are appropriate and the characters are very successful. Good luck to the author! One more question Did the brave man ask? 🤓👆 Hasn't it been deleted? 😊😄 I grew my eyes just to see this mouth and teeth! ! !

Seeing so far, I can only say that it is a fairy product Harem novels, harem novels, multiple heroines, multiple heroines But I think it's beautifully written The author also controls it very well. I've read Chapter 70 so far, but I don't know why the rating is only 7.9

There are really few development books of the same type in the western fantasy world. Meow [I'm about to cry]. The other book by Charlotte is pretty good, but it's a pity that it expired later. Meow, there's nothing to break down. Meow, I hope the author of this book, Lolita, has a longer shelf life. Meow, Xiao Hui is really cute. Meow. [Sending my heart]

The rhythm of the dual-line narrative is handled very well, and the whole process is non-toxic. I'm looking forward to seeing Arya and Lorraine meet again. Ps: She is indeed the holy lady who was forced to go offline. I can't think of how she lost at the moment.

Emm, it feels like a well-written novel, which is a gold mine on the Tomato platform. However, the emotional foreshadowing and expression are a bit abrupt (because it is the gameplay of the return of a max-level boss), so it is normal (depending on personal preference), and then it is a bit awkward (just like Tangtang, I feel weird), but everyone has their own preferences for carrots and potatoes. Anyway, I think this book is a good article, and I give the author 5 stars, hehehe.